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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!!...
Neev is such a disgusting man...
he tried to Hurt Nupur and
Now Shiv Uncle...

Please Mayank where are you...??
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic part
loved it
do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
mindblowing
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plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
dis neev😡finally shiv knws all d truth...😃nice update...continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update
i'm glad truth out
well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic part
loved it
do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb, beautiful n mindblowing update...

loved it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful response and comments Means a lot to me. 🤗🤗
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keep reading the story.i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Love and Hate

"How much I was wrong because I thought you were worthy of my trust"Shiv groaned in anger catching his collar and Neev got a jerk, "you deceived me' I am feeling ashamed of trusting on a person like you"

Neev Clutched Shiv's wrist and pushed him harder this time Shiv collapsed with the wall losing his balance.

"Papaaa" Nupur rushed to hold him and saved him from falling down.

"It's too late Mr.Shiv to pondering about what you did, Now listen me carefully I won't leave Nupur so you both have to do what I want'say her to sign these papers, I can't wait anymore"

It took her a moment to absorb his threatening words and she instantly clutched his father's hand Shiv hissed lifting his angry eyes at him, "She won't sign these papers---Never"

He made an effort to stand on his heel and Nupur helped him, stabling himself Shiv dropped Nupur's hand and stepped closer to Neev, "whatever you've done you would pay for it but at this moment it would be good for you to leave this place right now---Right Now"He stressed his last words jabbing his finger at Neev and Anger flashed over Neev cheeks as his eyes met with his rage-filled threatening gaze.

Neev shrugged with a mocking smile and giving a threatening look to Nupur who was standing at one the corner he turned again his gaze towards Shiv, "what will you do if I wouldn't go?"

Shiv stiffened at his stubborn mockery look and raising his hand he slapped him, "you will go out of my house or else I'll kill you"Shiv groanned.

Neev's eyes had narrowed, and his mouth twisted into a smile that was more of a snarl as he straightened his face towards Shiv, "you're going to pay for it"

Neev allowed a slow mocking smile to touch the corners of his mouth as he raised his hand to catch Shiv's collar, "how dare you slap me?"

Before Shiv could stable himself Neev pushed him hard and this time he collapsed with floor ,his head hit with the wall and blood oozed from his wound, "papa"Nupur's shrieked vibrated in the room and Radha rushed to hear Nupur's scream.

"Shivvv"

Nupur great rage gathered on her face and flushed in her eyes like a fire,she stepped close to Neev and slapped him hard, "I won't leave you if something happen to my father"

"Shiv opens your eyes'shiv"Radha screamed seeing his eyes getting close Nupur rushed to call the doctor but before she dialed number Neev snatched the mobile and threw it on the floor, "no need to call the doctor'let him die and you're going with me"

He clutched her hand and yanked her towards him, "Neev"Radha screamed and Nupur's eyes widened, gathering her all courage she tried to push him away but he twisted her ankle dragging her out of the room, Nupur released the breath she had been holding with a sob of pure terror, "Neev leave me"

Radha shook the unconscious Shiv but there was no response, She put his head carefully on the floor and rushed to save Nupur.

"Leave my hand Bas****"She screamed struggling to free her hand and Neev raised his hand to slap her but someone caught his wrist and pushed him hard,Neev lost his balance and dropping her arm fell onto the floor, "Mayank"

Her whispered escaped her lips.

"How dare you touch my wife bas*****"

Mayank caught his collar giving him another punch, his head again collapsed with the floor and a moan of pain escaped his lips, "Ah!!leave me Mayank'I'll kill you"Neev tried to stable himself but Mayank caught his collar and pushed him hard until his back hit with the wall and as he lifted his face he got another punch, "how dare you tried to hurt Nupur-- you bast*****"

Blood oozed and trickled to the floor as Mayank hit him hard and fell on the floor,And Mayank's fingers bit into her shoulders and Neev gave a cry of pain as Mayank hit him hard.

"Today I won't leave you" Mayank groaned angrily giving him another punch and then She heard a cry and a grunt scream of Neev .

She dropped her eyes at him still in fear and he had been getting unconscious Mayank left his collar and standing on his heels walked up to her, "Nupur'are you alright?"his soft hand gently cupped her cheek and she lifted her eyes meeting with him looking at him with unbelieving eyes, "Mayank--Are you here with me?"

"I'm with you'your Mayank"

He firmly slipped his arm around her waist and she desperately clings to him holding him tightly, "I won't leave you even for a moment"he whispered against her ear gathering her in the tight hold of his arm and heard her sob.

"I thought I would lose you"

"No one can separate us--Never"he kissed her hair giving her promise of their whole life.

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As the doctor stepped out the I-C-U Mayank walked towards him, "Is he alright?"

"Doctor tells us there is nothing serious"Nupur asked desperately stepping closer to them.

" He has been losing lots of blood'we can't say anything about head injury until scan report come'I just can say he needs your prayers--Excuse me"

Giving them a hopeful smile he turned back toward the I-C-U and Nupur felt a familiar hand around her as he pulled her for side hug and she rested her head on his shoulder letting the tears slipped out from her already puffy eyes.

" Nupur he'll be alright'nothing would happen to him'you're their strong daughter'you've to be strong for your mother'she needed you"

She looked up at him and he crawled his other arm too ,around her waist and then raised her hand to cup her face, "I'm with you'always with you'your Mayank"He leaned forward to give her a long kiss on her forehead and then gathered her in his arm soothing her back,saying soothing words into her ear to remove the lines of panic from her face.

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here is next part..i hope you'll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeah..me first..

That was awesome part..
loved the heroic entry of Mayank...


Hope shive Uncle would recover soon
Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago

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