ArHi SS: The heart remembers COMPLETD

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Gayatri

@gayakk

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Hahaha..Lyraa..i remember this story..

i was waiting since months for u to update...

Thanks for updating...You left me in anticipation..

I even messaged u saying to update please..anyhow

thanks for continuing my favourite story,..

Love you Lyraa..:):):)

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

This really was a surprise and a pleasant one at that !!!

It was a beautiful update !! Especially the bit where the dripping of the water is compared to slipping away of the memories !!

Update soon !!

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haminasto

@haminasto

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

I had actually being reading THR on n off n thinking if you had said about any discontinuation.
But thankgod you remembered!!!!

Finally the reality of the events came forward..i always thought that that woman must have been a part of Snakeys plan n must have been betrayed by him. But she too was a victim of loss.
Arnav had lived in the clutches of the death that hadnt happened but my heart goes to the lady who had seen the death n known the nearness of it to Khushi but still had the generosity of letting Arnav survive better if not happily.

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

wow lyra thank u so much for updating this one.

i thought u never update this again.

he is a horrible person .that shyam.good he is dead

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Such a wonderful way u have portrayed Arnav's grief and Khushi's fears so deep rooted in her subconscious mind.

We have always read the heart believes in the impossible even if the mind contradicts it often, and the way Khushi's heart recognizes Arnav even though she can't remember anything or anybody else is so well written. It is the very essence of ur story and i loved it.

I chanced upon the story and have read all the parts all together upto the seventh chapter. That was the last update right? or am i missing any chapters?

Plz do PM me whenever u update, i will hate not to read what happens next. U have woven the threads of love, pain, anguish, fear, despair and love so well together that it was so easy for me to imagine the story as it unfolded in ur words.

I have sent u a buddy request, plz do send me the next update. Thanks in advance.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Adi beta! Let me finish my ramble about scolding u! FB isn't enough you know :P

1. U didnt update it for a long time - Reason may be exams?

2. And u said u forgot u had an SS like this? :O - What reason could I assume?

3. U remembered only when some reader told u about it? - How could you be this lazy and careless?

4. Whatever the reasons u could gimme, I hate u for forgetting it :(. :P

--- Now. to update --

Thanks Appy for the fore warning. I made my mind so much not to cry that I felt the update is light eventually. U know, I took a deep breath session before starting to read this. This is the effect of u on me, Adi.

Here after, I'll let Appy read it first and then after asking her comments, I'll come to read. Does that sound good? :P

I feel like hugging u tight. That was a very heavy and emoting one.

Was the photographs Payal and Anji talking was about Shyam? And when Kushi saw a glimpse of them, she decided she should not go into it? - Another heart remembers moment?

Oh my God. The sudden twist? It was horrible to have a mom seeing her only daughter die in a painful method.

Has Shyam died for real?

Arnav and Kushi moment - Perfect. A man to break down like that should have a very string reason and this one is very justified.

Is it the ending of story? NO, please!

I love u. And u know that, dont u? :P

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Taliyaa hahaa adi needs such warnings frm u only akkaa
she never listens to me, though i told her to updt day b4 updting.

And u didn cry, i was in tension u know coz u asked me lol
just 3 chapters left:/

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

That was one amazingly beautiful update...an insight into their trauma and past...

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723461

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

There. I have drained Myself of eyelashes and have red skin all over. The pinching myself and Rubbing hasnt stopped YET.

BecauSe.

You updated!

So hard to believe, but you made up for the absence by writing the most beautiful piece of literature and fantasy i have ever read. Like really. Thankyou sooo much, you lit up my day...

The pan, the love, the horrors, all there and weaved in so beautifully... How DO you do it??

Khushi, her innocence and her need to be loved and protected...but still holding arnav together.

Arnav, his dire need to love and protect khushi, but still so vulnerable...this is really a pair made in heaven. All that they have been through, but can go on, jus cause they have each other❤️

It makes me want to kill shyam multiple times..i cant stop crying. The poor old woman. That animal killed her daughter...

And you know what? This really does feel like a dream because the writing is divine...

A biiig huggie for this heartwrenching update...ill take it as my one week late birthday present🤗

Love you and your magnation so much👏

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Wow.. This one is updated.. Its pretty close to my heart.. Love it a lot.. Coming to the update, Its amazing.. Arnav getting to know the truth how Khushi was made to go away from him, how she only remembered him when Shyam tried to play dirty.. 😡 I sympathize with Arnav.. He had to bear the harsh reality of losing the love of his life and that too in such a tragic state.. Really feel bad for him.. Hope happy days are back for them.. He loves her and her subconscious mind loves him too.. Thanks for the wonderful update..