Socha Na Tha swaron and kriyansh ff - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you for the comment and plz ignore mistakes

Rey and Sharon are childhood frnds . Their families live in shimla but after schooling Rey go Mumbai for further study and specially for dance and Sharon live in shimla and continue her study there .But Rey and Sharon always stay in touch with each other and share everything with each other

Part- 1

Rey calls Sharon

Sharon: Itni subha call kyun kiya

Rey: hey shut up ok and listen to me I have great news

Sharon: What

Rey: I am selected for International dance fest and for this I am going to London

Sharon: congratulation. But uncle maan gye kya

Rey: ussi ke liye to teri help chahiye

Sharon: tune uncle se abhi tak baat bhi nhi ki hogi right

Rey: yaa

Rey: tujhe pata hai naa main dad se baat nhi kr skta hun or waise bhi woh sabse jayda teri baat mante hai so plz baat kr naa

Sharon: ok I will try

Rey:ok bye

After one hour

Sharon: hey

Rey: hey dad maan gye kya

Sharon:main koi kaam kru aur woh successful na ho aisa ho skta hai kya

Rey:u mean dad maan gye

Sharon: yaa

Rey: Thank u???. u r best

Sharon: I know that but uncle ki ek condition hai

Rey:What condition

Sharon:Tujhe London mein uncle dost Mr. Goutham ke ghar mein rukna pdega

Rey:What It is not possible ok mere sabhi frnds hotel mein rukenge aur main uncle dost ke ghar mein

Sharon: beta ager London jana hai toh yeh condition toh mani padegi u have no option

Rey: ok fine

In London Airport

Rey: ok guys see u tomorrow

Arjun(Rey's frnd): kya yr tu humare sath aaya hai aur kahin aur ruk rha hai

Rey: kya kru dad ka order hai.ok bye

Rey(in his mind): yeh dad bhi naa main koi choda bacha hun kya jo akele nhi rhe skta

Then Rey is bumps into someone

Girl: Sorry

Rey: sorry, yaa right pehle galti kro phire sorry bol do so easy na

Girl: excuse me ek toh mein sorry bol rhi hun uper se tum attitude dekha rhe ho jab ki galati hum dono ki thi khud ko toh sorry bolna aata nhi hai aur main sorry bole toh uski koi value bhi nhi hai

Rey: excuse me main kyun sorry bolu galti tumhari hai

Girl: toh tum dekh kr nhi chal skte the andhe ho kya

Rey: u know what go to hell

Girl: u go to hell

Rey(in his mind):koi receive krne ke liye bhi nhi aaya hai.isliye pehle hi address send kr diya hai ab khud hi ghar dundna padega

He took taxi go to his dad's friend house

Rey meet Mr. Goutham

Rey: hello uncle

Goutham: hello beta. Kaisa rha tumhra suffer

Rey: It's good

Goutham: Kriya tumhe receive krne airport gyi thi per tum usse wahan nhi mile

Rey: I don't know maine bhi usse wahan nhi dekha may be koi miss understanding ho gyi hogi

Goutham call kriya

Goutham: Rey is here .Rey meet kriya my daughter

When kriya see Rey then

Kriya : tum

Rey: tum

Kriya is that girl who meets Rey at airport

Rey(in his mind): wow Rey panga bhi liya to isse ab yeh toh mujhe yahan nhi rhne degi

This is my first ff so plz tell me how it is

Edited by reet_26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Nyc concept
Do continue n pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update 👍🏼
PM me when u update next 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Nice part 👏...
Kriyansh ki pehli mulaqat mein hi lardai 😆...
Rey is going to stay at Kria's house 😉...
Update soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey just read the concept n chapter 1...its really interesting...do pm me when u update next time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update...
Loved it...
Thnx for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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updte soon...

pm me when u update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18

Part -2

Goutham: tum mil chuke ek dusre se

Rey: uncle woh airport per (kriya stop him )

Kriya: dad who airport per thodi si baat hui thi per mujhe pata nhi tha ki yeh reyansh hai

(Rey is shock to listen this)

Goutham: koi baat nhi kabhi-kabhi aisa bhi hota hai. Kriya rey ko uska room dekha do

Kriya: ok dad

They walk towards the room

In room

Kriya: this is your room

Rey: hello tumhe kya short term memory lose hai itna bada jhagda hua and you say thodi si baat hui thi

Kriya: listen tum mere dad ke friend bete ho aur tumhari aane ki news se dad bahut kush the isliye maine kuch nhi kaha

Kriya leave the room

Rey to himself: Indian India rhe ya kahin or par hote ek jaise hi hai

Sharon's college

Sharon: hey did u see swayam

Girl: haan raat ko sapne mein dekha tha

Sharon:oh god abhi college mein dekha hai kya

Girl: nhi

Sharon: did u see swayam

Guy:yaa maine usse corridor mein jate hue dekha tha

Sharon: thanks

Sharon sees swayam with girl

Swayam: u know kal puri raat mein so nhi paya

Girl: why

Swayam: kyunki puri raat main tumhare bare main hi sochta rha aur jaise hi aankhen band krta tumhara chehra dekhai deta

Girl: how sweet

Sharon (in her mind): yeh kabhi nhi sudhrega

Sharon: hey swayam

Swayam:(he saw Sharon then say) hey then he turn to that girl and say bye sweetheart see u soon

Girl:bye

Swayam come to Sharon

Swayam : Tum hamesha galat time per hi kyon aati ho

Sharon: acha toh main chalti hun or tum mujhe sahi time bta dena tab main tumhe tumhara yeh assignment de dungi lekin yeh yaad rkhna aaj assignment submit krwane ki last date hai ok now bye

Swayam: wait...main toh bhool gya tha thank god tumne mera assignment complet kr diya warna who professor Gupta meri band baja deta .show me the assignment

Sharon: assignment chahiye toh pehle sorry bolo or phir thanks

Swayam : for what

Sharon: tum ne jo abhi-abhi kaha tha naa uske liye sorry kehna pdega and assignment ke liye thanks

Swayam: hello madam friendship ka rule pata nhi hai kya friendship mein no sorry no thank you

Sharon: Sharon apne rules khud bnati hai ok now say sorry and thanks

Swayam: never

Sharon: ok then bye

Swayam: ok fine sorry and thank you mam

Sharon : I am so lucky mujhe swayam shekhawat ne sorry kaha

Swayam: tujhe tera sorry or thank you dono mil gya naa ab assignment de aur haan remember iss sorry or thank you ka badla to main le kr rehunga

Sharon: best of luck aur ab chale class start hone wali hai

Edited by reet_26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just read ur ff...loved it...continue and pm me too plz...i have sent u a buddy request...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part 😃...
Loved Swaron's convo 😉...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.

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