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Shaz

@Barunkidewani

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Wonderfull updateee...👏

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Very subtle.. very beautiful !!!

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Aisha

@.Aisha.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Loved it! It was awesomely(is it a word?) written!👏👏👏

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aishwarya_rox

@aishwarya_rox

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Please continue this one !!! I really liked the emotion expressed !!! Thanks for all the pms...I love each and every update of urs and wait desperately for them ...ur a fantastic writer :D

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Smita

@..Smita..

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

sad one. But very well written!👏

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

ohhh...it was so sad...
but very well written...truly felt for khushi...

thanks so much for the pm...:)

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

thank you for the pm, Risha... a beautifully moving piece that hits the right notes... have been wishing to see khushi walking out once the truth is revealed... love nk because he stood by khushi, irrespective of the consequences while the others were always in two minds as to what to do or had other considerations... the line aboout her anklet being left behind is strongly reminiscent of cinderella's glass slipper... ther's hope for a happily ever after! the song is just right in this context.

kudos to you for making arnav the more vulnerable of the two!

Khushi kept walking,trying to be strong.She had walked alone when he had challenged her during those office days,she had walked alone when she had been rebuked by her family for a wedding she hadn't even wanted.She had walked alone when Shyam had hurled accusations at her-wrong ones.She had walked alone when she had fought to save the love of her life... were some of the most painful though quite touching lines