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shama_arnav

@shama_arnav

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

U should continue this story...

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vaatuhaara

@vaatuhaara

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Cute! Liked it. N it made me relive Shravan, Sachi (Barun's earlier show). No resemblence in d story, bt they came to my mind while reading this n i lovd it.

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Aaliya

@CheekyArshiLove

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

awww awww awww

shoo cute i like the part when he said i love her

awww cute

and the morning scene was cute to aww awww awww

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priya pinky daswani

@pinky_blueskies

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

awesome OS.. :)

i like how they gave it to rohit and trisha 😳

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

wow it is fantastic one...

u shud continue this one

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Raven

@TouchOfArHi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

OMG... I'm shocked 😲 People actually liked my OS and I can't change it to an SS because it will only have 4 long parts :P

So just 3 more updates and then OS is done... I'm almost done Part 2 view my blog if u want to read my other work with covers. Now u all can comment as annonymous readers!

http://ravneetstouchoflife.blogspot.ca/

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Raven

@TouchOfArHi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: cutebarun
Cute! Liked it. N it made me relive Shravan, Sachi (Barun's earlier show). No resemblence in d story, bt they came to my mind while reading this n i lovd it.

I thought that no one would point that out... but u caught it. I tried to make Arnav's character a bit childish :p Just like Shravan's 😆