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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
till part 7
nice...
who are Raj and Priya?
and why is there Geet's pic in the place of Priya?
wheres Maan?
so Geet is in Mumbai for job and higher studies...
and Dev and Geet's marriage has been fixed when they were young...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
(sorry for the confusion
Raj & Priya are Geet's stoties characters
Geet & Pinky are going to Mumbai for higher studies
they are in the train & Pinky is reading Geet's story
Maan is yet to come & its only Geet's pictures
since Priya is a fictional character of Geet's story)

Part – 8

Priya's first day in office………….

Priya arrives early & settles down in her seat….

She just hopes ki MC ke MD is a nice person…b'coz she has joined as

his secretary….

Raj comes………..Priya file lekhe aarahi hai…..

Donno takrathe hai…..papers fly…..

Raj holds Priya in his arms……eyelock………….

Isske aage….

Raj: tum?

Priya: aap?

Raj: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Priya: pehle aap kaho, aap mere peecha kyun kar rahe ho? Hare koi

police ko bhulao…security….security…iss office mein koi security nahi

hai kya?

Everyone at MC is stunned…iss ladkhi ki itni himmat…. Raj sir ke samne

kaise chillathi hai?...ye toh aaj gayi kaam se……

Raj shuts her mouth……

Raj: chup…..bilkul chup………

Priya is speechless……….

Raj: mein raj Malhotra hoon, Malhotra Constructions ka MD, tum yahan

kyun aaye ho?

Priya: meinne aaj hi ye office join ki hai…mein Mr.Malhotra ki secretary hoon

Raj: yahan toh ek hi Malhotra hai…isska matlab tu meri secretary

banogi? Aman…Aman….ho kya raha hai iss office mein, MC ki itni bhuri

din aagayi hai kya ki aaise pagal log yahan kaam kar rahe hai

Receptionist: sorry sir, ye newly appointed hai

Raj: issko kissne job diya?

Rec: sir, issko Seema m'am ne hi select kiya hai

Raj: teek hai, you come to my cabin

Priya knocks : may I come in? sir

Raj: come in

Priya hands a paper to him….

Raj: ye kya hai?

Priya: aapko panda anhi aatha? Woh mera resignation hai

Raj: achcha toh tum job chod rahi ho

Priya: haan, mujhe nahi patha ye aapka office hai

Raj: what? Tumme nahi patha kit um Malhotra's ke upar case file kiya

hai aur wahi chale aayi kaam karne? This is unbelievable Ms.Mehta

Priya: Ms.Priya Agarwal

Raj: what? Tum Payal Mehta nahi ho?

Priya: nahi, Payal meri friend hai, mein unke ghar mein Paying guest

hoon, uss din Payal ghar mein nahi thi toh mein maaji ki madat kar

rahi thi

Raj: kya? Tum PG ho ?

Priya: toh kya hua? Mein net oh sach ka saath hi diya hai, issme meri

koi galthi nahi

Raj: tum…..tum…..

Priya: mein chalthi hoon…..Priya turms back to leave….

Raj: toh tum mujhse darke job chodke bhaagraho ho, right?

Priya turns back…..

Priya: aapko galatfami ho gayi hai, mein kissi se darthi nahi

Raj: to hiss resignation ka kya matlab?

Priya: isske pehle aap mujhe job se nikhale meinne hi resign kardhi

Raj: mujhe tummare saath kaam karne mein koi problem nahi, lekhi tumme

mere saath kaam karne mein dar lagraha hai toh I will accept your

resignation

Priya: meinne kaha na, mein kissi se darthi nahi hoon, woh letter mujhe dijiye….

Priya snatches the paper & tears it…..

Raj: that's the spirirt

Priya gusse mein apne table par chalke beitthi hai….

Phir kya? Kurban hua se lekhe Maneet shadi tak ki story hi hai….

Happy happy ending…………….that's our Geet's story……

Ye story itni important kyun hai? Ye aapko badh mein patha chalega…………

Aage Geet Handa ki kahaani………

back to the train to Mumbai...back to Pinky & Geet ki journey...
here is Pinky...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 8
nice part...
oh now understood...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part – 9

Pinky is half-way thru the story……….

Geet: Pinky

Pinky: haan Priya

Geet: Pinky…Pinky…….kya hua?

Pinky: kuch nahi Geet, ye kahaani nahi tera sapna lagtha hai….toh

tummara sapnon ka Rajkumar Raj hai……

Geet: Pinky, kya bakwaas batein kar rahi ho? Ye sirf meri kahaani

hai…sapnon mein aur haqeeqat main bahut bada faraq hai…ye mujhe maloom

hai

Pinky: par Geet hum toh roz hummare sapnon ko haqeeqat mein badalne ke

liye kitna khoshish karte hai? Tum dekho Mumbai mein tummara Rajkumar

tumme miljayega…..sapnon bhi sach hothe hai Geet

Geet: ab tum sapne dekhna band karo aur sojao, lao file mujhe do

Thay go to sleep………….

Next morning…………….

Geet Mumbai pohunchgayi………

Mumbai station…………….

Geet: halo Mumbai……mein aagayi………..

Jaise kehte haina, sapnon ka shehar….sach mein Geet ke liye Mumbai is

her dream city..

Ek breeze toh Mumbai pohunch chuki hai….

Ab Mumbai ki tapmaan mein kuch badlaav honewala hai……

Ek aur toofan Mumbai pohunchraha hai…..

Maan Singh Khurana………

Khurana khandaan ka prince charming…..

US mein studies ke badh Mumbai aaraha hai……

At the airport……

Driver is waiting for MSK…..

Maan arrives…..you know MSK ki gajni style entry…………..

At KM……

Dadi bahut dher se Mann ki intrezaar kar rahi hai……….

Woh toh sare tayyari kar chuki hai……aarthi ki thali bhi tayyar hai…..

Bas Maan ka hi intrezaar hai…..Dadi bahut pareshan hai…..

Dadi: ye Maan ab tak kyun nahi aaye?

Mamaji: Dadi aap fikar mat karo, sab kuch hummare plan ki muthabik ho raha hai

Dadi: parb ye Maan ka koi barosa nahi

Mamaji: iss Balwinder ka plan kabhi fail nahi hotha, aap tayyar raho…

Maan comes………..

Dadi & mamaji Maan ko chodke kissi aur ka behut intrezaar kar rahe hai…

Maan akhela hi aaya hai kya?

Dadi: Maan bete aap ke saath koi nahi hai kya?

Mamaji: dadi, thoda intrezaar karo woh bhi aayegi

Maan: Dadi, aapko kaise patha ki mere saath koi aanewala hai?

Dadi bahut kush hothi…..

Mamaji toh kushi se nach rahe hai….

Hare band bhajao…aakhir mamaji ka plan safal ho gaya…..

At last Khurana Khandaan ki bahu mil hi gayi……

Maan ki shadi honewali hai….

Dadi: Maan bete, hummri bahu kahan hai?

Two years earlier…………..

Maan apne studies complete hone ke badh chachaji ke saath kaam mein laga hai…

Khuranas ki dhoor ki rishdedar..Mrs.Sharma Maan ke liye ek achcha

rishta lekhe aathi….

Dadi: aayiye, aayiye, Mrs.Sharma, I was just waiting for you

Mrs.Sharma: namasthe Savithriji, toh aapka potha kahan hai?

Dadi: woh toh bahar gaya hai, abhi aatha hi hoga, kahiye aap kya logi?

Tanda ya garam? Nakul….mehmaan ke liye nastha lekhe aao

Mrs.Sharma: ye dekhiye ye hummari Rashhmi hai

Dadi photo dekhthi hai…..ye toh bahut sundar hai….

Gurmeet as Maan Singh Khurana
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Part – 10

Mrs.sarma: hummri Rashmi MBA graduate hai…usske papa ka business bhi

aajakl wahi sambalthi hai

Dadi: ye toh bahut achchi baat hai

Mrs.Sharma: ye aapka pothe ke liye best choice hai

Dadi: woh toh hum bhi jaantha hai

Mrs.sharma: inke parents toh aapse rishta karne ke liye bechain hai

Dadi: humme bhi aaisi hi bahu ki talaash thi

Maan comes home…..

Maan: Dadi

Dadi: hare Maan bete, aap aagaye, yahan aayiye

Maan: ji dadi

Dadi: inse miliye, ye hai Mrs.Sharma

Maan: namasthe auntyji

Mrs.Sharma: aapka potha toh bilkul Rajkumar lag raha hai, bahut

kissmatwaki hai humaari Rashmi bitiya

Maan: Dadi, ye kya kehrahe hai?

Dadi: Maan bete ye aapke shadi ki baat lekhe aaye hai

Maan: Dadi, ye sab mujhe pasand nahi, Dadi aapko pehle hi patha haina,

toh Mrs.Sharma aap jaa sakthe hai, good bye

Dadi: Maam bete, photo toh dekhiye

Maan: Dadi jab mujhe shadi hi nahi karni hai toh aap innko kyun bhulaye hai?

Dadi: par Maan bete humme bhi aasha hai apne ghar mein bahu lane ki

Maan: toh phir chachaji ki shadi karwadhijiye, ya phir iss mamaji ki

shadi kar sakthe hai

Mrs.Sharma: lagtha hai isska chakkar chal raha hai, kissi aur ladki ke saath

Maan: Daaadiii

Maan ke aawaaz sunke Mrs.Sharma gayab hothi aur kabhi wapas nahi aathi….

isske badh dadi bahut udaas hojathi…..

mamaji: Dadi, aap Maan ko lekhe itna pareshan kyun hothe ho?

Dadi: kya karein? Kahin ye bhi Jaspal ki tarah akhela ho gaya toh?

Mamaji: aap Maan ki barein mein sochkar apna tabyat karab karte hai

Dadi: ab toh mere paas zyada waqt nahi hai, mujhe kissi bhi tarah iss

ghar mein bahu lekhe aana padega

Mamaji: bas itni si baat? Shayad aap bhool gaye ho, mein hoon na?

Dadi: kya? Tum shadi karoge?

Mamaji: Dadi aap jaanthi hai mein apne laila ko dokha nahi de saktha,

woh ab bhi mere dil mein hai

Dadi: teek hai, teek hai, ab tummari kahaani katam karo aur Maan ke

barein mein socho

Mamaji: mere paas ek bahut badiya plan hai, ye plan toh fail ho hi nahi saktha

Dadi: aaise kya baat hai?

Mamaji: hum Maan ko videsh bhejdenge

Dadi: kya? Tu Maan ko humse dhoor karoge?

Mamaji: Dadi, mere pure baat ko pehle suniye

Dadi: kaho

Mamaji: hum Maan ko padne bhejenge, Amrica, wahan toh bahut sone sone

ghudiyan hai, koi na koi toh Maan ko patayegi, haina?

Dadi: par mein kuch samji nahi

Mamaji: dadi: wahan ke ladhkiyan bahut tez hai, Maan toh unse bhaj nahi saktha

Dadi: idea toh achcha hai par kahin dostana ho gaya toh?

Mamaji: kya?

Dadi: hare wahan ladhkon hi ladkhon se shadi karte

Mamaji: subh subh boliye dadi, waise hummare Maan toh ladhkiyon se hi

nahi dekhtha ladkon ki baat toh dhoor hai, aap befikar rahiye

Dadi: ye baat bhi teek hai, par Maan ko kaise manayenge

Mamaji: hummare Jaspal haina, agar woh kahega toh Maan zaroor manega

Jaspal chachaji comes….

Chachaji: lagtha hai meri baat ho rahi hai, kya kehraha hai ye tali mama

Dadi: woh toh aapka tarreef kar raha hai

Chchaji: kya? Phir toh uski pinne ki paison katam ho gayi hogi, kaho

kitne rupiye chahiye?'

Mamaji: nahi nahi, mein kehraha tha kit um kitne akhalmanth ho, aur

kitna pada hai woh bhi sare duniya gumke aaj tak padrahe ho, apne Maan

ko bhi tumare tarah Amrica mein padna haina? Woh bhi ab tere saath

kaam kar raha hai toh

Dadi: ye toh sochne ki baat hai

Chachaji: itne saal mein aaj iss tali mama ne ek achchi baat kit oh

issme sochne ki koi zaroorat hi nahi, mein Maan se baat kartha hoon,

aakhir hummare family ka naaam mere badh wahi roshan karega

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...
maan angry...
maan's family planning 2 send him 2 america
continue soon
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Part - 11

Aaise hi plan banake mamaji Maan ko Amrica bheje the….ab toh unka

mehnat rang laya hai…….aage………

Maan comes…..

Dadi: kahan hai woh? Kahan hai woh?

Maan: dadi aap kissko dhoondh rahe hai

Dadi: Maan bete wahi hummari woh, aap ke saath aayi haina?

Maan: Dadi ye toh aapke samne hi khadi hai

Dadi: ye? Ye toh bahu nahi behenji dikhthi hai

Maan: Dadi ye hummare University mein kaam karthi hai

Mamaji: meinne socha ki apne liye dulhan layega jaise DDLJ mein Raj ko

Simran milli jaise, lekhin ye toh apne liye biwi nahi chachi laya hai,

ye toh uss Jaspal ki jaspalini lagthi hai

Dadi: ye, Maan isse shadi karenge hai kya?

Dadi almost faints…..mamaji dadi ko pakadthe hai….

Mamaji: sambalke dadi

Dadi: tujhe toh mein badh mein dekhloongi

Maan: welcome Ms.Mohini, welcome to India, patha hai Dadi she loves

India & its history…inhonne toh apna naam hi badal diya Indian name

rakhdiya, how nice?

Mamaji: achcha naam hai, Ms.Mohini

Dadi: andhar aayiye…..welcome welcome….Nakul behenji ke saman guest

room mein rakho Maan bete humme thoda aaram ki zaroorat hai, hum

chalte hai…

Maan is confused…ye dadi aur mamaji aaise kyun dekh rahe hai jaise koi

bhooth ko dekhe ho……..

Dadi: Balwinder….Balwinder….

Mamaji: ji Dadi

Dadi: kahan chale gaye ho? Tum toh aaj mujhse bhaj nahi saktha

Mamaji: nahi Dadi, mein toh yahi tha

Dadi: tu ne kya kaha? Maan kissi sone sone dulhan Amrica se layega par

woh toh koi yogini ko laya hai

Mamaji: Dadi…Ms.Mohini

Dadi: mujhe toh woh yogini hi lagthi hai

Mamaji: ye toh mera plan mein nahi tha

Dadi: ab tu apna plan ke barein mein ek sabt bhi bolega toh mein abhi

tummari khoon khardoongi

Mamaji escapes…………..

At breakfast…..

Dadi: Maan bete aap ka course kaise tha?

Maan: Dadi that was fantastic, wahan ki standards hi alag hai aur

bahut hi interesting hai

Chachaji: ye kaun hai?

Maan: woh chachaji, mein toh bhool hi gaya aapko introduce karne se,

this is Ms.Mohini hummare Yoga trainer, she is also doing research

work in Indian philosophy

Chachaji: that sounds great, yahan ke aurathon ko toh sirf apni

pariwaar ki padhi hai, ye hummare sanskar ko nahi jaanthe aur uska

kadar bhi nahi karthe

Dadi: achcha hua tumne hindi mein bola warna ye hummare barein mein kya sochegi?

Chachaji: meinne kuch galat nahi kaha, jo hai wahi keh raha hoon

Mohini: I just love India, I wanted to visit the yogis of the

Himalayas & Maan is so sweet he is very kind to take me along with

him here, I am so happy to meet your family Maan

Dadi: you want to visit the Himalayas?

Mohini: yeah, kailash Manasarovar

Dadi: babaji ye toh Jaspal se badi sadhini nikhli, ab Maan ko kaun bhachayega?

mmaji ka photo bhi unki dimag ti tarah teda hi hai...
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part 11
awesome...
that was so funny...
cont soon...
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Part -1 2

Maan: Dadi, hum next month Himalayas jaa rahe hai

Dadi: ye toh bahut achchi baat hai

Dadi ko bahut gussa aatha….hare babaji……mere bas ki chalet toh mein iss

Mohini ko Himalayas ke kissi pahaad se ek laat marke neeche

girathi…..badi aayi India dekhne…usse hummara Maan hi mila hai kya?

Iss umar mein issko ye sab ki kya zaroorat hai?

Chachaji is the only one interested…they start talking about philosophy……

Dadi can't stand that anymore….she just leaves……

Ab Dadi ka next mission Maan ko rohkna….

Geet & Piknky stay in a women's hostel….

Two more days left before their classes commence…..

Woh Mumbai gumne chalte hai…

Beach mein gol gappe aur pav baji khathe hai…

Thode dher pani mein khelthe hai…

Pinky: Geet chalo, humme dher ho rahi hai

Geet: hare Pinky, bas 5 minute

Geet & Pinky wapas chalte hai…..

Thay walk to the nearby bus stop….

Pinky sees a snacks bar on the opposite side & as usual woh udgayi…

Bus comes….Geet tries to call Pinky…..

Geet: Pinky… hare Pinky….jaldi kar…bus chale jayegi…..

Bus toh chali gayi…..

Suddenly a car arrives & stops near Geet………

Geet nearly falls….she is so scared………….

Geet: babaji….. hare kaun hai andhar? Dikhayi nahi detha hai kya? Ye

bus stop hai….tummare papa ka ghar nahi…..

But Geet is standing on the middle of the road……

The door opens….someone gets down….

He just walks away as if there is no one on the road except him….

Maan Singh Khurana………..he thinks " ye toh once more prove ho gaya ki

aurathon ka dimag thoda kamzoor chaltha…."

Geet: hare….suno……

He walks towards an oldman standing there….

Talks to him…takes him with him….

Geet ko bahut gussa aatha hai…..

Woh MSK ko galiyaan dene lagi…..

Pinky: Geet, kya hua?

Geet: ye sab tere wajhe se hi hua hai Pinky

Pinky: meinne kya kiya?

Geet: ab kya zaroorat thi wahan jaane ki? Dekho bus chootgayi

Pinky: Geet ye lo Vada Pav, hum Mumbai mein hai Geet

Geet: Pinky tu Mumbai padne aaye ho ya khane?

Pinky: donno

Geet: patha nahi ye Mumbai ke munde apne aap ko kya samajthe, lagtha

hai ki sare duniya ko apne shir pe lekhe gumthe hai

Pinky: chodo Geet, bus aagayi, chalo chalte hai

They leave………….

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part 12
nice part...
cont soon dear...

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