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Maz786

@Maz786

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#601

that was awesome. although it was a looong update, I wish you hadn't ended it there!!!!

Now I have to wait another day to find out how they are going to resolve this if Khushi is no longer to work at AR Corp. Obviously Arnav has something cooked up in his intellegent mind where Khushi won't suffer financially but did you have to stop there?

As you can see I'm greedy and only thinking about myself so apoligise as well.😉

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#602

awesome chapter.. definitely good relationships are not served in platter... a lot of hardwork and patience is required for it to make it work.. and you have shown that..

Arnav couldn't sleep, so he caught up with his sleep throughout their journey back to delhi.. then he was overwhelmed with work and he is not habituated of acknowledging anything or anyone around him.. so again new to him..

so they both are new in this.. so trial and error method is what is going to work for them..

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abayance

@abayance

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#603

beautiful update. guessing that jalebi junction is on the way!

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Eggon_Snow

@Eggon_Snow

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#604

You write so well Naina, I see your skill improving with each chapter, I find it difficult to believe that this is your first fic...brilliant description of how new love develops, the hesitation, the mistakes made, the confusion about how to proceed further.

P.S The addition of Mohan was a nice touch

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#605

Awesome update...ohhh god y did he fire her 😭 my second day at readin ur story..n m already stalking 😛

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#606

This was bound to happen .. office romance!! I have been through it and i know how confusing (& at times problematic 😉) it can get!! 😆

That was a great update Naina! There is nothing to be nervous .. that was very practical. 😊

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shonali_99

@shonali_99

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#607

AWSOME as it was expected to be.

thanks for the update .

i guess ASR was busy with khushi's proposal of jalebi junction am i right?

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tibs09

@tibs09

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#608

makes perfect sense ...anyways she cannot be working for him if she wants jalebi junction to be up and running ...

and office romances no matter how nice always lead to unpleasant complications ...

now to urgent matters for finding the right kind of project sponsor and finances ...it would be good if khushi does it on her own ..instead of Arnav jumping in he has mentored her , got her introduced to te right people ... she needs to take it from there ...she surely is capable...

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#609

awesome upsate, just loved reading it. i knew after coming back to delhi they will face problem. but wonder why arnav chose that khushi won't work for him, cause if she won't work how will she plan her business of jaleebi junction.