**RaghaVi FF: The Seasons Of Life** - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh sneha... first of all my apologies for not have read the first two parts.. but I am glad I did not read those before today! I dont think I could have waited for u to update the 2nd and 3rd part after reading the first part! So in way it is good that i missed them before today😆
The first part had me in tears... What a perfectly beautiful family that was and what a tragic end to it! Honestly Raghav might have a full life... he might find the love, .. he might smile again but life will never be the same for him! He grew up suddenly.. into a mature, responsible adult in a matter of few hours!! That is not going to be easy!
Loved how komal knew what would hurt raghav in his full life in the future and asked him to leave!
I hope you will have flash backs of the bhabhi-devar in the future story. I would love to read about them!
Must say you are indeed very talented!
Thanks for the update and the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: khota_sikka_sri

That was really sweet Sneha. Really sweet. 🤗



Thanks Sri 🤗... For finding it sweet n commenting 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
will wait for the next part sneha
y don't u put up an index
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam123_0

Oh sneha... first of all my apologies for not have read the first two parts.. but I am glad I did not read those before today! I dont think I could have waited for u to update the 2nd and 3rd part after reading the first part! So in way it is good that i missed them before today😆

The first part had me in tears... What a perfectly beautiful family that was and what a tragic end to it! Honestly Raghav might have a full life... he might find the love, .. he might smile again but life will never be the same for him! He grew up suddenly.. into a mature, responsible adult in a matter of few hours!! That is not going to be easy!
Loved how komal knew what would hurt raghav in his full life in the future and asked him to leave!
I hope you will have flash backs of the bhabhi-devar in the future story. I would love to read about them!
Must say you are indeed very talented!
Thanks for the update and the PM!



Glad that u spared the time to read it.. from the start... 😃

I heave a sigh of relief when u say it touched ur heart... and the way u beautifully worded it.

The Past, the memories,are always a part of the present and the future... so yes you may see a few such flash backs.

*hides behind the sofa* (betty style)

Will keep u updated dear... n before i conclude ... here 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: -vandy-

will wait for the next part sneha

y don't u put up an index



Ok Di... The next part will be updated soon... can i add in HOPEFULLY

Index as in regarding the chapters?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Di u r asking worth the read?

U R FRIGGING AWESOME!
Really can't express what ur FF has effects on me...BUT its really very very touching.As always your updates are wonderful, as you express each character's thoughts and feelings flawlessly with beautiful words.
Sometimes I think why don't the CVs come up at IF, read ur FF, copy paste in there productions and woala you are appointed for this story writing!...How dreamy that would be?😍

Again a laudable effort di!Keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
chechi i just scanned through!
will read it properly on aug 15😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
chechi i jus scanned through!!!
will read properly and will get back😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the update ❤️...but you forgot to pm me 😔...can wait for your next update!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: stephenie

Di u r asking worth the read?


U R FRIGGING AWESOME!
Really can't express what ur FF has effects on me...BUT its really very very touching.As always your updates are wonderful, as you express each character's thoughts and feelings flawlessly with beautiful words.
Sometimes I think why don't the CVs come up at IF, read ur FF, copy paste in there productions and woala you are appointed for this story writing!...How dreamy that would be?😍

Again a laudable effort di!Keep it up👍🏼



Steph ye le... 🤗

Glad that the chapter sections had the desired effect... and u found it touching.

Well thanks for enlightening me about the second career option 😆... But I'm truly happy animating Peter Pan n Charlie Chaplin here.. 😉

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