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Shruti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#51

ok coming up some major twist 😆 u all know my speciality 😉 khuch twist jiskey baad i will need body guards 😆 aur hint doon hmmm rehney do 😆 agay batungi to suspence kya raheyga

Edited by shruti_gauri1 - 19 years ago

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Shruti

@Shruti11

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Posted: 19 years ago

#52

i like to add 1 more thing yeah thori bold story hogi like kashish drinking wine or going to pub all that stuff and many many more so pls inform me jaha kisi ko pasand na aaye

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group_1223

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Posted: 19 years ago

#53

wowwwwww it was awesome.....jus 2 gud.....now dey ll meet in america... ths soo kewl.....u noe wut...mom's callin..so ill cum baq n continue wid mi comments.....sorry abt dat....i m soo glad dat i m da 1st on 2 comment...even tho its short....

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group_1223

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Posted: 19 years ago

#54

don't worry shruti dearz....i don't think it matterz if the story z bold....trust me...dat sorta stuff is jus soo common dese dayz dat i don't think ne1 will find it odd.....bsidez if ne1 doez have a suggession...i m sure dey ll let u noe....take carez luv ya....

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Areej

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Posted: 19 years ago

#55

Shruti GREAT start!!!!!!!!! 👏

and of course I don't mind, aapki story hai! Aap jaisa likhna chaahen likhein, I don't mind at all!

Waise this story of yours rly sounds interresting, I'm waiting eagerly for the next so continue soon!!!

-Areej

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Shruti

@Shruti11

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Posted: 19 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: group_1223
don't worry shruti dearz....i don't think it matterz if the story z bold....trust me...dat sorta stuff is jus soo common dese dayz dat i don't think ne1 will find it odd.....bsidez if ne1 doez have a suggession...i m sure dey ll let u noe....take carez luv ya....

thx fiza jaan for ur comment ya i know that these stuff r common that why i m mentioning but i have a reder of very small age that why i m worried

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Shruti

@Shruti11

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shezaadi
Shruti GREAT start!!!!!!!!! 👏

and of course I don't mind, aapki story hai! Aap jaisa likhna chaahen likhein, I don't mind at all!

Waise this story of yours rly sounds interresting, I'm waiting eagerly for the next so continue soon!!!

-Areej

thx areej dear ur comment is wonderful

ya it is quite intresting story u will love it

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 19 years ago

#58

Hi! shruti

Nice part. bt too small a bigger part next time and a little sooner

golu

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#59

Sur....u r da best..kya part tha..i felt jaisay sab kuch meri eyes k samnay horaha hai....u write soo well...i am in love wid ur story...ab zyda judai bardhast nahi hogi... 😆 Kashish in bar not bad...i lyked it...Sujal attitude 2 good....chaloo jaldi next part continue karooo..waiting...4 them to meet...
Hats of ur writting skills n...creativity...n ur TWIST 😉

👏

Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago

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kashishdabest

@kashishdabest

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Posted: 19 years ago

#60

awww wowww shruti i just read ure story, my god it is brilliant, kya intro tha, kya story hai, wah wah wah 👏 hmmm tho aik twist aayega, yes we know its ure speciality but i trust u completely u are a true jodi fan so u will never be able 2 seperate jodi 😉 luv u jaan, write the next part soon, its just fanatastic, can't wait 4 jodi 2 meet 👏

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