ArSh n KriYaansh FF - Rabb Mera Tu- ch16- pg114 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome blossom part 😃...
Kya acha bahana socha hai Kria ne at the spot 😉...
Kriyansh giving their relation a chance , that's great ...
Uh oh Rey ne Sahil aur Kria ko kis position mein dekh liya ...
Acha tareeka tha Rey ko distract karne ka 😳...
Loved it ❤️
Ahan fresher's party...
Waiting for the next part...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...
kria giving a chance to their marriage...
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kriya is so witty . . . . . . . Controlled the situation perfectly 👍🏼
nhi to dono side se poll khul jati . . . . . . Aur sahil ka toh pata nhi kya haal hota 😆
fire exit . . . Privacy 😊
awww . . . . I thought kriya would hug him... He's understanding 😃
crap . . . . . Wat a accident . . . . 😲
hehehe . . . . . Rey ke tufaan ko rokne ke liye kiss ☺️
I guess,, sahil kriya pe line zarur maarega . . . . . . . . Fir pitega 🤣
freshers party . . . . Dats gonna be fun 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome part
great going
kria is ready to give another chance
n rey is controling his obssessive behaviour
great
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved it...
kria giving chance to there relation nd rey trying to control his obessessive behaviour
excited for the freshers party...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
loved it...
kriya giving their relation a chance...wow..
waiting for d freshers party...
update soon..


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Posted: 12 years ago
loved d story both d versions... update sooon...
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loved this part
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chapter 11
kriYansh
Kria hurried out of college, in the hope of catching an auto and quickly rushing back to their suite room before any of her friends would ask her abt where she stays...

She knew that they would indeed ask her to move in wid them.. As the girls hv rented a flat and it was big enough to accomodate kria too... But before any of that she knew that she needs to make rey approve to this whole thing..
Not only pretending to be just friends, but also make sure she is allowed to move in wid her gfs..

Orelse sooner or later their married status is sure to be revealed.. Which she seriously hope is not until college is over!

What would her friends think of her 4 god's sake.. So despo to get married!

On top of it she could'nt even tell them she was forced into it..
Knowing surely what would be the consequences..

And she did have a soft corner for rey from the very start...
And though she had told she would give 'them' a chance..
Her main intent was to pacify rey thereafter to keep their marriage a seceret till the college ends..

And for that she ought to move in with the girls b4 its too late..

Though she somewhere did expect.. That their relation would take a positive turn sooner or later..
But that would be only if rey would control his anger and possessiveness regarding her!


She was so lost in her thoughts that she dint see that two autos had already passed, forcing her to wait for a while longer..

But before she could wait longer..
A jet black mercedese stopped just infront of her.. Soon followed by a silver bmw behind her..

Such that kria was in the centre with the two cars on her either sides!

She almost felt a sense of nausea looking at the scene before her..

The silver bmw had a grinning sahil looking at her, asking for a lift..
Which for a moment she thought of accepting since they had'nt got much time to converse yet..

But the next view soon made her change her mind, rey was looking right at sahil.. Almost glaring, with a stern look on his face.

Kria was about to curse her fate, she could neither go with rey bcoz afterall she had pretended he was just her senior.. And neither could she go ahead wid sahil..the obvious reason being rey!

But before she could go on and curse her universeji, sharon and neha quickly came to her rescue...

Sh- kria do u own a saree? What ru wearing for tonight's party??

Kr- no yaar, infact was planning to wear my usual party dresses for tonight!

Ne- have u like lost it?? As it is ur d last admission and if you do something like breaking the party rules.. Only god can save you from the seniors wrath!!

Sh- hmm, then its done girls.. We're going shopping like right now alright!
And kria when are you shifting in with us.. Should v get ur belongings and then go shopping?

Kr- no thats perfectly all right, i got loadz to pack so will join you in a couple of days alright?..

Kria quickly stole a glance at rey, to see him looking right at her! And before she could register whats happening rey zoomed off with his car..

Sw- god! Whats up wid him! Thot of getting a ride.. Anyways chal vicky.. Even we have to shop a little here and there.. Not like these girls though!

And they both left bidding bye to their ladyloves and kria ofcourse..

Soon the girls left for shopping.. And as sahil was also going the same way he decided to drop them, since neither neha nor sharon owned a car.

So as not to get conjusted, kria was asked to sit in the front.. Whereas sharon and neha sat at the back...

Just as their car passed the college premises, a very frustrated rey hit his fist into the steering wheel as he did not like kria sitting with sahil one bit!

Rey was just making sure they get a ride to the mall when he saw them getting in sahil's car! And atop kria was sitting with sahil which he was not able to digest at all!

But yet again he took a deep breathe so as to remember and control his temper and behaviour...

He waited for a minute and decided to follow them so as to make sure sahil is not planning to accompany them in the mall too..


On the other hand kria was feeling very light after talking to sahil that too after such a long gap..

They both recherished their high school memories, completely forgetting the presence of sharon and neha!..

Kria was indeed happy that sahil was'nt mentioning their past relation which put her at more ease with him..

In no time they reached the mall and though sahil insisted on accompanying them, the girls denied stating that it was girl's time from now on..

Sahil had no option but to leave, and as soon as he did.. So did a relaxed rey who had been keeping an eye on them for long now..

Though he was still concerned about krias safety.. He kind of already trusted neha and sharon..

...

As soon as they enterd the mall..
Kria quickly texted rey..

Kr's msg- will cu at the party then.. Shoppin wid girls now. And gotta talk regarding something, which yu might hv already guessed i suppose. Tc

As soon as rey started to read the message, a smile crept onto his face.. He was very happy that she was indeed concerned and was making an attempt to give them a chance..

But the last sentene wiped the smile off his face.. He knew what she was going to ask.. About what sharon had mentioned in the parking lot, about moving in with the girls..

Was he ready to keep her away from him? Especially now that she was officially his!

He knew this marriage was forced upon her, but she herself had told she wants to give a chance.. How could she if she stays away from him?

Though he knew the answer to it, she most probably is not ready to reveal their marriage to her friends...
But... No! He would make sure she stays! He was hell bent on making her stay and talk it out with her tonight!

As for now.. He thought of giving her sometime to relish with her friends!

...

Atlast they were done shopping.. From dresses to cosmetics..
Everything was in their shopping bagz!

After settling in the taxi.. Both sharon and neha continuously glared at kria!

After a moment kria spoke out..
Kr- what??

Ne- u r impossible!

Sh- very much!

Kr- what guys..! Just bcoz i dint get sarees like you! Whats there to make such a fuss!

Kria said with a pout.

Which made both sharon and neha burst out laughing and pull her cheeks!

Sh- nothing kiddo, no1 wud think of such out of the world things like you i suppose..

Ne- totally! Just waiting to see if thers gonna be anyone else dressed like you!
And they started laughing again!

Kr- stop it naa guys! I fell in love wid the dress the moment i saw it!
Anyways normal sarees are soo boring now! Almost all are gonna come in that!
Anyways its traditional naa so topic closed!

Both sharon and neha controlled their giggles somehow so as not to irritate their bestie more..

It was almost 5 when they reached home after shopping. All three of them quickly hit the bed bcoz they were hell tired.. And also to look their best, they needed to catch on some beauty sleep.

It was almost 6.15 when they fially woke up.. And the party was scheduled to be at 7.30..

They were sure they would be making a late entry as usual.. Whereas the guys were supposed to reach the venue b4 the girls so as to help in the final arrangements.

Since none of them knew even the 'A' of how to dress up traditionally..
After a quick bath all decided to go to a nearby trendy saloon so as to get help in getting ready...

Sharon and neha hurried 1st.. Leaving kria to wait until they are over and finally go last to get her makeover done..

Sharon was lookin out of the world and sexy as usual.. With the right makeup and hair curled even more than usual, giving it more volume.

Neha in short looked just like an angel..
With staightened hair..and a few strands pinned behind, completing her innocent look.


Now after complimenting each other and also recieving a whistle from kria..
Both were waiting for kria to get out fast.

After a lot of slamming the door and blackmailing the beautician, finally kria was let out...

She looked eternal.. With the right makeup on her honey textured skin.. Slightly curled hair which was till a little above her waist and.. A overall wet look was given to her hairstyle giving her a perfect finish.

her saree-
Kria had opted for smoky eye makeup.. Highlighting her eyes all the more..

And her dress fitting perfectly on her womanly curves.. At all the right places!

Sh- sexyy...
Ne- angelicc...

This was all the girls could utter having a look at kria.. She was dressed to kill indeed..
And yes kria was the only one who could look sexy and innocent cum angelic at the same time...

Words were less to describe the beauty standing there!

Though sharon and neha looked the perfect example for hotness and innocence personification..

It was kria for whom words couldnot be formed.. She was the perfect mixture of both... Hotness and innocence...

After giving kria compliments on ho fine she looked.. The trio moved to the party destination in a hired car for the evening..

It was just when they got in that sharon and neha quickly called up swayum and vicky informing them about their arrival...

Whereas kria had completely forgotten the couple entry thing...

But just as she was about to call rey..
She got a message from him telling that he is waiting near the college entry..

To which kria could do nothing but just smile...

Soon neha and sharon started teasing her asking her about who she is going wid to which she replied rey..

Leaving both of them shocked..

Sh- we thought it must be sahil.. Since he is ur buddy and also the way u both were talking away this afternoon..

Ne- yea me too.. But neverthless u and rey look cute together.. Enjoyy babez...

To which kria blushed trying to protest... But soon they reached the party venue!

Sharon and neha quickly rushed in to meet their guys, leaving kria behind to pay the driver...

Just as she was about to make her way inside, a car stopped her in her tracks...

And out came a few seniors followed by their dates for the night,
all were checking her out from top to toe and one of the boy was about to make his way towards her when...

Rey saw sharon and neha entering the party, and upon asking got to know kria was out payong the driver all alone..

So he quickly made his way towards her.. And what he saw made him stop in her tracks..

There she stood looking as innocent as an angel but at the same time soo sensuous.. So breathtakingly beautiful that she could make any guy go mad wid her mere presence!

And he was indeed a little annoyed as he could still not reveal that she officially belonged to his... Though she was His, Only His!

He was looking at her from top to bottom..
But just after a second of being mesmerized, another thought shook his mind...

Yes, he was going to have a tough time keeping the other guys away from her tonight..

Just when he had thought this, he saw a boy among the seniors approaching her...
And without wasting another second, rey quickly went and held her waist..

Claiming her as his date, and with a firm hold and some silent curses...
He lead her to the party...

Silently praying to her Universeji to give him enough courage to face the others checking her out and stay calm.. And to try and control his possessiveness atleast for today...

Which he was almost sure he could not.

As soon as they were out of earshot...
He quickly grabbed kria by her arm,
and spoke with irritation..
Re- what the hell are you wearing kria??...

Kr- its superbb rytt.. I know i too loved it, tz the latest collectioin they had...
But god knows why sharon and neha could'nt stop laughing..

Rey was lost in her innocence all the while she spoke.. Infact this was the first time she had spoken so openly to him..but wait! What? Latest fashion??

Re- what! Latest fashion u call this??
Where the hell is the rest of the blouse for god's sake.. Is one even there??

Kr- rey...
Forget it.. I loved this, now can we get in?

Rey had no option left other than to follow her...

Kria felt her hear skip as soon as she had a good look at rey!
He looked too irresistable in that jet black suit .. Which he wore over a crimson red silk shirt!

rey's suit-
As soon as they entered... She found the spotlight aimed at them..

Indicating they were the final entry.

...

Rey was still cursing his fate..
He was to make sure others stay away from her.. When he himself had no control over his raging hormones and desires at the very sight kria made!

He looked around to find his fears come true.. Almost all the boys including his new found friend swayam was actually drooling over her!

He somehow tried to look away when the next announcement made him furious...

An- so here we have our last entry of the night... So guys how do we punish them for being late..??
So here is the deal... These guys will have to split for the night! That is kria the newbie would have a senior as her date and the same applies for the rey!

And before both of them knew whats happening..

A senior approached kria... He seems quiet well mannered, she thought.

And a senior girl approached rey too... she was hardly having any clothes on, she was wearing a very short tube dress.
As the dress code did not apply to the seniors!

Kria saw from the corner of her eyes, to check who was the one approaching him and her eyes almost popped out looking at the way the girl was dressed!

And to top her annoyance.. That girl was drooling shamelessly at her husband! And she did not like that one bit...

And before she could make a move, that boy caught hold of her waist and murmered...
Guy- i'm rohan.. And ur mine for tonight babez

then itself kria regeretted to think of him as a decent guy...

And before she could look at what that b**** of a girl was trying on her husband...

She felt a pull from behind and the next instant rohan was on the ground and she was in her husbands arms...
In which she oh so gladly for the first time wished to remain in...

amrutha... khush naa? last time se faster update kar diya..woh bhi bas tere liye!!
did it today only 4 yu...!!
aur also 4 a few of my other loyal n lovely duffers!😆
like and comment people...!
Edited by hotdiva_dmg - 12 years ago

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