swaron ff UNPREDICTABLE LIFE part 6 updated - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago


thank you dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: toshanaik3011

Awesome update

love it...
update soon...
thanks for the pm...



thanks alot dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaani2209

HiiiMIII kya yaar tu...awesome update...waise main janti thi this secret

and OMG aisa kya hai swayam ke blood report mein😲

waiting for the next update...update soon...waitinggg...

thanks for the pm...


thanks a lot dear...muje pata mystry kuch jyada ho gayi...
but dont worry going to reveal soon!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: frankyfio

beautifully written
swayam reports, ha?

So many mysteries to reveal
n im so curious to knw all them asap

update sooon



thanks dear...will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: marauder

This is getting more and more mysterious. You written this part awesomely.. Waiting for the next part.



thank you so much dear...
updating soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tanzz15

oye himani!kitna suspense me rakkhogi yaar????anyways,awesum one!really luvd it!esp swayam's(i mean KARAN ;D)pain & luv 4 sharon!hayeee...cho chewuttt!tk cr bud..huggs..thanks 4 d pm;)


no more suspence dear,i m gonna start revealing secrets with the coming update...thanks for ur luv and support
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Posted: 12 years ago
Himani darls..🤗..wat an awsm ff..
itna acha ff meri nazro se kaise bach gaya ,wen i keep stalking every swaron ff..😆

Anyways enough of my bakwas,coming to the ff,all updates wer realy nice..
the plot is realy different and sumthing new..
swayam ka double role,yaha ek swayam handle nh hota,maar hi dalegi tu to..😳
lukin fwd to the next update..
thanx for the pm..
update soon and pm me..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update himani ...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
REALLY SORRY FOR BEING SO LATE...guys m really SORRY for not replying individually...i hv started but for some reasons couldnt complete...but let me tell u guys...ur comments are only my strength and means allot to me.
so plz keep commentin, frm nxt time onward i'll def try to replay to all individually...
thanks a lot guys...love you all!!
Edited by Luvsd3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

First of all am really SORRY for updating so late…guys was lil busy wid some stuff…I hope you haven't forgot story till now….if yes then plz go through last update….here's next update I hope wid this update some of the questions are answered…..

Part-5

Krn: dad I am on my way...and would be there in 15 mins.

Karan leaves from the hospital...doctor come to know something very strange about Karan's blood report...doctor in his cabin how could this be possible...DOC to himself "aisa kaise ho sakta hai...kahi ye wo...agar aisa hai to isse badi good news kuch nai ho sakti, let me call him"...doc took out his phone and diled Mr. Veer's number...

Doc: Hello Veer come hospital as soon as possible!!!

Ve: Hey Malik what happened...anything serious?

Doc: Veer don't ask anything, just come here as soon as possible that's it.

Veer understanding the seriousness of the situation, cancelled all the meetings and reached the hospital...meanwhile he called Karan and told him to be with his mom.

Soon he was in Dr.Malik's cabin...

Ve: Malik kya hua???...tune mujhe aise itne short notice pe kyu bulaya...Uske bare me koi baat hai???...is he ok!!...come on speak out god dammit.

Doc: uhmmm...veer relax man...just calm down first.

Dr. Malik to ward boy who was in the cabin... "John could you bring two coffees please"

"Sure Doc." replied John.

As soon john gets out Malik quickly closed the door, and came back to Veer...

Doc: Veer listen to me very carefully...today Swayum brought a girl she was injured...means badly injured... (Veer cuts him in between)

Ve: What???... (Confused) Haan to what's so serious about it…..! Yeh baat thi?? You scared me dammit.

Doc: Arey meri puri baat to sun...listen this is not about the girl, it's about Swayum...

Ve: Swayum ab what about Swayum??? Use kya hua hai...???

Doc: why don't you shut your mouth and listen, what I am trying to say?

Ve: ok...ok proceed

Dr. Malik tells everything, which just happened a few hours back...From Sharon's injury till Swayum's blood test and How Swayum behaved, it was very unusual, there is really something in his heart for that girl, how much he panics for her and the most how much he cared about her.

Ve: so what's so important in this...Wait a minute the girl was Nita's cousin right...thought to himself "yeh wahi ladki hai jiske bare me Shree ne bataya tha, yaani Swayum loves her...I have to talk to him"

Doc: Aahn haan...the girl's name is Sharon Raiprakash...but that's not the big news... it's something else...!

Ve: (got frustrated)Malik stop playing puzzle game with me...main yaha itni important meeting chod k aaya hoon aur tu mujhe mujhe Swayum ki love story suna raha hai!!...come to the point or else am leaving.

Doc: wait...wait...wait so the big news or I guess the good news is...

Just then john knocked at door holding a try with two coffee mugs and some snacks. Malik let him in and bid thanks to him soon john leaves...and Dr. Malik continued.

Doc: Veer the good news is, "we have got the bone marrow"...and soon we can operate Karan. He will be fine soon.

Ve: What??

His face lighten up as if he got another life, as he has won the title of best businessman of the year, there's is no end of his happiness. His eyes filled with tears and why not it has been the best news for him in past few months after Karan's accident in India. He remember the day when Doctors told him that he could not come out of coma until his bone marrow start reacting soon and start producing blood cell or else we get the match for the same. That's only possible if and only if yours or any of your family member's bone marrow match.

Soon he come back to reality, how could be this possible cause his bone marrow doesn't match and Shree is unaware of the truth...

Ve: Malik please don't joke in this matter...how's that possible??

Doc: Do you really think that I can joke on such a serious topic...veer, Karan is like son to me...and hang on I am not finished yet, I know what's going in your mind...but before that I want to know something.

Ve: Malik there is nothing in my life which you don't know about...then also if you don't trust me you can ask anything.

Doc: Kya jo news tumhe mili thi wo sah thi??

Ve: what do you mean?? In all confusion.

Doc: I mean Swayum ka bone marrow match hona sirf ek coincidence nahi hai…yeh scientifically proved hai…and soon I am gonna do DNA test jisme confirm ho jayega but before that you ask Swayum about his past and you know what I maen….

The thought leads a sudden shock in Veers mind and heart...He never expected this not after so many years...This all reminds him about his elder son...yes Guddu and Bittu...Karan and...! This news roll back Veer's life 18years back...

18 years ago Mumbai...

It was a pleasant day in Mumbai, after raining heavily whole night, it's a morning with golden rays of sun coming out fighting with clouds and creating a picture perfect master piece...It was a usual start of the day with routine work...shree preparing Breakfast and Veer getting ready for office...both the kids still sleeping...it was their first birthday...

He leaves for the office. At 2'o clock in noon he got the drastic news of his life...his son…..his elder son Bittu was kidnapped. He soon reaches home and came to know that the baby sitter was actually the kidnapper and the kidnap was for money. Veer informed police and gave all information, on the other hand Shree become numb, she use to remain silent all the time.

Slowly a week passed and there is no information regarding the kid and the kidnappers apart from that the kidnappers killed the victim even after getting money.

It was eleventh day of kidnapping and the case handed over to Crime Branch Mumbai, officers manage to trace the gang and were ready to get them but unfortunately all the kidnappers died in encounter with the kid…..this news enough to broke both in pieces…..Shree's condition become worse day by day and Karan…..Now all his responsibility is on veer………So he decides to leave India with all bitter memories….and to get move on in life.

Doc: Veer….Veeer!!!

Dr. Malik's loud scream brought veer back to present….

Ve: ummm….haan...yaar malik par kya aisa possible hai???

Doc: What?? Veer it's so evident now…and jaha tak confirmation ki baat hai, to wo DNA test me ho jayega ok so relax.

Ve: I think you are right……ummm………..ok you carry on, main Swayum se baat karunga…ok bye and thanks Malik you gave the happiest news.

Doc: Haan haan janta hoon……and listen send him here, his friend will better...ok.

Veer called Swayum and told him to be with Sharon, although Nita was there with her but….

Soon Swayum reaches hospital and enter Sharon's room….

As he enters he saw Sharon laughing immensely on Nita's silly jokes….

Kr: hi guys….

None of them able to answer to his hi…cause they were laughing so hard that not even get control over it, they were laughing holding their stomach…Karan was shocked to see their reaction they don't even bother to address him, but he was happy as he seen Sharon…Swayum's…. Sharon smiling not only smiling but laughing, he was happy, his heart felt genuine happiness after so long.

His heart couldn't control happiness and came out as tear from his eyes; unknowingly his signature smile crept on his face and the tear which occurred in his eye travelled a distance from eye to lips….the salty taste of tear made him realize that his heart still belongs to her….he quickly brushes his palm against his chick and wipe out the tear but the tear and happiness on his face hasn't gone unnoticed by Sharon. She controls her laughter and now she was just smiling to Karan.

They stared each other as if both of them having silent conversation……their little moment interrupted by Nita…

Ni: hey Karan…oh….no….umum…god…ok control nita….yes now m ok… sry yaar….wo itna amazing joke tha ki….we couldn't control our laughter…..these sant-banta jokes I tell you…(cut by karan)

Kr: uann..ahn..aa.. don't tell me….I know you and your silly jokes…. And gives a sarcastic look.

Ni: haha…very funny!!

Kr: See mine simple sentence is much better than your santa-banta jokes….Swayum moved on to say some but abrupt by Sharon.

Sh: Hey please stop now you too….or else (she tries to get up)…I will…aah…Aa…ouch…!!!

Both Nita and Karan runs towards her….both from different side. Holding her, with her bare shoulder….Karan looks so much in pain and also in concern…..Sharon looked straight into his eyes….the eyes which speaks a lot…..realizing the pain, which is so known to her, which she always felt in HIS (swayums) eyes whenever she hurt, in pain or whenever she fail herself to convey her heart…same care and intensity in his eyes, in his gesture.

Kr: (lost his control over him and yelled loudly at Sharon) what the hell…tumhe hilne ke liye kisne bola…..dont you know your wounds are deep….tumhe kuch chahiye to hume batao….sharon agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to??!!!

For the first time Sharon likes someone yelling at her with a right of being her own, whose anger doesn't made her anger in reaction for the first time, she was listening him very carefully as if she has done something wrong which can never be corrected, after a long lecture in one breathe Karan (Swayum) stops and seeing him that way a cute innocent smile appeared on her face which justified everything..

Promo: Swayum and Sharon thinking abt their past……their first meet…..their collage life

thanks...|_U\/$D3..Himani
||~~**ArC|-|@Ng|_e$**~~||

Edited by Luvsd3 - 12 years ago

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