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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KaJen_addiction

Very nice part!
glad Ridz told Armaan everything!
whose this angel???
cont soonish
thnx 4 pm

Sunita :-)


thank u Sunita
Yes i thought it wud b better if Ridz told Ammy
This angel????
hmmm i cannot tell u tht yet it is a suprise.
u cud guess though ??
I will cont soon
ur welcm
wasnt a problem
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: teenorchid

awww...mr dobrial is soo pagalll... Who is mr angel. Armaan ko ridz se naraz hona chahye.. She hide such big tthings from him...he is soo sweeettt... Love her soo much..

haha yes dobriyal is...pagal .lol
this mr angel is a suprise...
who knows who it cud b?
Yaa ur ryt he shud have been na.
But due to his love he cudnt i gues.
thx Farwa for commenting
ill ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear

Love the update
Awwiiee Poor Ridzy
Feeling so bad for her
But thank god that she have Armaan with her
And Armaan
well he is a sweetheart
I so waana know about angel yaar
So do try to continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet

Hey Geet
Thx a lot for loving it...
i kno AR are together so kya darna.
Yes u will find out about this angel very soon
yes i will continue
Soon
no prob ur welcm

luv
Sammara
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Amazing part.
I loved ther sweet talks of friends.
I really feel bad for Ridz.
So Arnab is her father and Riddhima is Panchi and Misha's step sister.
I'm glad that Ridz told the truth to Armaan.
I loved the way Armaan assured Ridz that he will be always there with her.
What problem does Arnab have?
Who is Ridz's angel?
Plz update the next part soonest.
Take care!

Heyy
Thx asma
Yes arnab is her father and
misha, panchi her sisters
Well its gud she told armaan
Arnab's prob..,
hmmm we will see soon
what that is.
I will ud the next part very soon
Thx
tc
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry_an

nice part sis⭐️..

very well done..
great writing..
n lovely pics😳⭐️

thx sis
soo much
for reading
ill ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 19

pls watch this:


Right its UD tym...THx for all ur comments,
enjoy this part n please do comment
U may recognise this ep abit from another show





Armaan goes off to the study room to find the CD
Riddhima sits down at the nearest table that she can find. still hoping that Armaan doesnt get caught !!!
Suddenly Arnab sits down on a chair near her...
Ridzi : Aapne doosre shaadi bhi karli...
Arnab: Haan par beta mere paas koi choice nahi ta
Ridzi: ya ryt. panchi aur misha mere two best friends te aur mujhe pata bhi nahi ta ki vo meri sisters hain...
Arnab: Main shaadi nahi karna chahta ta par karni pari.
Ridzi: aap baar baar kyun yeh keh rahe hain. Aap ne kabhi mujhe apni behti nahi mana. Kya aapna kabhi yeh socha ki meri behti kaise hai, kaha hai, ZINDA BHI HAIN !!
Arnab: ofcourse maine socha...Aur mujhe pata ta ki padma ti...
Ridzi: toh kya aap sab ke saamne sach bhol sakte hain
Arnab remains silent
Ridzi: i didnt think so...

Study room...
Armaan is searching in the study room keeping an eye on the door to make sure no one comes in while he is there. He searches the shelves drawers and filing cabinets... But he does not fynd the CD...The last place left to search is the closet. he goes in and luckily finds the CD sitting on top of a pile of books.He removes the cover and slips it into the inside of his jacket.

Suddenly Misha and Kabir come in at the same time.. Misha switches on the light..
She sees Armaan and is shocked and stunned as to why he is there.
Mish: Armaan, tum yaha mere papa ki office main kya kar rahe ho?. Are u trying to steal something?
She walks upto Armaan and sees that he is standing near her dad's computer
mish: oh my gosh,Armaan were u trying to log on to my dad's computer?
Ammy: listen Misha, aisa kuch nahi hai jo tum keh rahe ho
Mish: Main tumhe blind ya dumb dikhti hu? Party to bahar hain toh office main kya kaam ta. I always felt ki tumhari aur riddhima ki relationship bht galat hai. the only person right for her is...
Kabir; sssh. misha chup raho ab
Armaan gets angry due to misha's comment.. But does not create a drama out of it
Misha: No kabir. Call Papa right now
Ammy: Kabir ! (Kabir goes from there) .Listen Misha. Just dont panic and create a scene. ill explain everything
Mish: no explanations needed.

Kabir goes to find Arnab, and whispers in hushed tones to him
Arnab and his wife Madhu rush upstairs along with Kabir.
Panchi sees her parents and tries to stop them to ask what had happened. They dont listen and carry on walking..Panchi grabs hold of Kabir's hand..
Kabir tells Panchi what had happened and Riddhima over hears this and is absoloutly stunned.
Riddhima follows them and whispers to herself
Ridzi: * Oh no.. ab kya hoga. no i will not let armaan get insulted in front of everyone. I wont let him spoil his reputation. Armaan ne mere liye kya kuch nahi kiya he is the ideal husband*

Arnab and Madhu reach upstairs
Misha: Papa look at him. Dekho na vo yaha pe steal karne aaya ta. Aapki computer main sneak in kar raha ta. Papa jus calll the police and let them deal with him
Arnab walks up to Armaan
Arnab: Yeh sab kya hai? Kya kar rahe te tum yaha par.. Iss bar toh hadd kardi chori karne aayi ta. Saza jaante ho iske. Zindagi bar jail challe jaugi.
Armaan stays quiet for Riddhima's sake
Arnab raises his hand.
Ridzi .: NO !!!

Mish: what no. whats the matter with u. Isne tumpe kya magic kardiya hain. I know tumhara husband hain par tum iski side le rahe ho defending him. Me, Panchi ne tumhe family ki tarah treat kiya. Itna pyar diya, itna support diya for what takii tum isse support karo jo hamare ghar se chori kar raha hain.


Ridzi: BAS MISHA!! Jo baate tumhare samajh main nahi aati, unne main interfere karni ki koi zaroorat nahi hain. Kya jaante ho tum pyar ki baare main. huh, What do u know about love.?jo main hamesha armaan se karti aayi hu. Tumne kabhi kisise pyar kiya hai. Main jaanti hu armaan ko. Hes not a thief!!

Armaan: Riddhima

Ridzi: Bas Armaan... Misha ne mujhpe apni dosti ka ek ehsaan kiya hai. In sabne mere saath pyar jatake mujhpe ek ehsaan kiya.. Jab main london main ti mom ke binato mujhe apne dilon mai jagaa di ... Ryt? Misha yahi ti tumhare dosti.. Ke ek problem main tumne mujhe apne saare ehsaano ki list mujhe ghina di,. You kno what mujhe ab kisi ki ehsaan ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. As a fact main iss ghar main ek minute nahi rehna chahte. Armaan challo lets leave from here. Challo yaha se

Misha: WAIT !!!! DJ agar tumhe hamare friendship ek ehsaan lagti hain toh u can leave but not him. Frisk him Jai.

Jai goes and checks in all of Armaan's pocket then finds the CD in the inside of his jacket unknown of what the CD is.
Riddhima is still very tensed

Jai: here misha.
Armaan grabs the CD from Jai's hand and breaks it with his hands
Misha: What the hell ?Your such a loser Armaan. Chori karne aaye te aur sabse maamuli cheez chori karke jaa rahe ho.Yeh CD maine papa ki anniversary ke liye banayi ti.. Jisme papa ki kuch purane yaadein hain
Ammy:I know tht.
Misha: Its got nothing for u
Suddenly Arnab realises why Armaan was trying to steal the CD. It is what Armaan and Riddhima had planned

Riddhima stares at Arnab her father to see his reaction
He keeps silent


Misha: u are such a fool man. and u , u make me sick Riddhima. Papa aap isse aise hi jaane denge .. Why arent u calling the cops?
Ridzi has enough and shouts at Arnab.
Ridzi: Aap kuch kehte kyun nahi aap? Kuch bholte kyun nahi? Kab tak bahane banate rahenge.. Iss life main mujhe ek chance dije jo mujhe aapki wajah se sharminda nahi hona padhe.
DO SOMETHING !!! SAY SOMETHING !!!!

Mish: What the hell !! Why u talking to my papa like that...
Misha pulls Riddhima by the hand and flings her across the room and hits the glass cupboard in anger.


The glass breaks and Riddhima falls down with her head bleeding intensely.
Everyone present is shocked by Misha's act.
Riddhima's eyes are closed and the blood carries on running down her neck...Armaan rushes towars Riddhima and tries to wake her
Ammy: Riddhima pls open ur eyes. kuch bholo na pls.
He whispers her name and gathers her in his arms ...He then removes the glass pieces from her neck

Arnab who is shocked and silent rushes to Riddhima calling out her name...
Misha watches this numbed.
Arnab: Riddhima...my daughter... Riddhima...Riddhima..
Arnab looks at the amount of blood
Arnab: Bht khoon hain. somebody do something pls. do something shes going to die... aankehn kholo ..Riddhima ur a strong girl.. Riddhima ur brave girl.. Kuch nahi hua tumhe.. open ur eyes. aankhen kholo...
Armaan does not stop him at alll
Arnab: Kisne. Kisne kaha ki main tumse pyar nahi karta.. huh.. Kisne kaha. Ur my daughter. i love u...Meri bachi... And I LOVE UR MOTHER !!!!

After hearing this madhu starts crying and falls on a chair..

Arnab: Main bhilkul bhi sharmindar nahi hu ke tum meri beti ho... Tum kehte ti na ki main bholta nahi hu ki main tumhare liye stand up nahi karta hu.. Dekho riddhima.,. .Main bhol raha hu. pls aanken kholo..Do something... DEKH KYA RAHE HO TUM LOG ABHI AMBULANCE PHONE KARO SANJEEVANI LE JAANA HAIN.
Misha runs out of the room...Armaan picks Riddhima up..away from Arnab
Arnab: armaan. yeh kya kar rahe ho tum

Armaan: noo Mr Dobriyal. Jab Riddhima ko apni dad ki zaroorat ti tab aapne usse nahi apnaya. Toh ab yeh joothe concern dikhane ki koi zaroorat nahi., do u understand,, And im sure ke ab bhi Riddhima koi ehsaan nahi chahye. Main Riddhima ko lekar jauga. Becoz im her husband, her love n I care for her... Agar Riddhima ko kuch hogaya to main aap dono Misha aur u Mr Dobriyal ko kabhi maaf nahi karoonga. Remember that.Main Riddhima ko iss ghar main kabhi nahi rehne dunga..

He goes out of the house carrying piya into his arms and to the hospital,.. Will Riddhima Survive?

SOrry guys ye part bht acha nahi ta..
not much of AR.,
but there will b more in the next part..
Also The angel will b revealed in the next part or the one after
SO pls comment n tell me what u thought
I will ud soon
Thx 😊
luv u all 😊
Sammara 😊
Edited by Sammaraxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was realy nicely writen. Misa have a big tongue and no brain . Get wel soon ridz
Edited by krazykiller - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww... Armaaan got caught..ye kya hogaya??? Hailaaa.misha kya cheex hai yarrr... Pagal kahin ki... Musibat khari krdii... Awww ridhima is hurt...ufff... I hope she is fine... Want Ar scenes... Nd in dobrials se jaan churaoo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part.
Armaan got caught.
That's not nice.
I hate Misha so much.
She hit Ridz.
Arnab is a loser.
I'm glad that Armaan took away his Riddhima from all of them
I hope riddhima is fine.
plz update the next part soon
Take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part! hope Ridz is fine!
cont soonish
thnx 4 pm
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