NEW SS : With Love, Yours Truly...Part 2

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euphoria_

@euphoria_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

☺️☺️☺️☺️

sorry only emo
coz i am speachless

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

awesome update!!!

grr, shyam is back.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

thanks for the pm... a very moving yet sizzling update!

be it in this story or in the show, have always loved how arnav gently shushes khushi when he knows she's petrified: ..."Shhh...dance with me?"... it's just adorable and clearly reveals his love and understanding... their love is rock-solid: despite his desire for khushi, arnav is willing to not go any further, and a determined khushi is willing to fight her fears to be one with him... their being there for the other says a lot about their relationship!

the inherent gentleness in arnav's lovemaking is very moving... While he stroked her back and smoothed his palms up and down her arms, allowing her time to get used to his touch again, he burned for her with a fire that threatened to consume him. this line brings out beautifully his internal conflict wherein his love is battling his desire!

love how well you've depicted khushi's conflicted emotions: For the briefest of moments, she felt the urgency to run, not sure whether into his arms or from him. khushi deciding to trust her heart and allowing arnav to make love to her is truly the greatest breakthrough!

"Khushi, we never stopped being ok." must be one of the most understated avowals of love, trust and understanding!

Erasing the last few months as if they'd never existed... For a moment all he could do was savor the rightness of them being together once again. "Arnavji..." she said through tears... "I missed you..." finally they're one in every sense of the word!

oh god, the next stalker in line makes his appearance!

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MISTIE

@MISTIE

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

loved it.
But who is that truly urs?
W8ing 2 read more.
Thanx 4 d pm

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ipkknd-fan

@ipkknd-fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Loved the update now who is yours truly for gods sake

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

A hot update!

I seriously got goosebumps reading it ☺️

Absolutely loved it

Awesome work 😉

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jiji

@lakshyaNkt

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

who is this yours truly. loved it. thank u

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sahada

@sahada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

nooo no no noo! what all does ths link for part 1 contain... =pp? it won't open at my end *sad pout*

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

I feel sorry for Arnav & Khushi after the previous nightmare they just have started to find the love back & now there is another mysterious man & I think it is Shyam this time. Hope Arnav & Khushi will also overcome this hurdle with the same love & trust that they share.