D3 ff : A journey from denial to acceptance - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Himaniahir

All the updates were nice sorry for commenting late


Thanks n its ok..^-^
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks n wen r ugonna update ur ff?waitin for it.. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys,i m realy happy today,so demand puri hue bina hi update kr ri hu,so who all want a update now? 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
updating in a few mins..^-^
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CHAPTER FOUR PART(A)
In some corner of the World ,a bright and early morning was just breaking out,as a boy lay threaded in his comforter.The outside World had just woken up from a long slumber,but he lay completely still with a smile etched on his face,completely unaware he continued to snooze even as the sun slowly spread its rays across the blinds.He tossed to the other side,flipped his pillow to get to the cold side,and slumped his head back into it..He snored away to his heart's content unaware of the constant screams of his mother.His alarm had started to snooze,but the sound was falling upon deaf ears...
"wake up"his mother yelled as she rushed around the house to prepare breakfast..
"wake up beta,you have to leave today "..she shouted yet again.After her umtempth shout to awake her son,Madhu realized that she would lose her voice before it fell on her son's ears..
"Madhu stop shouting and let our son sleep",Rithwik,her husband,said as he put his hands on her shoulders.
Edited by cuteswayu - 13 years ago
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PART(B):
Madhu quickly handed him his coffee.
Madhu-"Good morning".
"Good morning to you too".I see you and your son have started the shouting match,rithwik bemused as he picked up the newspaper.
Yes of course,I am doing the shouting while he is doing the snoring.We have spoilt him too much,rithwik,he has to leave by the evening flight..Thank God,i have done his packing yesterday,God knows how will he manage there!!.. madhu said her usually rehearsed dialoguewhich rithwik was used to hearing.
She was furious now.."You and your son have taken me for granted,noone listens to me"..She concluded and returned back to the kitchen..
Rithwik got up and hurriedly ran behind her to avoid the disastrous situation...Madhu,he hugged her from behind and soothed her.."sorry,but you know that me and our son are nothing without you"..She smiled and said-i know that and its okay.
He pecked her cheek and bidding her goodbye left for his company,but not before informing his wife that their son was still snoozing away upstairs.
Edited by cuteswayu - 13 years ago
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PART(C):
As soon as the realization hit her,she swiftly mounted the stairs towards her son's room..
She knocked twice,but after getting silence from the other side,she turned the door knob."Swa"her sentence is stopped midway,as she took in the surroundings after opening the door.The room was a complete mess,clothes,cds and shoes were littering the floor.
She was fuming now and she rather forcefully wrenched the comforter off her son.A rush of cold air greeted him and in an attempt to grip the comforter bck ,he swayed off the bed and collided with the floor "Ah"..
He stood up,took the comforter and sat back on the bed.
."Get off the bed,junior shekhawat and go get ready"madhu yelled..

However he was as stubborn as a mule,because as he was pushed into the bathroom,he sat on the long,ceramic counter and however cold it was,he started snoozing again..
Madhu pounded hard on the washroom door and he hastily opened his eyes.
Edited by cuteswayu - 13 years ago
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PART(D):
He heard his mother's agitated voice",you better not be sleeping in there,I can't hear the water running.
"Uh..no..I am not sleeping.I am trying to save water mom,I promise I'm brushing...he fibbed but hurriedly grabbed his brush and jumped into the shower..
He ran from the washroom wrapped in a towel and opened his close .Opening his closet he stood wide eyed as he tried to pick clothes for the day..
The task was harder than he had thought, it looked like a cyclone had hit his room,but it was normal as per his norms.Hedidn't understand why anybody took the energy to clean their room,when they can find a way from their bed to the door...
After finding something satisfactory ,he got dressed and started admiring his own self in the mirror...
He is tall definitely six feet or m8ore has long silky hair well gelled,chocolate brown eyes ,his broad shoulders and well-toned body was fitted into a priced designer t-shirt and a pair of faded jeans..
but he was brought back to earth when his mother yelled..
Edited by cuteswayu - 13 years ago
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PART(E):
"Swayam,come down fast"and he ran downstairs for his dear life...


so,comment guys and next update only on page60..till then,bye...^-^
Edited by cuteswayu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow, super awesome update..and a bigger one too..so thanks :)
As i said before i like how you are introducing each your character and the brief about them tells a lot about their character.
Swayam's intro was super awesome, loved how his mother tries waking him up..but in vain. Loved Swayam's parents talking about him. So Swayam is leaving to somewhere..looking forward to read that. Swayam as a flirt is super interesting..

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