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Originally posted by: mistyrains

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Finally! I'm first YAY!:)

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Hahhaha, he set up camera to watch Sama, my God, Rae, Ayaan is such a sweetheart. You are putting up serious competition between Arnav and Aynu for me. Hmph.

Ayaan smirks and Arnav smirks too.

They both look at each other.

"Why are you smirking? She may prefer me, you know?"

"Main tumhara baap hoon."

Author rolls eyes.

What a great idea, that's what Arnav said, dude you have me blushing like a tamatar right now. God this chapter is so SO nice. I have to, have to read it again :)

*Bows*

And you know I really loved the part, where Ayaan is looking fondly at all the important women in his life, it's highly similar to his father. Sigh. SO beautiful Rae!:)

Yep. That was meant to be a Arnav/Ayaan moment. Glad you liked it. :)

He had resisted but she had resisted his resistance and insisted on spreading her brand of innocent and unadulterated joy in his bleak life.

^A beautiful line Rae. Exquisite:) And then the lines that follow are so wonderful. A riot of emotions. Lovely lines:)

Synchronised dhak-dhaks, such a beautiful phrase.

And you made them kiss. Thank you!:) Thank you , a LOT, because their almost kisses are becoming a little too annoying , Though no one minds them, I think :P

And yes, the kiss was beautiful. But isn't it obvious, aapne likha aur ArHi ne implement kiya 😆

LOL! I literally had to push their heads together and then they threw me out of the room! What The! 😆

"Please...yeh shaadi waadi jaldi karvao! I cant wait anymore!"

^Yes, YES, I can't wait too. And boy I love this girl. She says what she wants, so clearly. And the way Aynu was doing whatever it was that he was doing, was ahem, very you know...naughty, just like you said 😆

"Saari bibiyaan aayiyaan
Ayaan ki Sama na aayi!
Othhe kendi thi main barah baje aawaangi
Aithe bajj gayye dhai
Ayaan ki Sama na aayi!"

^And this, holy shit, you are, so, SO creative. Salutes. Mahaan hai aap, this is too good.

I can't stop smiling after this chapter, great work Rae!:)

That was the objective. :)

Originally posted by: meera30

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Sorry for the slightly late edit- Monday blues hitting me already

What a chapter.

Khushi and Arnav were truly beautiful. I still cannot think of them as parents in their 50s but I could feel the maturity in their love. Yes they both denied it for long and to have come such a long way from that ramp in Lucknow is an achievement and what better occasion to thank each other than the wedding of their son!!

Exactly. Those were the sentiments behind this scene. :)

Ayaan and Sama - She looked beautiful. Yep, thanks to your picture, I could actually see her in my head :) And their had their little moment too...Best ones...the secretive kisses before everything is legal :)

Aha! Really now? ;) :D

But the highlight - the little interaction with Karan - the cousins and Arnav - perfect. Their conspiracy and it falling flat because Mr Raizada can't take his eyes off his wife :)

Karan finally! had his moment! ;) :D

Thanks to his Saasumaa! ;) :D

As always - wonderful writing!