OS: His Perfect Wife [Part 2 (End): Page 25]

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Manju

@Drwho

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Excellent!

It is small but packs a mighty punch!

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aruba941

@aruba941

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Awsome os..luvd d idea of d story..and thanx again for d pm..:)

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

My god, that was so beautiful. I'm rendered speechless. I was crying in the middle and then smiling by the end. It was too, too good.

A strikingly new concept, that tugs at your heart and makes you marvel at the story you've put together.

Wonderful :D

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niania13

@niania13

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

That was a very well written OS!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

that was beautiful... but it took him 6 months to notice that there was such a great change in her? grrr😡 arnav singh raizada, you're one dumb (but lucky) guy!😆

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LittleMissMagic

@LittleMissMagic

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

WRITE A PART 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 DID I MENTION PLEASE 😳

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

awww that was so sweeett!
I loved it (:

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Tara

@Hollagurl

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Wow, this was amazing. I love how you described Khushi's training in depth and how she transformed from being the happy, loud and colorful girl to what she became after he training and I especially loved your description of Arnav's thoughts. This was a really, really good OS and I hope that Arnav in the show also sees how his Khushi has changed since their disastrous marriage.