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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

So they finally meet ... 😆 that too in the middle of the night ...

thanks for the PM ... Loved the update ...

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Wat wrong in khushi...why kushal hates her...
Nice concept

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

He could just feel time slow down with the echo's of happiness and sorrows of the past reach his ears.

^ That is a beautiful line Zara.Brilliant writing on your part :)

Kushal is well, all about society and status and what not.What scares me is Arnav clearly hero-worships him.

And I loved the small interaction between Madhumati and Arnav.

And even though we haven't got much about Arnav's character here, I think he is respectful, loving man.

I liked how they met too. Stunned by Khushi's beauty right at the first sight, I love:)

Lovely chapter Zara, continue soon!:)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

loved the update and so they meet and already he taught the worst of her loved how he bend down and touch the aunty feet when he realized she knew his mother well awesome update thanks for the pm

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-PoisonIvy

@-PoisonIvy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

And they meet! :) Those tinkling sounds Arnav heard was also Khushi right? :) And Lavanya also figures! I wont make judgements on the relationships until I know more!

Raja seems the perfect companion. He was perfectly polite to Arnav until he hurt Khushi! :)

What does Kushal have against Madhu, Khushi and Raja. He does not
see them fit to stay in their property? Loved this chapter! :)

Thanks for the PM! :) And update soon!

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

My stalking skills are an epic fail

And they finall came face to face

But I like this Arnav he is soo respectful to elder and Khushi is sooo innocent

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

It is very good...as usual i cant stop loving Khushi...wat is that grave past of her? time only can tell...luving Arnav too...hope he is the same as original or a lil less ruthless? Is it necessary that there shud be a La? just askd...as i know ur conditions for pm i am not asking for a pm...but i will tryy to cmnt as possible...but exams hey yaar...but i think i must not dfnitely miss the initial days coz i missed those with price of freesom...ur stories matters a lot...

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-Hope-

@-Hope-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

This is a really beautiful FF, you have started. I'm really glued to it!

Khushi is so sweet and innocent and Raja is adorable! Arnav's Dada seems like an older version of ASR, I love Arnav in this FF though.

It's interesting how you made Arnav's mother best friend's with Buaji. I'm really eager in reading about Arnav and Khushi's pasts.

Poor Khushi in chapter 3, Arnav really scared her!