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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

wow..this touched my heart..i don't know how to express it..but this is great..

The first para was so poignant and made me pensive..More than once, i stopped reading and brooded over of the sentences.. You have an eloquent style in writing, and your words stirred emotions in me which baffled me..

Reading on, the subtle references and inferences made my heart jump with joy..This was an amazing OS.

thanks for the pm.

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

SOOO BEAUTIFUL... I TINK U SHUD CONT DIS, PUHLEEEZZZ... :P

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

That was real emotional felt for Arnav and felt how happy he was

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nimra21

@nimra21

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

That was beautiful. Arnav's emotions were described perfectly. Well done! :)

P.S: You should continue this.It has great potential!

Edited by nimra21 - 13 years ago

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Awesome one! ill give a longer comment later!

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

A is more emotional fool than anyone...that was beautiful!

Can we get one w/K's perspective??? Pls?

-Sona

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Vindhy

@Vindhy

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

this is so touching... wish something like this was to really happen in the show... beautifully written... thank you

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

That was very emotional and well written. Thank you.

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

just beautiful!!! hw good this would have been if its a ss or something!! and got to tell this your writing is just awesome!!! wow and mind blowing!!! perfect too!!! nice os!!

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SSB28

@SSB28

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Awesome awesome awesome 👏👏👏

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