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Aanchal

@aanchu19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

awesome! awesome!! awesome!!!
wow
wonderful
and hilarious too
hehehe
first of all they fought then khushi escaped insulting the ASR
and then he madly rusheed to find her and then akash did the same and a confused anjali guessing about the mysterious "she"
hehhehe so funny and entertaining
i was waiting for you update so long
thanks for updating and hope you do conti soon
thanks for the pm

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#502

I just read all 19 updates. 😆 Wow your sense of humor and writing style are great. I enjoyed each update and was really sad that I would have to wait for the next update. You are a VERY talented writer. 👏

I hope you add me to your buddy list. I know I will enjoy reading more updates.

Edited by purplelove - 13 years ago

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#503

dat was pretty hilarious.😃😆i mean lol lol lol.😆😆😆]hahaaAnajli's reactn..ne oder brthr/?loln y z Arnav dattt worried?aah i cn sense it..😛😛😛😉😉
Aakash's part z undertood..:D
update sooon...n pm me on ur nxt update..😛😛😛😛😛😛thnxxx😊😊😊😊😊😊

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#504

wow what a beautiful update...anjali's part is so funny...haha another brother🤣...thnx and w8ng

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Vkes

@Vkes

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#505

Awesome update. I like the last prt of anjali.

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#506

"tick tock tick tock tick tock...

silence..

weird silence..

very weird silence...

... backspace misses you Mr. Raizada."

It's these little gems that make your updates so Unique SC. Lovely witty update..left slightly near the cliff edge maybe... but loved Anjali's dialogue at the end.

Keep them coming..

Hope real life is being a less of a pain now.

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#507

awesome update...

it's vry funny...

i like it...

thanks 4 d pm

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#508

"EXCUSE ME? You listen to me Mr Raizada!! It's you who should thank me from saving you from making a toad out of yourself in front of your elite business class on that mike! It is NOT my fault that you barge into me and the toad goes flying from my hand to your cravat , which frankly, any toad would, considering it was silk AND YOU HARDLY MOVE!!!FRANKLY I THINK YOU ARE A TOTAL CEMENT PILE!!!"

😆

can't believe c did dat!hahahahah...

"oh I am so sorry" Khushi muttered..

Arnav couldn't believe she apologised so soon..

"i didn't know..i mean I had NO idea you were hard on hearing"

"WHAT?"

she shook her head sadly at his 'what'..

"all these days I used to think it was so mighty arrogant of you not to respond to half of my sentences and so I called you god knows what, and you had this problem.."

"WHAT PROBLEM DAMMIT???!!!" Arnav had lost it now..

"oh god, it's happening again" he could hear her mutter, then she looked at him and literally shouted..

"I AM SO SORRY MR RAIZADA! I HAD NO IDEA YOU WERE HARD ON HEARING!!CAN YOU HEAR ME? I SAID I AM SORRY!! THAT I DIDN'T KNOW-"

"SHUT UP!! JUS' SHUT UP!!" he shouted and his voice boomed in the place,,

🤣

dat iz sooo like khushi!!!omg hilarious!

i luv,jus luv diz line---- Khushi widened her eyes..and felt the butterflies again..she was growing to detest the species..like couldn't they find a better place on earth to madly flutter about..👏

wow!blast???? omg can't wait fo d nxt update!!!!!jus luv ur work!

tQ fo d pm!