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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting 👍🏼
plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys thank you soo much for the comments. Finally I am a Groupie now and can send out pm with link. Sorry guys you had to wait but I wanted to send you pm with clickable links so you won't have to copy and past or have to search for my work. And Thank you soo much Appy for making a wonderful banner for my story.😳
Chapter 1

I said GET OUT!!! Arnav yelled at Khushi while she was trying to hold his hand and make him realize what he was doing but he waved her hand off of his and threw her on the floor. Payal was about to move near Khuhi when Akash held her hand letting her not to go near Khushi. Aaksh knew Arnav anger very well. He also didn't want Payal to get into Arnav and Khushi fight becuase Aakash was afraid.

"Arnav ji please trust me. I didn't knew about this matter". Khushi said while crying in pain.Anav cluched his hands in anger not wanting to do something which will hurt khushi more.

"Khushi what else don't you know? . I have always trusted you but how can you not tell me this matter. You knew the truth about Garima Aunty then why the h*ll didn't you tell me? You know just once if you would of have had told me the truth about it I would of have had believed you without any question but NO You didn't. I kept waiting for you to tell me but everyday you lied to me. If you hide this from me you knew one day this will cause not only you but me too our relationship. WHO GIVED YOU THE RIGHT TO HIDE THINGS FROM ME AND PLAY WITH MY LOVE WHICH I HAD FOR YOU?!!!! Yes I "HAD" . I don't love you Miss Khushi Kumari Gupta. Infact I have no realtionship with you. !!!!!

Just when Arnav held Khushi both shoulder tightly the main door of RM opened and Bua ji stepped in. Arnav stopped where he was. He looked at Khushi first questionaly if she has invited Bua ji to RM? But when he looked at her even Khushi was shocked to see Bua ji here. He looked at the rest of the Raizada member but no one knew the answer except ONE person.

I have called Bua ji said Arnav Dadi from the stairs. Bua ji came closer to Khushi and said "I have came to get you Sanka Devi. Dadi ji and Garima have told me the truth. Not even for a second I want you to live here now. Khushi pleaded Bua ji to not to take her that is when she got slap from Bua ji. Arnav felt the pain like if someone has stabbed his heart and spilt it into hundred parts. "Why do you want to live here? Ha your own husband is not stopping you.Infact he himself is throwing you out of his life. Didn't he promised you he will be with you at every step of your life? Then why is he leaving you today. Forget him he is already cold hearted but his family too? They don't need you Tatilya!!! If anyone loved you they would of have had said something. Then why today they are the one who want you to leave their house" Bua ji put her hands on Khushi cheeks and made Khushi face her. " Titalya I promised Garima I will take care of you before she went to Lucknow and I can't break her promise now". Bua ji said crying her heart out in front of Khushi and the entire RM family member.

Khushi stood their like a statue. She didn't knew what to say or do. All she could was think of her bua ji words. "Bua ji is right. If Arnav ji loves me then he should be beside me then why is he not?Why doesn't he always trust me ?Simple because he hate me.He did ,he is and always will hate me."Khushi came our of her thought when bua ji pulled her hand again. Khushi started walking with Bua ji before she could step out of the house he turned around to see if Arnav ji won't leave her but she was wrong. Arnav didn't even looked at her once and left the place to his room before anything else could happen or do.
Khushi and Bua ji arrived at their place. While bua ji was paying the auto rikshaw guy Khushi quietly left the place and went inside the house. Bua ji notice that but didn't stop her as she knew Khushi very well. She was in shock. The Family ,the guys,the husband she loved the most threw her out of their life without getting to know the truth.
Khushi walked inside the house and looked around. Their were many picture of Raizada and Guptas together. Some were marriage, whole family and some only Payal and Akash or Arnav and Khushi. Khushi walked to her room and the first place her eyes fell on was her and Arnav. Arnav was standing behind Khushi with his right hand on Khushi waist, Chin on her shoulder and both smiling. Khushi closed her eyes. Tears role down her eyes as she took the picture in her hand,hugging it ,sat down on the floor and started crying continously.
Guys I know it's bad but right now it is just the starting. I need to get to the main point too.
Hit The Like Botton and Comment Please.😳
Edited by ArShi_Addiction - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Heartbreaking yaar, I was almost in tears!😭
Edited by sondaryalakshmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I Like the way you think *GRIN* no dadi, no shyam xD cud u possibly have some ARNAV RAGING AT ANJALI SCENES TOOO XDDD
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like the concept, please accept my buddy request :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
poor Khushi
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Poor khushi
Update soon
Hope she and the child are fine
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update...poor Khushi,really hope she won't forgive him easily.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
It is intriguing...what could happen...depending on WHAT the truth is...

Intense and gripping...

Glad the Gupta family will support Khushi...

But Arnav...

Can't wait to see where the story goes...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Brilliant...very emotional...Awaiting the second chapter and thanks for the PM

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