ARSHI FF:ONE NIGHT STAND 2 (cr) THREAD TWO - Page 58

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
hmm khushi baby thinks about asr
loved kitty khushi scene
khushi arnav both in one room😲
lets see aage kya hota hai
loved ur ff appy
thnks for dis
n thnks for pm 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting 4 the nxt updt...
thnx 4 the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
They were sending pulkit to UK for his treatment..
Loved how Khushi was thinking about Arnav...
Aww...Now Khushi will be always in front of Arnav ...
Cant wait to see how will Arnav reach when he came to know about the kitty..
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow Appy_Indy. . .
just read the update. . .
too cute acer . . .
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when i read the chapter title,i was confused,but later,as i read it,i got it.. .
btw,acer sounds so similar to ASR. . .
😳
lavanya used to call Arnav ASR,but her voice made it sound like acer,all the time i was thinking this only!
😆
good comparison of Khushi's care towards acer,to that of Arnav's care for Khushi after their 'first night'. . .
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God,loved reading that now Khushi will be in Arnav's cabin. . .😃
its going good. . .
i guess next update will be a little light,containing acer meeting ASR,don't know,just a wild guess. . .😳
well,thanks for the pm Appy_Indy. . .
i truly enjoyed reading you post,when do i not enjoy!
😉
waiting for more. . .update soon and pm me. . .😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG..thats such a cute lookinh kittten ..very adorable.

the update was awesome.

i loved how arnav is gonna make her work in his chamber. hahah
cant wait for another update,
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww such a cute update 😳😳😳😳
thanx alot fr d PM buddy 😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice nd cute update
thanx for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
OH I LOVED ACER...❤️...HE IS CHO CHWEET...WELL ARELIEF FROM DARKNESS IS THIS...THANK U FOR THIS CHAPTER...
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Posted: 13 years ago
THIS COMMENT IS FOR YOUR NOTE BELOW AND ABOVE THE UPDATE:
😊

***Above THE UPDATE-
yes,you should actually wait for 400 likes,as for me,i have done liking,check out if you doubt!
😳
you write too good,and definately deserve these many,and many more pages. . .
love your updates Appy_Indy. . .
😊

***below THE UPDATE-
yeah,i agree,the storyline,and main plot of the story is dark,but that does not mean,that each update must be dark!
and yes,i would personally really like to read Khushi's POV. ..😊
You do that very well. . .(actually,you draft everything very well)
😳
you have full right to keep your updates on hold,but plz be back soon,i would be waiting!
😊

its said that,if writer enjoys writing,readers enjoy reading even more. . .and its justified by this-
you said you personally enjoyed writing this part,well,i say i personally enjoyed waiting for it,and getting the pm on it,and finally reading and commenting on it. . .😉😳
its always a pleasure reading your Work,i toh loved ASR you described, and after all,its his character. . that's why he has to be dark,as the story demands. . .
.and who ever has a problem,screw them,let them not read if they don't like. . .
i toh would say don't give them a Damm. . .
i toh loved this light HEART update of yours . .
😊
already waiting for more. . .
carry on. . .
(hope you remember me,i am whom you addressed as-"The one will gives long comments"
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happy writing. . .
love-Shraddha. . .😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome Update...loved it..
wow Khushi ko new friend mil gayi...ACER..
She is So cute...
Khushi Kitty ko Office me leke aayi...
Loved the Office scene... Khushi, ASR and Kitty...haha
ASR pata chalega toh kya Hoga...

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