D3 FF...ITS ALL ABOUT DESTINY !! - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guyz i m bck wid d update..hope u all like it !

recap: sharon reaches d cafe nd swayam's car's tire gets punctured!

present:

Sw: ab yeh tire ko bhi abhi puncture hona tha!..ek to pehle se hi late ho chuka hu upar se ab ye tire..oh god!...ab in outskirts par nahi koi lift dega aur nahi koi mechanic milega...aur rey ko itni door bulana wud b a bad idea!...ek kaam karta hu taxi le leta hu!

Sh: arre ye mr.buk worm abhi tak nhi aaya...ek kaam karti hu uski koi buk lekar padh leti hu..hmm...konsi lu..itni saari hai..hmm..lemme check!

finally swayam finds a taxi but to his bad luck the driver was driving d car very slow which made him reach more late..but he finally reaches d cafe..

swayam spots sharon by seeing his big bag of buks nd goes der

Sw: hi..

sharon dosent pay attention as she is busy reading d buk!

Sw:( a little louder) umm..hi...

Sh: oh hi i m sorry

Sw: oh no actually i shud b sorry for being late..actually meri car ka tire puncture pho chuka tha isliye i gt late!

Sh:oh its ok..so here r ua buks!

Sw :oh thanks nd ur bag..

Sh: oh thanks!

Sh: btw ua buks r really nice..

Sw: oh u read dem?

Sh : wo actually u gt late so i though y nt read ua buks...i hope u don mind!

Sw: oh no nt at all

jus den sharon's phone rings nd its kria..

Kr: hello sharon kaha hai tu jaldi aa na i m waiting...

Sh: wo di actually mein cafe mein hi hu..aap kahana khalo waise bhi mein cafe mein hu to yhi khalungi..

nw swayam like a gentleman offers fr lunch aakhir usi ki wajah se to sharon late hui hai...

(neva knew tht a stranger boy offering fr lunch to a stranger gurl wud show sum manners :P ;) )

Sw: hey i m sorry meri wajah se tumne lunch nhi kiya..

Sh: oh its ok..

Sw: umm...if u don mind cn v hv lunch...so evn i will feel a lil guilty!

Sh: oh u don hav to feel guilty...nd its ok!

Sw: see miss.??

Sh: sharon..

Sw: oh! so sharon mein aisa waisa ladka nhi hu so pls don mind...

Sh: well mr.swayam i didnt mean tht but seriously itni formality ki koi zarurat nhi hai..

Sw: hey hw do u noe my name..??

Sh: i sw it on ua card!

Sw: ok so lets hv lunch nw?

Sh: well nw ok..if u insist!

Sw: so wht wud u like to have..?

Sh: i think i wud b cool wid a pasta nd noodles...

Sw: ok den..waiter..

Sw: so 2 plates pasta nd noodles..

Sh: hey y don u order sumthing else fr uaself...u don hv to order d same..

Sw: but actually evn i wanted d same na...

Sh: oh i thought u wer being formal.. :P

Sw: oh..i don b formal always..dis tym i m normal... :P

so both dese hv a nyc lunch...

now tym to go home..

Sh: hey ua car is nt available na..?

Sw: uh..ya!

Sh: ok so wer r u goin next?

Sw: bandra...

Sh: ok so its d same way..i hv called fr a cab...wud u mind if i drop u?

Sw: arre no thts ok..u r getting late na..i will manage..

Sh: oh c'mon nw u r being formal...

Sw: i guess..but..

Sh: no ifs no buts...c'mon d cab is here lets go!

Sw: ok!


swaron reach der respective places..the journey ws a silent one...coz wht eva d strong connection is between dem fr nw dey r jus strangers...nd didnt hav nything to talk...

reyam:

Sw: hey.. i m bck home..

Re: hey..itni der kyun lagadi aane mein ??

Sw: aare wo actually gaadi ka tire puncture hogaya tha...btw did d mechanic leave d car here?

Re: ya he just left it!

Sw: ok den mein fresh hokar aata hun..

Re: ya..

krisha:

Sh: di mein ghar aa gyi..

Kr: sharon itni der kyun ho gyi tujhe aane mein?

Sh: arre di actually swayam..i mean tht person jisse bags exchange hogaye the na he got late..

Kr: kya??..late ho gya...uff matlab ye ladka bhi uske dost ki tarah mannerless hai..bhala apna samaan lene ke liye koi late aata hai?

Sh: (in a defending tone): arre di usko koi galti nhi hai actuaaly uski gadi ka tire puncture hogya tha...

Kr: acha theek hai chal ab tu jaldi se fresh hokar aaja fir college ki tayyari bhi karni hai..

next day:

and here starts a new day...wid d old sun giving a new sunshine...the same old people but with new goals...new aspirations...new destinations...

so today was the day when rey...kria...swayam...sharon wer gng to join der new college..ST.LOUIS!

krisha:

Kr: arre sharon jaldi kar na warna college ke pehle din hi late ho jayenge...shouted kria applyin butter on d bread..

Sh: arre di tension mat lo abhi college ke liye tym hai...

Kr: tu ye sab chod aur jaldi se breakfast kar le...aur sun aaj hamara 1st day to plz tu na gumsum girl mat rehna...zyada se zyada friends banana..aur agar koi tujhe sataye to mujhe batana..

Sh: di...sabse pehle to na aap breakfast karo aur dusri baat ye ki aap na uss din ki tarah kisise ladiyega mat..

reyam:

Sw: cha dude jaldi kar warna late hojayenge...

Re: arre chill yaar...we r on tym..kuch late nhi ho rha hai

Sw: waise tu na aaj apna gussa ghar par hi chod ke chalna...warna pata chala tune prncipal ko hi mar diya :P

Re: he he he...bahut hi bura mazak tha! waise tu na plz library se door rehna..warna college mein books ki shortage pad jayegi aur mera ghar jo hai kabadkhana ban jayega

Sw: ha ha chal bahut hogyi teri nautanki chal callege ke liye nikalte hai..

and all four of dem head for d college...

(so guyz i m cutting all d intro nd stuff and directly into d class)

in d class d seating arrangement is krisha sitting in front of reyam respectively...

suddenly kria's pen dosent work..and d professor ws rushing wid his notes as if he ws to miss sum bus..

Kr: offo iss pen ko bhi abhi kharab hona tha..and she shakes her pen...and d ink fell on d person sitting behind her..

and d person is as u all noe..REY! the angry young man..

Re: wht d hell..

Kr: oops i m so sorry!

Re: kya sorry meri saari shirt kharaab kardi..

Kr: arre kaha na sorry aur koi jaan bhooj kar ink nhi girayai maine aap par..kaha na galti se hogaya..

Re: bahut bada ehsaan kiya sorry bolkar...thanks sorry bolne ke liye..

Kr: arre bade badtameez ho tum...

rey was jus gng to say sumthing but he ws disturbed b d professor who ws disturbed by kriyaansh!

Pr: tum dono ne ye kya laga rakha hai chalo get out of my cls nw..

Kriyaansh: but sir

Pr: no ifs no buts..jus get out

kriyaansh go out of d class widout evn seeing at each oder...

kria heads towards library and rey towards d canteen..

Kr: hey universeji...aaj mei pehli cls thi aur mujhe cls se bahar nikal diya...sab uss idiot ki wajah se...

librarian: shhh!

Kr: offo kria jhalli hai tu bhi library mein koi itni zor se baat karta hai..chup hoja warna tujhe library se bhi bahar nikal denge and she says sorry to d librarian..

canteen:

as soon as rey entered d canteen all d girls started to drool ova him...and rey ws feeling awkward..

Re: uff pehle wo ladki aur ab ye saari girls...apne kaam se kaam nhi rakh sakti kya...mujhe aise dekh rhi hai jaise mein koi dusre planet se aaye hu...!

and d class ended...swaron who didnt pay attention in d cls after kriyaansh wer asked to go out rushed fast as d cls ended!

swayam firstly headed towards d library as he wanted to see hw d library of his new college ws :D and sharon towards d canteen expecting kria to b der!

as soon as swayam went into d library he spot kria..wid whom his dear friend had a fight fr no reason

Sw: i think mujhe usse maafi mangni chahiye and he goes towards kria

Sw: xcuse me!

Kr: yes..

Sw: wo actuaaly i wanted to apologise on behalf of my friend

Kr: sorry but aapke friend ko mein nhi jaanti aur aap kyun apologise kar rhe ho?

Sw: wo actually abhi abhi aapki jisse fight hui thi wohi mera friend hai..

Kr: oh! but tum to uske friend nhi dikhte..i mean tum itne humble aur wo mannerless...

Sw: wo actually thoda short tempered hai isiliye ..sorry!

Kr: oh its ok...so friends...kria forwarded her hand as she thought him to b a nyc guy as he ws apologising fr his friend..

canteen:

Sh: arre di to yaha par nhi hai...abhi call karti hu..and she sits on a near by table..

and as soon as she sits she is disturbed by sum stupid ppl..

guy1: hey hi beautiful..

Sharon remains quiet..

guy2: arre ye to reply hi nhi karri lagta hai nayi hai isliye sharma rhi hai..

guy3:to lets b friends na...

rey ws seeing all dis... and cudnt tolerate any more..

so he went towards d table and sat on d chair(just as he did in

D3 when a dazzler ws troubling kria)

Rey givs dem a agressive luk askin dem to get lost

guy1: arre isse dekho ye to dara rha hai hume..

guy2: mummy hum to dar gye..

Re: guyz chup chaap yaha se chale jao warna princi ka office door nahi hai aur tum logo ne to aaj suna hi hoga ki ragging is strictly prohibited so jus get lost

and dose guys quietly go off!

sharon thanks rey fr saving her frm dose idiots..

Sh: hey thanks a lot meri help karne ke liye...

Re: ohh neva mind..

rey ws still feeling disgusted seeing d girls drool ova him..sharon noticed dat

Sh:hey r u ok..i mean u look a quiet uncomfortable!

Re: wo nuthing actually dese girls u noe..

Sh: oh i c...bahut irritating lagta hai na ye sab..

Re: ha pata nhi aise ghoor rhe hai na jaise ki mujhe kha hi jayegi!

and sharon started laughing on diis..

rey thought she ws differnt frm all dese girls and forwarded his hands fr friendship

Re: uhh...friends?

Sh: shaking her hands ..ya sure...btw i m sharon!

Re: oh nyc name..nd me reyaansh...u cn call me rey!

library:

Sw: forwarding his hand...friends..btw ua name?

Kr: kria nd u?

Sw: me swayam!

and den suddenly kria's phone rings...its sharon

kria excused herself frm swayam..and picked up d phone call...

Sh: arre di kahan ho aap...i m waiting fr u in d canteen...

Kr: mein to library mein hu ...abhi aarhi hu...btw i made a new friend..

Sh: oh thts gr8 !..evn me ..

Kr: kya..tune friend banaya..ab to usse milna hi padega..chal mein aati hu abhi...byee..

Sh: byee..

and till den reyam wer texting ech oder...

Sw: hey...kahan hai tu?

Re: in d canteen..jus made a new friend..and lemme guess..u r in d library..rite

Sw: oh nyc..evn me..and yeah..wht is d prblm in i being in d library ??

Re: oh nuthing...u cum fast..i m starving here...

Sw: ok i will b der after u die...!..nautanki..aa raha hu...

and as kria ends her call..

Kr: hey can we go to d canteen..actually my sissy is waiting der...

Sw: oh..evn my friend is waiting fr me ova der..so lets go !

and dey head towards d canteen ...!

so guyz guess kya hoga jab...swaron and kriyansh will meet??

umm..wanna noe..den stay tuned !

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
sweet part..

let see kriyansh face to face honge toh kya hoga??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Awesome update

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Nice part 😃...
College mein bhi Kriyansh ki lardai 😆...
Inka kuch nahi ho sakta 😆...
Kriya aur Swayam friends N Rey aur Sharon friends Nice 😃...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
Edited by Roxxy47 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
nice chapyyy...
thnx 4 pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
nice part...

precap is 222 interesting...

update asap...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
very sweet chapter preeti..
firstly swaron meet was so nice...
then again kriyaansh fight...😆
and ShaRey and KriYam friendship..loved it..
kya hoga jab swaron and kriyansh milenge..
waiting for it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Great update
Love Reyam nd Krisha they have a cute bonding
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Loved the concept..
awesome update...
loved it alot...
thanx 4 the pm.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Amazing one.
loved it.waiting for Kriyaansh meet.

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