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-Grace-

@-Grace-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

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i loved the prologue! cant wait till arnav steps into the picture and mends her broken heart *lalalalalalalala*

the story seems captivating update soon JALDIII!

thanks!

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Fari,it sounds so intersting...u must continue it...but pls...ibadat n then ur health come first...we can wait 4 d updates patiently😊...BTW...Where is Ashum...i m missing her SCREAMS OF JOY...YE YE ...I M 1ST 2 COMMENT😃

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Oh wow, I loved the start! Interesting new story :) Cant' wait for you to continue!

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DhwaniKS

@DhwaniKS

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Wid dis start...i cant wait for long...it has raised a hell lot of ques...where is ARNAV here...is khushi alone...was payal married to aakash???...

Oh god!! Curiosity grl...
Update soon

Btw loved it...

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

amazing start!!!! refrehing, but saddening at the same time... i'm waiting for more of this!! :)

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Licyabhingya

@Licyabhingya

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awesome... plz continue soon.. Happy Ramadan :D

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Natasha

@tash10

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Reserved😳

Will edit on Tuesday!

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Fari, a new FF!!!😳 I enjoyed reading the prologue, heart-touching!!! So, Khushi is alone with Payal's child! So sad that Payal and Akash died!

Can't wait to see how things slowly evolve and how your characters are shaped!!

Waiting for the first chapter😳

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gowri1712

@gowri1712

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

sounds interesting
was Payal married to Akash?
and is Arnav Akash's brother??
I'm waiting..!!!

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Avani

@highonshows

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Fari Darling,...

First of Congratulation on starting ur very first FF...

U are totaly amazing with the stuff u write and this is a bit different but very well written...

The start is very fresh and different...

No PayaAsh, ...and Parent either...

As of now only Khushi and Anaya,...

Absolutely looking fwd to reading the first chapter...

Did u mention loved ur writting style...reminds me of certain someone...👏👏👏👏

ThnQ for the Pm sweetz

Avni

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

The moment in the prologue was very poignant. It makes we wonder if Khushi has no other emotional support available? That to me is the invisible question hanging in the air. Very well written buddy. Hope you and your family have a good Ramadan.

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