ArHi OS: The Silent Apology*Re-posted*

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priya

@priyaraghav

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

I really liked ur os ... It was full of emotions, superb. Plzz continue i'll be eagerly waiting for ur next update.

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Paddo

@Heerbeauty

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

oh my god!!! This is so beautiful
I can imagine the scene while reading!
Khushi is mute and Arnav scolded her without knowing the fact!
Will you continue this? I mean it's awesome...if you continue this, it will be a wonderful story
I got emotional while reading this, really!
Thanks for writing such a beautiful OS

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

hey crazy😉

u can handle serious stuff brilliantly

i must say i'm impressed

n today m thinking to change ur name from crazy to genius👏

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soulstarspirit

@soulstarspirit

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Omg it was AMAZING...i simply loved this 😛..wow
Keep up d gud work dear..it was sooo good.I liked the concept.You always amaze me 😳 😛
And thanks for pm 😃

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ywini96

@ywini96

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Another fantastic story by our very own lazyleaves! 😊

awesome!

I'm imagining Khushi as a mute girl (she turns temporarily mute due to some tragic reason!!!) and ASR tries to cheer her up...wow now that'd be real romantic stuff !

Edited by ywini96 - 13 years ago

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Bewakoof

@Bewakoof

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

OMG!!! you are very great dude!!
Khushi ke character me itna change?? vo bubbly se dumb ho gayi?? 😲

you MUTED her?? 😲 😆

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

thanks for the pm... quite an emotional os... arnav, in any story just loves to jump to conclusions, it seems! the friendship between khushi and lavanya was quite heart-warming to see, as was the gentle affection showered on khushi by lavanya... the quiet forgiveness khushi bestows on a silently apologetic arnav was moving... a lovely os

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

My first reaction was "LAVANYA IS ARNAV'S SISTER?" 😲 Im so used to Lavanya as arnav's gf and this was different! 😆

Arnav and khushi.That was sad yet beautiful! :)

Waiting for the next update! This is the second update i have come across where khushi is Dumb! One is Zara's vines with thorns!

Beautifully written Zehra! :) Just loved it! 🤗

Edited by GayuArnav - 13 years ago

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dimple288

@dimple288

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

that was sooo beautiful😊

it is soo sad that khushi cannot speak. but its highly impossible for our khushi to be quiet.😉

loved the os🤗

thank u sooo much for the pm🤗

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Arina Raizada

@..Raizada..

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Wow! Khushi not being able to speak! Now that's a twist!

Anyways really emotional! Loved it!

You should continue this! Great plot for a SS or FF but just an idea(:

Please PM me for your other OS