New SS: Its Hard To Let You Go Part 5, Page 65 UPD

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: V323

Yep I am. Its unbelivable. How MUCH people love HP and Lakshmi kii jodi. And vaise bhi, my friend is EATING my head up here. -.-

Yes do continue! It was such a fun read 🤣 I was like, What the?? 🤣

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Jus too perfect! Boi u had tears in my eyes!! How do u manage to write such a lovely update!! Evetyn was perfect I loved all the scenes n sply d pic nea pool side arnav in white n asmis head on his shoulder side ways hug!! Jus the best to depict a dads love for his daughter now after readin dis I seriously dont want to marry n walk out I cant bear to see the pain in my dads eye! I jus cant!! I mean d feeling is sumtyn which cannot b expressed in words but u did gr8 justice to it buddy! Hatsoff!! Wonderful work!
cheers foor the pm :)
ps hey I browse thru my cell so cant lik d post but I never miss d chance to comment! And show how much I loved it!! :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hahahaha! No, I find it funny too how this SS is supposed to be about Asmara getting married but everyone's more worried and in love with Ashar 🤣

Even I mostly focus on Ashar! I guess thats cos he's just my favorite 😆 Thanks for your comment and congrats on being first 🤣

Ohh !! Now He's my Favorite too 😆 But After 'Arnav' 😆 U know na ? 😉

Oww !! Thank You & My Pleasure 😆

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lazyblues

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

Omg my eyes welld u reading this update spoiling my mascara. I read it in the car goin out . But never the less I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I don't have a real elder brother but I do have a bro "mana hua" he wont elder but we share the same kind of a relationship . The unspoken words are always understood.
AA beautiful father daughter n son father relation was written Aweesomely.
I don't know if my words even make sense now cause I have a feeling in the pit of my stomach that can b described . N a feeling in heart after reading this update n I know the words won't start to describe how beautiful this update was.
At the last whn ashar broke down I was almost crying.
This is the most beautiful relationship in the world a brother sister .luv I for making my Sunday more brightet then it was.
Now whn I met my bro m gona cry. !!

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Sithara ponnarasseri

@sanny-beautiful

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

Brilliant update...
Beautifully written..
Thanks for the pm..😊

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Chandana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

Wonderfull update

Very sweet n cute part,Also very touchy too...Very well written dear.

Loved it to the core...

All the four share such a thick bonding...N love eachother unconditionally...N know eachother very well

Can feel the pain of sending Asmara going away from them...

Continue sooon

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Aspirex

@Aspirex

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Awww you're sooo sweet!! 😳 Next part is updated now! Hope you'll enjoy that one too *fingers crossed* 😃

Hehe Thanks 😳😊

N are you kidding! Enjoyyy...?? I absolutely loved it.! But I guess u already know that given that U had soo much fun writing it. So it's obvious we'll have fun reading it 😊

So I know the comments are gonna get redundant now but not everybody is blessed with ur awesome writing skills😃

So you'll have to make do with the same old "utterly sweet", "heartbreakingly emotional", "cute small small things" 😊

But seriously I just can't imagine Arnav with "poor bones" and without his well toned figure 😃

But he would be sooo cool as a father! And he is ... No need to add the would be... And khushi as a mother and a wife ( not that Arnav is not a good husband cos he is). How amazingly she thinks about every single person eve when she is about to cry.

It was really sweet how u included sooo many novel incidents of their childhood. Not for a second do u find reading it repetitive or filler-ish...

N I do find Asmara very cute and nice but it's just that Ashar probably steals the show. Sorry Asmara 😛

And I also especially love some of the dialogues (more from Arnav and Ashar) like the "Surprise, surprise! I wonder where she got that from"

I love how Khushi, Arnav and Asmara team up in the leg pulling of Arnav! It's just amazing to read that. The great Arnav Singh Raizada's leg being pulled😃 and how Ashar even as a child is both big brotherly strict and loving and acing at the same time. I wish I had a big brother like him! 😭

Arnav making Asmara say Daddy! Absolutely lovely!! Okay I have to stop or I'll just be quoting the whole thing again!

And the last emotional part... Wow... Just wow! All of them were sooo what do I say... They just make your tear ducts go spill spill spill.

And I love how Payal and he kids also figure in our ss in a small but nice way

But what is this I read? You are not updating my( okay okay OUR) ASR J's diary...?? Kyuuu! Hope u get into his mind's mode also soon...

Thank you for making my Sunday evenings!

And once again, Awesome Job👏

Seriously don't you get bored listening to the same things from us again n again n again 😛

Lol okay enuf now... Next Sunday... Please come fast 😊

N I forgot! Thanks for the PM😊

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: -Sadi-
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Awww Thank you for your lovely comments with so cute pics 😳 Love them ❤️

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Fari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: GAURI29
awsome.jst awsome .hatts off to u buddy. u made me really emtional today...after reading this i also can not hold back my tears... .while writting i can imagine the scene n i thought about myself...i really feel bad tht i hv leave my daddy's house...

Hehehe! No girl wants to leave their daddy's house, right?! Its so unfair! Why don't guys move in with the girl's family? 😉 Anyway, thanks for commenting 😛