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Posted: 19 years ago
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good part but i think there's mix-up with AK and Garv and Kumud 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yeah me too..... its confusing but interesting... plz continue SOOOONNNNN.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
greazt part
a bit confuse but interesting
continue soooooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyyy!!..those parts were gr8!!..i just got confused when u missed AK with Garv and Kumud!!..but its really good!!..cont soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks and i'm glad that all of you like it!!! I have good ideas for this story!! 😳
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ohh those were nice continue soon
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wow realy good continue soon first time i read a story in which kripa did fight back when angad was sleeping with her it is to good continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey great fanfic....continue soon im so excited!!! this is a great start of a fanfic 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey kool ff...i like tha concept!!cant wait for tha next prt!!!cont soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks everyone!!

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Part 3:

Angad walks into his mom's room...To explain why he doesnt want to go on a Honey Moon with Kripa.

N- Hi Angad Beta. come sit

A- Ok

N- Angad why werent you at Kripa's Mooh Dikiea?? Its important for the husband to be their

A (in his mind)- Now I have to explain to mom too..(to Naina) Umm...It waz buzy at the office,Sorry

N- Oh God!! Ur office Na...

A- Ya Mom,Hey mom I wanted to talk to you about my Honey Moon

N- Haan Bolo...

A- I'm kinda buzy and I dont think Kripa wants to go either so I thought We could just

N- We could just what Angad?

A- PostPhone it?

N- Well Angad your suppose to go on your Honey Moon sort of rite after your wedding! And its for u kids to find out about eachother a bit more and......

A(in his mind)- More like ALOT!!

N- Did you say something beta??

A- Huh Um nO,Nothing

N- What was I saying,Oh Ya and Its to bring yourself closer and just to relax,But If your buzy and dont want to go thats your decision,but most couples are anxious to go on HoneyMoon's after there married...So its all your choice.

A- Thanx Mom! You're the best!

N- Ya...Ok I gotta go for my check up,You Do no that I have to go for a check up today iam a heart patient

A- Oh... but next time dont remind me...ok lets go!

N- Ok..Tell Kripa your leaving

A- Ok

IN ANGAD AND KRIPAS ROOM!

K- What did she say?

A- She said its our decision,An dif we dont want to go we dont have to

K- Oh, (SO HAPPY INSIDE)

A- Oh Im going for a check up,I mean Im going with mom to her check up

K- ok What ever!

Angad leaves from their and both are sooooo happy!

Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 19 years ago

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