MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #7 Thrd8 link 158 - Page 33

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Superb Update
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I Like Both
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Lagta hai ki maneet ko bhool gayi ho.That's not fair.Jaldi update karo pls
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youv'e got such a beautiful voice!!
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I am extremely sorry for the delayed updates but this week was really hectic for me. I will try to be regular with my updates from now onwards.

love-Piya

PART 42

Brij: Main Brij hoon darasal mera beta hospital mein admit hai aur uske ilaaz ke liye 4 lakh ki zarurat hai. Iss bag mein 2 lakh rupaye hai jo maine abhi bank se nikale hai. Sir ye meri puri zindagi ki kamayi hai aur filhaal operation shuru karne ke liye inn paiso ka hospital pauchna behet zaruri hai. Main jaise hi bank se bahar nikla najaane kaha se kuch gunde mere peeche padh gaye shayad unhe pata chal gaya ke mere paas kafi paise hai badi mushkil se jaan bachathe hue yaha tak paucha hoon Sir agar aap bura naa mane toh kya aap mujhe ABC Hospital tak lift de sakthe hai? [I am Brij. My son is in a serious condition and I am in need of Rs. 4 lakh for his treatment. Sir the bag that I am carrying right now has in all Rs 2 lakh in it. I removed this money from the bank right now and this money is the fruit of my lifelong hardships. As soon as I removed this money some goons started following me may be they got a hint that I am carrying a good amount of cash with me with great difficulty I was successful in reaching this place. Sir if u don't mind can u pls drop me thill ABC hospital it is really important as the life of my child is dependent on this money]

Maan placed his hand on his shoulder and tried to ease his tension

Maan: Ghabrao mat Brij main tumhe hospital drop kar detha hoon jab tak main tumhare saath hoon wo gunde tumhara baal bhi baaka nahi kar sakthe [Don't worry Brij I will drop u to the hospital and as long as I am with u no one can create problems for u]

Brij thanked Maan and Maan led him to his car

Maan noticed innocence in his eyes but he failed to concentrate on the evil smirk that was making way to Brij's face thus making it clear that his intentions were not good

Maan was trapped in an ocean of crocodile tears and was hence heading towards a big problem

Brij kept on crying throughout the drive to gain Maan's sympathy

He was looking behind after every second minute with horrified expressions

Maan: Fikr mat karo Brij humara peecha koi nahi kar raha [Don't worry Brij no one is following us]

Brij gave a weak smile

Brij: Ji Sir [Yes Sir]

Maan kept on driving and none of them felt the need to speak

After a while the traffic came to a halt at a particular place

It was a checkpost and the police officials were carrying out a vigourous enquiry as all the vehicles were been checked

Maan: Ye kaisi checking chal rahi hai? [What checking is going on?]

Brij's expressions changed as soon as he heard this word

Maan: Kya hua tum phir se pareshan kyun lag rahe ho? [What's the matter why r u looking so tensed?]

Brij: Kya haina iss checking mein kafi waqt lag jaayega mujhe hospital pauchne mein der ho sakthi hai toh main soch raha tha ke agar aap bura na maane toh main nikal lu? [This checking might take a lot of time and I have to reach the hospital on time if u don't mind can I go on my own from here?]

Maan: Par hospital toh ab bhi dur hai tum agar paidal jaayoge tab bhi tumhe der ho jaayegi [But the hospital is still at a good distance from here u will be late if u go walking]

Brij: Yaha se ek kachha rasta hai main hospital 10 minute mein pauch jaayunga [There is a shortcut from here I will be able to reach within 10 minutes]

Maan: Thik hai main tumhe rokunga nahi par [Okay I won't stop u but']

Brij: Par kya Sir? [But what Sir?]

Maan removed his checkbook and entered an amount of 2 lakhs in it

As Maan was busy writing the check Brij carefully placed one packet in his car in such a way that Maan failed to notice it

Maan: Ye lo brij tumhare bachhe ke ilaaz mein kaam aayenge [Take this Brij it will help u in the treatment of ur child]

Brij: Sir main ye kaise le saktha hoon? [Sir how can I take this?]

Maan: Isse apne bade bhai ki taraf se ek choti si madat samajlo [Consider this as a small help from your big brother]

Brij: Mujhe samaj nahi aa raha ke main aapka shukriyaada kaise karu? [I fail to understand the correct way in which I should thank you]

Maan: Ye sab baate chodo aur jaakar apne bachhe ka khayal rakho [Forget all these things and go and take care of your child]

Brij gives a smile to Maan and accepts his check

He opens the door and carefully walks towards a particular direction

Maan started waiting patiently for his turn what he did not notice was the bag that Brij was carrying was still there in the backseat of his car

Meanwhile,

Brij: Aaj toh teri lottery lag gayi Brij; nakli aasu ke 2 lakh mil gaye aur uss maal ko churakar bhagne se jo khatra tune modh liya tha uss khatre ki ghanti bhi tune uss MSK ke gale mein baand di [U won a lottery today Brij as u got an award of 2 lakhs for shedding fake tears and on top of the risk that u had taken by stealing that secret thing has also been passed on to MSK's life]

Brij: Sorry Maanji par kya karu aapko fasane ka toh koi irada nahi tha iss bande ka par police ko saamne dekhkar apni toh sitipiti gum ho gayi wo kya haina apna toh bus ek hi usool hai jab khud ki jaan par ban aaye toh apne sage sambhandiyon ko bhi maut ke muh mein daal doh aur aap toh mere kuch bhi nahi lagte issliye aapko phasakar mera nuksaan toh nahi balki fayda hi hua hai [I am sorry Maan I had no intension to trap u in this mess but I have a rule that I follow religiously. I believe that if uhave to save my life then u should not hesitate in trapping your loved ones also then u are a mere stranger to me and my trapping u I have not lost anything infact I have only gained profit]

Brij: Ab police ke lafde se toh main bach gaya aur wo dusri gang wale jo mere jaan ke peeche pade the wo ab tere sar par thathaiya karenge. Haha musibat tujhe mubarak aur ye paise hume mubarak [The police will question u and the goons of the other gang who were behind my life will now dance on your head. You enjoy the list of endless problems and let me enjoy the freely obtained money]

Meanwhile,

Maan moved his car ahead as it was now his turn to go through the formalities

Maan: Good Morning Sir

Inspector: Good Morning Maan Sir. Kya aap hume apne car ki chabi de sakthe hai? [Good Morning Maan Sir. Can u pls give us your car keys?]

Maan handed the keys to the officer and stepped out of his car

The junior inspectors started searching the car

Maan: Ye checking kis baat ki ho rahi hai? [What is the purpose of this checking?]

But before the inspector could give a reply his assistant uttered something in his ear

The Senior Inspector excused himself and went ahead to examine Maan's car

After few seconds

Inspector: Maanna padega aapko aap wakayi mein ek fantastic actor hai [You deserve an appreciation as indeed u r a fantastic actor]

Maan: Main kuch samjha nahi [Sorry I didn't get u]

Inspector: Aap puch rahe thena ke ye inquiry kyun ho rahi hai par iska jawab toh aapse behter shayad hi koi jaan saktha hai [U were asking the reason behind this inquiry but I guess no one can answer this question better than u]

Maan: What r u trying to say?

Inspector placed a packet in front of his eyes

Inspector: Apna drama bannd karo tumhari acting movies mein acchi lagti hai asal zindagi mein nahi. [Stop acting in front of us; keep ur acting skills for ur movies and not for the real world]

Maan: Tameez se baat kijiye Inspector [Mind your tongue Inspector]

Inspector: Drugs ka packet lekar apne car mein ghoom raha hai aur tu hume tameez shikane ki baat kar raha hai? [U r carrying packets of drugs in ur car and u expect us to talk to u properly?]

Maan: (shocked) Ye bag mera nahi hai Inspector infact mujhe drugs se sakht nafrat hai aap mera yakeen manniye main nahi jaanta ke ye packet mere car mein kaise aaya? [This bag does not belong to me Inspector. Pls believe me I have a strong hatred towards drugs I really can't understand how this packet came into my car]

Inspector: Jo bhi safayi deni hai police station chalkar dijiyega [U can defend yourself at the police station]

Saying so the officials arrested Maan on the charges of drug trafficking

Meanwhile,

In LA

Geet was getting negative vibes

She didn't knew about the exact reason but she was sure she had to go to India at any cost

The foresome were having a friendly chat when Geet walked out of her room and announced

Geet: Main India jaana chahathi hoon [I want to leave for India]

This was an unexpected sentence from Geet

Prem: Geet mazak bannd karo aur yaha aau hum sab ek fantastic game khel rahe hai [Geet stop cracking jokes and join us we r playing a fantastic game]

Geet: Ye mazak nahi hai main abhi issi waqt India jaa rahi hoon aur ye mera aakhiri faisla hai [I am not cracking jokes I am leaving for India right now and this is my final decision]

Adi: Par tu India jaana kyun chahthi hai? Kya rakha hai waha tera? [But why do u want to go to India? What's there in India?]

Geet: Mere paas kisi bhi sawal ka jawab nahi hai bus itna samaj lijiye ke meri ruh ko chain India jaakar hi milega [I don't have any answers to ur questions but I can only say one thing that my soul will find peace only after reaching India]

Prem and Adi were going to say something but Sanju who was now Geet's best friend somewhere understood her hidden turmoil and decided to take charge of the situation

Sanju: Geet tu yahi chahthi haina ke hum teri movie ko India mein promote kare haina? [Geet u want to promote this movie in India right?]

Sanju did not wait for an answer and started talking to Brad

Sanju: Brad if we promote the movie in India it will work wonders for our movie; so if u don't mind Geet and I will go to India for promoting the movie; u guys can continue the promotion of this movie over here. In this way we would be successful in endorsing our movie on a larger scale in a short span of time

Brad: I think u r right Sanju

Before Prem and Adi could voice their objections Sanju continued

Sanju: It's a deal then I will accompany Geet to India. Come on Geet go and do ur packing till then I will arrange the tickets

Sanju was too quick; she got hold of Geet's hand and took her to her room

Geet: Thanks Sanju

Sanju: Tune bhale hi mujhe ab tak apne dil ki baat nahi batayi par teri ye dost sab samajthi hai; tu fikr mat kar tujhe India pauchane ki zimedari meri; chal packing shuru kar main tickets arrange karke aati hoon [U might have not opened ur heart in front of me but ur friend understands u perfectly; don't worry it is my responsibility to take u to India common start the packing till then I will arrange the tickets]

Geet hugged Sanju and thanked her for being her best friend

After sometime,

Sanju was successful in getting tickets on the same day and though Adi and Prem were against Geet's decision they preferred to stay quite

Sanju and Geet boarded the flight and they were on their way to India


PRECAP 1: She did not care about the world; she knew her Maan was innocent and she will not allow anyone to break him through wrong accusations. She was running towards him with immense love in her eyes. He opened his arms and she gave him a new life by submitting herself in his embrace. This hug marked the reunion of their souls and was in a way the indication of destiny that no one could separate Maaneet now'.it was a fresh start to their love story😳 😛 😊


PRECAP 2:Maan: "Ae meri zindagi tu mere saath hai ab mujhe iss zamane ki parwah nahi; Jaan dedu bhi main jaan le lu bhi main koi keemat chukane ki parwah nahi" [Oh, my life, you are with me now I have no worldly cares. I would sacrifice my life I would take a life; I don't care in fixing any price]😳 😛 😊

Okay guys let me tell u the precap is 100% a REALITY and NOT A DREAM😳

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Love-Piya

Part 43: Page 94

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Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
like it...
hpoe its true they meet...
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awesome.Precap bhi achchha hai par mujhe lagta hai ki Maan ko thora sa prayashchit aur karna chahiye
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Congrates on new thread n waiting 4 updates
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awesome dear waiting for nxt

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