FF arshi : and he returned! part 16 updated!!!!!

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
You wrote so well I could imagine khushi looking gorgeous... Hope their plans don't harm these two and are foiled...loved the update, thanks for the pm. I am travelling next week so may not be able to read or comments, but will be back and make up...

thnx !!! um happy that i was able to portray her with the details !! 😳😳😳😳

thnx for liking it and commenting...and no problem

it's okay...have a safe trip and 😃

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
awesome update loved it having a feeling something gonna happen in the party n khushi in ruby red saree loved the update thanks for the pm

yes! she was in a RUBY RED NET SAREEE ☺️ lol

thank you!

and u're welcome! 😉

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
Nice part
Arnav and khushi look like the perfect couple..each complimenting the other.

Have a feeling that something bad is going to happen in the party

please continue soon

hmmm...let's see what happenes in the party 😆😆😆

i'll continue sooN Inshallah!

thnx😳

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: naksh2227
It is amazing @mushfika dear and Big😆😆 No doubt in that and yes high FIve...Love how you portray shy khushi and naughty ARNav...😳

dhinka chika!

YAY!!!! it was BIGGG!!!! high five!! LOL

oh thank you thank you!! ☺️

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#595

Awesome update...Thanks for the PM

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: KaShArHi_Krishi
Heyyy!!! YAY, FIRST TO COMMENT!!! Awesome part. Khushi's reaction to big parties was funny. I hope that Shyam doesn't come to this party but I am pretty sure he will. 😡Or maybe he will do something else bad!! Why did Arnav leave her alone??Please continue soon. Thanks for the PM!!

Krishi

AHA!!!! High five, girl!!! CONGRATS ur the first 1...lol i was laughing when i saw the first comment "RES" LOL 🤣

hhaha i know! but she has never been to these parties so...must b like that 😉😉...

well let's see what happenes next 😆😆
i'll continue tomorrw!
and now problem

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Paramjit

@Paramjit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#597

Awesome update loved it, poor Khushi all nervous hope she is okay. Thank you for the wonderful update. Please update soon, if possible pm me.

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 13 years ago

#598

OOHUGH! That was mean of him to leave her alone at the party like that, especially knowing that she was not used to them. Uff! I'm beginning to dislike him. He's sooo inconsiderate!!!!! AAARRRGGGHHH!!!!!! I hope he realizes and comes back and treats her better and apologizes!!!!! Thanks for the update. Can't wait to find out what happens next. I feel sad for her. Seems like he only wants her for sex!!!!!!! I hope I am wrong!

tfs.