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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Rosyln419



<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#6600ff">No dear it was not Sharon. But someone else. And the most unexpected person will take revenge.</font>


Taani?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
it was awesm update dear thank x 4r pm update next asap sory 4r delay in comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Awesome...luvd it...😊
plz continue it soon...!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Swayam goes to Kria's home. Kria's mom says her that she is going out in a puja and would be back late. Sharon on the other hand gets ready to go out on a date with Shivam. She then calls him and says him to come over to her place.

Sharon: "Hey Shivam why don't you come over here and pick me up today?"

Shivam: "Ya dear why not? I'll be there in ten minutes." he said. He had wicked plans in his mind. He thought of making love with Sharon today though by hook or by crook. The car stopped at the gate and Shivam walked down. Sharon was standing out.

She gave him a seducing smile and he walked up to her. He thought that he don't have to work up much as Sharon seems interested too. Sharon held his collar and said him:

"Hey Shivam sweetie, wanna have a drink?" she asked in the same seducing tone and smile and he nodded a yes.

They went in and she walked up to the dinning table and opened a bottle of champagne to make his drink. He was sitting on a sofa thinking about implementing his plan after a drink.



On the other hand.

Swayam when reached Kria's home he said her everything about Sharon and today's incidents. He hugged her in pain and cried his heart out. Kria was crying too seeing his pain.

Swayam: "Why Kria, why does she always do this with me? Why she always break my heart which which always beats only and only for her. I thought that now me and Sharon were together after she said yes. I thought me and my heart were complete now when she said yes for a relationship with me and now she again broke my heart." he cried his heart out.

Kria: "Calm down Swayam she don't know what she is losing. When she will realize it she will come back." she was consoling him endlessly. She couldn't see her best pal in pain and trouble.

Swayam was so depressed that he couldn't stop crying. Kria took him to his home. (Taani is not in this OS.)

Rey calls Swayam so many times but he doesn't picks up his phone. Finally after 35th call Swayam picked up his call.

Rey: "Hello Swayam. . . ? Where are you?" he asks him.

Swayam: "At home." he says bluntly.

Rey: "Swayam . . . Sha. . . Sharon is going out on a date with Shivam. After you left cafeteria Shivam asked Sharon for a date and she said. . . yes." he explained him all the details that happened after he left cafeteria.

Swayam listens this and gets a huge shock. It was unbearable for him. His breath stopped for a second and he had a sudden blackout which blinded him and he couldn't see anything for a minute. His brain was not working at all after what he heard. And then the next moment his breathing grew faster and he was hyperventilating, sweating badly, his knees weakened up and he collapsed on the ground. Rey was still on the call calling out his name to get an answer. It was worrying Rey so much now.

As soon as Swayam collapsed on the ground Kria let out a shriek of pain and shock. She literally screamed." Swayam. . . . . "

Rey heard that shriek of pain but was not able to believe it. It was her? It really was Kria? He couldn't believe. He knew something was surely wrong. He rushed out of the door of his home hurriedly almost breaking a vase he switched on the engine of his car and drove like a manic to Swayam's home. Was it really her? He was still thinking. He was also worried about Swayam.

He was restless. So many emotions were rushing up in his veins, mind and heart. There was a tsunami of emotions going on in his heart. He broke all the traffic signals and reached his home. The car stopped at the gate with a screeching sound. He got own and was hesitated for a second whether to go in or not.

But he just had to go in if not to find out whether it was her or not but he had to go in for Swayam.

Swayam was losing every hope of living, he was losing his hope of life. Kria was consoling him endlessly. She made him stand and hugged him tightly to make him relax and release his pain. Swayam just had to release his pain otherwise he would go into trauma. Kria had to make him do this. While she was still hugging and consoling him someone banged the door open. She couldn't believe her eyes.

It was him. It was Rey. Her Rey. His eyes opened in shock when he saw her. His Kria. It really was her. And the next moment he saw Kria releasing Swayam and then at that moment Rey saw Swayam's face.

He was looking like a dead corpse. A man who died mentally but was living physically. All the expressions were drained and washed out from Swayam's face. He was looking pale.

Rey had so many questions to ask to Kria about leaving him but right now Swayam was more important. Rey was traumatized for a moment when he saw Swayam in this condition. He walked slowly towards Swayam. When Kria saw Rey she ran towards him and held his shirt and said him about Swayam's condition which gave Rey one big shock that he too was unable to move for a second and was unable to react.

She jerked Rey once again holding his shirt and screamed in deep agony and pain which pierced and crushed on Rey's ears.

Kria: "Rey. . . . " she jerked him again holding his collar and crying. He saw her face. Her eyes were swollen because of crying and her cheeks were stained because of tears. Reu cupped Kria's face and she cried more and more. She continued to speak.

Kria: "Rey. . . .Rey. . . Swa. . . Swayam . . . . Swayam is not reacting at all. . . Rey. . . Swayam. . . Swa. . " she was stammering a lot as the pain created a lump in her throat which wsa not letting her speak at all. She was so concerned and worried about her best friend who helped her form the very first day of college. She broke completely.

Rey saw this and walked upto Swayam. He had also tried a lot to make Swayam react but he was no reacting anything. Rey jerked him up but there were o emotions, no response nothing. Swayam stood there like a dead body. All the emotions drained out of his heart and all the feelings were washed out of his veins. He have to respond. He just have to respond and cry otherwise it would become difficult and impossible to save him and get him back.

One last try Rey thought and if he didn't react then they have to take him to hospital.

Rey held Swayam's face and made him look into his eyes. He jerked him so hard and shouted his name.

Rey: "Swayam. . . . " he jerked him so hard that he finally reacted. His eyes moved and saw Rey. His another best buddy. And then Rey continued.

Rey: "Swayam. . . Sha. . . Sharon still loves you. She will be back." he consoled him.

When Swayam saw Rey he broke out a loud cry of pain which almost shattered and crushed all the three hearts who were present there. His pain shook Rey's and Kria's soul completely. They got goose bumps.

Swayam: "Rey. . . . " he cried his all heart out and Rey hugged him so tightly that now he could literally feel Swayam's heart beat and his pain. When Swayam saw Kria he couldn't control his emotions and he hugged her too and cried. Kria was always there for him when ever he was in pain.

He thought that she was there for me always but I never was there for her when she was in problem. Nobody knew that Kria faced problem because of Shivam but just one person who that day listened Swayam and Kria's conversation. Neither Kria know about it nor Swayam or Sharon know that it was Shivam. They all three did a group hug. When Swayam was bit fine and Kria was looking after him Rey saw this and instantly left from there without informing Swayam or Kria about it. He was not jealous nor angry nor did he misunderstood them but it were his questions that were making him restless.




On the other hand Shivam had ten to twelve pegs of champagne. He was all down. And then he had two whole bottles. He was capable enough to handle drinks but didn't know why he was drowsing. He was all lost and was in no state of mind. He was semi unconscious. His eyes were rolling and then he saw someone in front of him. The strangest, shocking, soul wrecking incident happened. And minutes later.

Sharon went to washroom. She was all in tears for what she did with Swayam. She cheated on him. But why? She cut her hand as a punishment. But not wrist. She was in pain too.

Two days passed. It was morning eight o'clock. Shivam found himself in a covered place which was smelling foul. He was stinking too. And when he got up he found out that he was in a garbage bin. Ya he was literally rotting in municipality dustbin from two days. But why don't he remember anything?



Okay guys dont bash me by just reading this update. Just comment about this update as next update will be soon. But please you can even give negative comments as I am hell sure my next update will change all your Negative comments into positive one. 😆

But if you seriously like this one and want more then please do share with me what you felt by reading this. As it will help me to write something more. One liners plz you can press more keys of the keyboard and share what you felt. If you want something more from My FFs and an early update then that would depend on the comments. Hehehe. Bye guys. Oops. Sorry. I forgot the Precap. Here's the Precap.



Precap:

Peek into Rey and Kria's mind. (Well I am Ms. Edward. 😆)

Incidents at college. The revelation. The bashing. The Fights.

Everyone laughing like mad. The time for reunion. The best time in Kreyansh and Swaron's life. But one step of Kria will only prove her feelings towards Rey. Wanna know how? Get sticked to it.

And guys Plz dont ask me to remind you to unres ur comments as my writing schedule is already too heavy. You can ask my sister enrique about it. Okay bye. 😃



Edited by Rosyln419 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
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yippie!!! first one to comment!!!

Awsm start!

meri taraf se toh no -ve comment!

Gosh why did sharon did dat???

Swayam's condition was unbearable!

Cant even imagine it!

hope everything will sort out soon!

Update soon and thanx for pm 😃
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
AWESOME START OFF DEAR
really interesting :D
keep it up and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
awesome loved it!!
and gosh!!!
the way u described swayam's, kria n rey's pain was just amazing !!
u r a fab writer !!👏
hope evrything turns out to be good in kriyansh n swaron's life !!
n good to knw that shivam was rotting in the garbage bin !! 😃😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Awesome update dear...

gr8 wrk..

update soon n ty i pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
awesome update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Nice update😊
Thnx for the PM

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