NSDT#3[AR] Reception of AR-Pg 130 - Page 76

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Asma Di! :)
I know you are probably angry with me since I haven't posted a comment on time :(
I was just a little busy with classes and stuff.
Anyway, first of all. How? I mean how can you be so elegant yet graceful at writing? Even when it comes to intimate stuff like wedding night you write it so well. So beautifully written Asma Di! I know I'm not the first person to tell you about your writing skills but kya karoon? You just bring out the best in me :P
Armaan and Riddhima, these two names set my heart racing so fast that I feel I ran a mile almost :P And when its a part from you about them, I am all the more elated! The exchanging of gifts and also the whole hesitation was beyond amazing. I dunno how to describe it since I suck at words :P I was smiling and blushing all the time reading the part and my mom goes like 'What are you doing, watching your love again?':P And I go like 'Yeah, you know he's my life! :D' In case you didn't realize, My love = Armaan! :D
That's what you and your writing does to me! I'm grinning like a fool and staring at the laptop screen while my mom calls me a dumbass! :P
Magar aapke liye sab Qubool Hai! :D
Continue soon.
Waiting!
Love
-Fizz.

P.S - Are you waiting for the 29th? I've never been so excited in my life! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Fizzi-

Hey Asma Di! :)
I know you are probably angry with me since I haven't posted a comment on time :(
I was just a little busy with classes and stuff.
Anyway, first of all. How? I mean how can you be so elegant yet graceful at writing? Even when it comes to intimate stuff like wedding night you write it so well. So beautifully written Asma Di! I know I'm not the first person to tell you about your writing skills but kya karoon? You just bring out the best in me :P
Armaan and Riddhima, these two names set my heart racing so fast that I feel I ran a mile almost :P And when its a part from you about them, I am all the more elated! The exchanging of gifts and also the whole hesitation was beyond amazing. I dunno how to describe it since I suck at words :P I was smiling and blushing all the time reading the part and my mom goes like 'What are you doing, watching your love again?':P And I go like 'Yeah, you know he's my life! :D' In case you didn't realize, My love = Armaan! :D
That's what you and your writing does to me! I'm grinning like a fool and staring at the laptop screen while my mom calls me a dumbass! :P
Magar aapke liye sab Qubool Hai! :D
Continue soon.
Waiting!
Love
-Fizz.

P.S - Are you waiting for the 29th? I've never been so excited in my life! :P




OMG!! Fizza jana you have made by day with such a wonderful review darling.
Jana I can never be angry on you.You know that right.
Plz don't worry about the delay.I understand that we all have a life outside IF as well.Studies come first baby,so plz do concentrate properly on them.
I'm deeply touched by your appreciation sweety.
I've never got a completement like yours.Thanks a lot jana for making me feel so good.
It's really nice to see that you loved this part soo much.
Gosh!! Your smiles would have really made your mom wonder what's going on.
Armaan and Riddhima I'm in love with this couple like crazy.
Their chemistry is the most unique and best among all the tellywood couples.The extent of craziness to which AR have loved each other beyond the constraints of society is an example for all the love birds...
Ah!! I know Armaan is your life jana..I'm also in love with Dr. Armaan Malik.
Oh I just can't wait for 29th October.Biting my fingernails with excitement you see.
Haye hamein toh KSG ka har avataar qubool hai..
I'm very happy to see how you liked the gifts,hesitation and all other things about this part.
This is the first time I've written such a stuff and I was very much apprehensive about it.But your and others comments have relieved me.
I'll try to update soon jana.
To recieve such appreciations from a wonderful writer like you means a lot to me.
Love ya
Take care!
Muah!


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey...read the whole ff...n i must say that its awesome...ur style of writing is jus mind blowing...
u knw i always wished to see their marriage in dmg but...
you made it happn... thanks a lot...😊
can u pm me also the latest update...
thanks in advance...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Where are others?
Only 16 likes???
kriti..... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear the update was just awesome,mindblowing,superb..
u r a gr8 writer..
keep it up dear nd update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Where are others with their reviews?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Asmaaa trust me the part was superblyyy fantabulosss i jusss loveddd it to d core... I jus don hav words to explain or tell u hw much i liked it... I read it 3times wid in 2hrsss... N feel i like reading it again and again... Its seriouslyyy superb... Luvd d way u hav showed bth of theres desires and passion... It was not at all vulgar... I hav read many other ff's whch hav more than this adult stuff... But you hav potrayed everthng very beautifully... Kuddos to you and fathi di... :)you guys are outstanding... Well done guysss...
Thanks a lot for such a romantic parttt...

Ps: finally i'm commenting... Still i'm not able to comment from pc... :( thank god i had configured on my mobile... :p

waiting for more such romantic parts to read... Waiting for d honeymoon part now...

Aftr reading such a bbeautiful part i wasnt able to resit myself so i made dat pic for d ff... Itss my chota present for you dor giving such a grand wedding and such a beautiful romantic part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi! :)
First of all thank you very much for the pm...nd I completely understand dat ur just being fair to all ur readers...no worries..😊
Ohk now lets get to the comments..
loved the venues nd the song selections.. they were mind blowing...really you created the aura of wedding...
special mention for armaan n padma relation..they share mother nd son relationship rather than mother-in-law n son-in-law...it was a touchy moment wen padma came to his place for his haldi...
all the moments btw armaan ridz were so romantic ...phell in love wid them all over again...their cute talks,sneaking in ridz room,removing mehndi from her hands...
finally they r happily married...m sOo haPPy...
Thanks once again for the pm n hopefully will get the much awaited part...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: day_lily

Hi! :)

First of all thank you very much for the pm...nd I completely understand dat ur just being fair to all ur readers...no worries..😊
Ohk now lets get to the comments..
loved the venues nd the song selections.. they were mind blowing...really you created the aura of wedding...
special mention for armaan n padma relation..they share mother nd son relationship rather than mother-in-law n son-in-law...it was a touchy moment wen padma came to his place for his haldi...
all the moments btw armaan ridz were so romantic ...phell in love wid them all over again...their cute talks,sneaking in ridz room,removing mehndi from her hands...
finally they r happily married...m sOo haPPy...
Thanks once again for the pm n hopefully will get the much awaited part...😃



You are welcome dear.
First of all a very warm welcome here.
I'm very happy to recieve your comments.
Thanks a lot for the lovely appreciation.
Well I and Fatimka di have really worked hard on this ff.
I'm glad to know that you enjoyed the wedding so much.
Thanks a lot for understanding my point of view.
It;s nice to see that you loved the bond between Armaan and Padma so much.
Aww!! You fell in love with AR all over again.That's really great.
Plz stay tuned and keep motivating me and Di with your kind words.
Take care!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey i just caught up with this ff, and i am loving the way have written it.. Its amazing, there are so many complicated techniques involved in the way you have written the story, but you have made it so easy for us to understand ad hats off to you cos you have done a brilliant job :) love the story and of course our lovely ar (how can anyone not love them)
I just read your note about the wedding part, could you pls send it to me, i am 16+ pls do send me all the other wedding parts as well and i promise you i will comment :) waiting for ur pm eagerly and thank you in advance ;)

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