DESTINY'S DESIRE AR FF PART 5 UD ON PG 20 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: bhavyaksgians

superb...awsome part...

so marriage is done and still both dont saw each other face...
wanted to know what happen when they are actually face each other??????😕
its gonna interesting ...
do update soon...
thanx 4 pm...😊


heYY..
THX FOR reading
and commenting
haan ab ar soon milne wale hain

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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: KaJen_addiction

very interesting! AR r married 2 eachother nd they still dont knot about it! looking 4ward 2 next update...cont soon nd do pm me


thx
we will ud soon
and pm u ttoo

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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome start cant wait please pm me when you update next thanks


no prob
we will pm u soom
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Fimmy

wow!!! awsome...eagerly waiting 4 next part...cont soon


thx fimmy
we will ud sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
DESTINY'S DESIRE

PART 3

Destinys Desire

Hey guys.. hope u enjoyed part 2 the shaadi.. now onto the main part which u all have been waiting forr...YES thts ryt..
but im not gona telll u. ull fynd out urself..
Guys thx for all ur comments.. We have replied to them so pls chek na..
Now enjoy and pls comment guys

Malik mansion...
AR before coming into the house have to complete all rasams ...
Once that is done Khushi meaning Armaan's brother Arnav's wife and his sister-in-law takes riddhima inside to Armaan's room...

Khu: Hi im Khushi apki pati ki bhabhi...
RI: Hi bhabhi
Khu: I kno tum bohot nervous hogi... But trust me mera devar bohot sweet hain.. vo tumhara bohot acha khayal rakhengaa...
Ri: Jee
Khu: Aur itni formal mat ho... mujhe apni behen mano...
Ri: thanks bhabhi..
Khu: thx mat kahi..Tum kitni pyaari ho...Ab mujhe jaana hoga.. bas yeh gungat pehen lo phirse..
Hamara ghar ke rhit riwaaj hain yeh
Ri: ok bhabi...
Khushi goes off

Meanwhile...downstairs in lounge..
Arnav: Armaan...excited ho tumhare wife ko dekhne ka
Ammy: bro stop na.. its not funny..
Arnav: Oh ok.. sorry.. vaise howd u think she will b
Amy:Very lyk me... and vo bohot pretty hogi...I hope na...
Arnv: dont b nervous my lil bro...
Jiaa: Ya bro,..bet shell b wicked
Ammy: look hres khushi

Arnav: babe... i... i mean khushi...
Khushi goes red
Khu:kya?
Arnav: vooo..tell my bro how his wife's like
Khu: oh devar ji.. shes so pyaari aur bohot sundar hain.. U will love her
Ammy: really bhabs
Khu: devar.. main apki bhai ki tarah nahi hu jo hamesha mazak karta rehta hain...
Ammy: i trust u bhabs
Ana: behta hum soon tori deenon main jaane wale hain abroad...To get to know ur wife bettter na... ab to tumhe tumhara room main jaana hoga..
Ammy: ok mom
Jiaa: yea goo. enjoy bro...
He throws a pillow at her..

While walking up the stairs.. armaan thinking of what to say to her...
Armaan to himself: *Ok.. u can do this dude...Ill jus say..yea Hi im Armaan..And ur?* GOd.. help me .. Kya bholu.

Armaan reaches his room.. He slowly opens his door, and sees riddhima sitting on the bed like a bride. with her gungat down. He closes the door behind him.. RIddhima hears this and wipes away her tears.. She had been crying as she was remembering her family...
Armaan came further and sat on the edge of the bed. There was a silent moment until ammy decided to break the ice..
Ammy: Urmm... hiii im Armaan...and ur riddhima right..
Ridzi: yea...hiii
Amy: okk. well mujhe tumhara gungat utta na chahye na..ryt
Riddzi: haan..
Ammy goes forward and puts his hand at the bottom of the gungat and slowly pulls it up trying to make out her face

He finally pulls it up and lets go

Ammy: aaarggghhh...tumm..
Ridzi: aaahhh...Tummm...Tummm yaha kya kar rahe ho..
Ammy: OH HELLO..tum meri ghar main kya kar rahee ho?
Ridzi: yeh tumhara ghar nahi hain... yeh mera new husband ka hain
Ammy: wait a min... MERE SHAADI TUMHARE SAATH HUI..OH NO..
Ridzi: what...nooo...maine tumhe 10th standard se jaante hu..Tab se i hated u aur ab ...
Ammy: shut up basket...u dnt make sense u know
Ridzi: u shut up dufford..im the smart one...n dont call me basket
Ammy: mujhe yaakin nahi ho raha ki mom dad ne meri shaadi tumse ki..yukh...
Ridzi: god help me... mujhe iss bandar ke saath nahi rehna
Ammy: wait a min... mujhe pata hain.tumne purposely ye sab kiya ..tumne tumhare parents ko mere parents ke saath milwaai...taake tum mujhse shaadi karsako...how cheap. if u love me jus say it

Ridzi: ewww...love aur tumse.no thx. vaise bhi maine aisa kuch nehi kiya...i d rather marry a donkey...
AmmY:toh karlo main kaha rok raha hu...
Ridzi: yeh shaadi..god...ab main kya karooo
Ammy: mar jau
Ridzi; kyun..tum khud mar jau.. na
Ammy; basket its a joke...yaa...
RidzI; its not a time 4 a joke armaan

They fight lyk this and bicker for a long tym
Until...

Riddhima yawns...

Ridzi: ill fight with u tommow...and sort dis out...mujhe neend aarahi hain..
Ammy: haann tum to princess ho na
Ridzi: main yaha bed pe sau jaate hu aur tum vaha couch pe sau jawoo...
Ammy: oh hello...yeh mera bed hain..main yaha pe sau jawooongaa...tumhe jaha sau naha tum vaha jau..
Ridzi: no way,..i ll sleep here..
Ammy: fine..mera saath ek bed main...U REALLY WANT TOO
Ridzi: ewww...no way...

She stands on top of the bed
Ridzi: nahi main bed pe
Ammy gets on top of the bed: no me
Ridzi: NO ME
Ammy: ME
Ridzi: u on couch..GO
Ammy: no U GO

They jump on the bed shouting at each other so much that the bed creaks and it breaks down...with a crash

Ammy: dekha tumne kya kiya.. mera bed tooth gaya tumhare waja se...
Ridzi: meri waja se.tum kitne fat ho ...Tumhare waja se. vaise bhi main thin hu...
Ammy: haan watever...

Ammy and Riddhima see the couch.. and run to it
Ammy: tum ne kaha ke main couch pe sleep karoongaa. to main aapki baat kaise daal sakta hu..
Ridzi: no its ok.. main yaha pe sleep karta hu...
Ammy; ok ... Lets flip a coin
Ridzi: fine im heads
Ammy: guess im tails

Ammy flips the coin and lands on heads

Ridzi: yay...i won...GEt the blankets for u.. ive got the couch
Ammy: whatever..ANyway ive got more room on the floor
Ridzi:watever.. mines comfier..

Armaan closes the light and riddhima sleeps on the couch

During the night there is not much space on the couch and it causes her to fall down next to armaan well basically into his arms...
So she stayed there the whole night in his arms...And armaan not knowing pulled her closer...
Thats how their suhaag raat went...

Hope u enjoyed everyone... Next part will b updated soon by us...Pls comment and tell us ur feedback and what u think of this part we wrote...
Thx soo much...
tc.
Luv u all lots .
keep reading and commenting...
AMMY & SAMMARA
WE WILL UD SOON WITH PART 4!!!
😊





Edited by Sammaraxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Hey😊 great part! love their fighting! hahaha they broke the bed! 😆 aawwe she fell in his arms!!! and he pulled her closer to himself!!! i cant wait to see their expressions when they wake up!! 🤣 Continue soon and thanks for the pm 😃

Lots Of Love, Nayab
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Hey dear...Love the part...So AR knew each other and on top of that they hate each other...OMG,just love their bickering...looking forward to read more so do try to continue soon... Thanks fort the PM...Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

hey one request

plz apni script thodi change karlo...
as per ur CS AR hates each other
aur ye topic...
max har ff main miilega,
main ye nhi keh rhi poori script change karo...
thodi si
like
abhi AR ekdusre ko jaante hai aur hate karte hai...
toh aap bus unhe sirf strangers bana do

aise story read karne main thoda maza aayega...
I dont want AR fights and then love...
yaar its too boring...

sorry if i hurt u...
its only my pov...
last decision will be yours...


thanx kirti for ur suggestion...
but we can't change our topic...bcz me and sammara what we decided about concept...
if we try to change the topic then full story turn into different concept...
so we are really sorry about that...
and u didn't hurt us...i m happy that u share ur views with us..
thank you very much for ur precious suggetion...
keep give us suggetion like this to improve our writting skill...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
ARs suhaagraat was funny! they broke da bed! lol! cant wait 2 c their reactions when theyll find themselves in eachothers arms! cont soon thnx 4 pm

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