ARSHI FF : Devil in Disguise (05/09)

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nina

@nina-loca

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

Awesome update dear but quite short 😃😭
Kushi cooking for the family ... great 😉
Loved the fact that everybody praised her 😳
The asr jealousy is a treat to read 👏
Nk is back in the picture 😊
Nani , akash , anjali , and shyam support kushi ⭐️

Shyam is having a positive role in this ff i guess ... adding oil on the fire LOL "If this is poison ... " Shyam said sarcastically, " Then I'm more than happy dying now having tasted something so good."

And Kushi is quiet worried about something that's for sure
Update soon dear asuma
love ya too

Edited by nina-loca - 13 years ago

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

Lovely update. But felt it was a bit short. Loved it absolutely. Waiting to read more.

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asumaa

@asumasan

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: ipkkndrokzz4va

I liked the update...!!👍🏼 but it was TOOO short!!🤔

the first 6 chapters were too GOOD!!🤪

But to be honest...the storyline is lacking in class...!😳

Please don't take it as a bashing...but as an advice...!🤗

My storyline is lacking in class...! Sounds like bashing to me !!! where is your advice ?

I need constructive critique on my story , so i am asking opinions on it to try and boost my confidence.
I REALLY need some motivation to keep writing ... and you are not helping my dear 😳

Edited by asumasan - 13 years ago

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pinky89

@pinky89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Great update !!!! Loved it

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nina

@nina-loca

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Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: asumasan

My storyline is lacking in class...! Sounds like bashing to me !!!

I need constructive critique on my story , so i am asking opinions on it to try and boost my confidence.
I REALLY need some motivation to keep writing ... and you are not helping my dear 😳

I'm tired of hearing that fanfic is easier to write than original fiction. It's not a training ground for beginners. It's not a kit with all the parts pre-cut !!!

Well done dear asuma 👏

Writing fanfic is harder to write than original fiction in a handful of ways :

1- The boundaries of what you can decide to do are less flexible.

2- Fans' preconceptions are strict and need to be considered.

3- Fans are less accepting of changes in characters.

4- You have a lot to live up to.

These things make writing harder ... Your Awesome job is much appreciated my dear !!! Keep that in mind.

PS : DON'T LIKE ... DON'T READ SIMPLE

Edited by nina-loca - 13 years ago

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arnavlover97

@arnavlover97

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Posted: 13 years ago

#376

Very nice update. I wish it would be longer though. I liked Arnav in this chapter. Thank you for the pm.

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asumaa

@asumasan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: arnavlover97
Very nice update. I wish it would be longer though. I liked Arnav in this chapter. Thank you for the pm.

Thx dear i ll make sure to make the next one longer 😉

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smashitup

@smashitup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#378

👏 his disturbed sleep and the family all around breakfast was so cute ! x

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asumaa

@asumasan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: nina-loca

I'm tired of hearing that fanfic is easier to write than original fiction. It's not a training ground for beginners. It's not a kit with all the parts pre-cut !!!

Well done dear asuma 👏

Writing fanfic is harder to write than original fiction in a handful of ways :

1- The boundaries of what you can decide to do are less flexible.

2- Fans' preconceptions are strict and need to be considered.

3- Fans are less accepting of changes in characters.

4- You have a lot to live up to.

These things make writing harder ... Your Awesome job is much appreciated my dear !!! Keep that in mind.

PS : DON'T LIKE ... DON'T READ SIMPLE

IMPORTANT NOTE !!!!

Thx hun ... Good list of things to keep in mind.
I don't ask for fake compliments you know

Critique doesn't bother me as long as it's constructive !!!

when you criticize someone you should walk a mile in their shoes : Be clear ... Be specific and to the point.

Sometimes you just have to roll with the punches, take what's coming to you, then get back in the ring and serve up some of your own.

Many of your readers are reading fanfic because you know the original source very well already and you're looking for more -- but you know the source so well that you're capable of spotting and picking at any flaw. That's natural; you love the source, right?

So if you see something that violates the source, YOU ARE GOING TO NOTICE. And it's going to bug you, more than it would bug you if you didn't love the source, because the writer is spreading bad writerness on a thing you love. You're going to expect that a good fanfic be really awesome, because it's a homage to something you love, and to be a good homage it had better be worthy. So I understand because I love the SOURCE too witch is "IPKKND"

Sayonara 😉

Edited by asumasan - 13 years ago