ArShi:Destiny With TRAILER Thread I - Page 85

lovely story...awesome each n every chapter is just awesome ...thanks Omoraboti for recommendation :)

part 8,9,10,11:
oh girl if i could ever express in right words how much im loving this story!! but alas! i am no writer.. and how much hard i try each time, do know that that would not be close enough how i am feeling exactly..
we witnessed maturing up of khushi and to great extent Arnav has changed also...he is definitely a different man from five years ago but he is also stuck at some point...the point where he is successful, he is rich, he has everything to lead a powerful and luxurious life but he does not quite exactly know what to do with this or what he wants for himself..but at the moment he was content, but far away from happy...
i am loving their encounters, their battle in every aspect, their fighting with their own emotions..
a thought crossed my mind and i cant help but voice it out loud- Khushi is feeling an endless repulsion and disgust towards Arnav-for faking to the world, to the media about the person he was..and that was completely justified.. but to accuse him of playing with the heart and emotions of a seventeen year old.. doesnt she making a mistake of judgement here? he never knew back then she was even existed, it was her who let herself emotionally attached with him and made a mistake of thinking this was love rather than a mere crush...
this thought just popped in my mind while reading and i will look for a light to it as i proceed further.. =))

part 12:
aaahhh this part was full of doses with our favorite and most talked about scenes of our beloved show...
i was completely drowned in this chapter..
and oh my God the dance practice!!! truly what a disaster that was!! 😆
and someone is loosing bit too many things rapidly, no?
first control then center 😳.. and me doing a happy jig over here...

part 13:
oh my dear lord!!!
what a roller coaster ride the chapter was!!
if i was laughing hard at the beginning over all the pranks and over Arnav's distressed form due to that, it became purely emotional and intense one as the chapter proceeded with massive turn out of the events...
just hats off to you..brilliant!!

finally done with all the parts and what an awesome read that was!!!
i cant thank you enough for this dear!! this was sheer brilliance...
the journey of both the protagonists so far is something for them to ponder upon again n again and for us to cherish it in every step.. how fa both of them came? when i look back- it seems like a dream!!
specially for Arnav- this transformation was never easy, he almost destroyed himself in the process, and before the final nail just saved him from himself...all these was done by himself but the touchstone that remained constant was khushi...it was memory of her words that had started his drowning and at last it was her words that gave him new hope, strength to fight with himself,for himself and made him return to his family for his own sake and also for theirs...can it be portrayed more beautifully than this? i doubt!!!
the part where Manoroma was trying to make him understand why he cannot be like his father ever-- i had tears in my eyes...
then from their meeting after almost a year to their slowly building up friendship and to their current status it was a bliss to read...
and i am glad that Khushi finally realized though Arnav was wrong portraying himself as someone who he is not, he possibly had no active role for her suffering that much, and that realization finally worked for her and made her forgive him finally...
now that they are finally together, they still have long way to go and lot to overcome and i cannot wait to experience their journey ahead...
and i am also waiting for the day when Arnav will realize that khushi matters not only because she is the best friend of his sister but because they are connected with other with a feeling called love...
and at the same time for khushi to believe in the word 'love' and its existence in the real world apart from classic novels...

P.S. please pardon me for spamming your thread, but i was helpless... the story is so good and there was so much to share, i didnt know what else to do..
okay i am shutting up...
P.P.S eagerly waiting for the next one...

Hi Chander,

Read all parts in a go. Wonderful story brilliantly written. Characters and emotions well placed.

have started to read the story...

Great job...

Woohoo an update and my my some update it is!! So they both want each other but no commitments and then there is family... Why do I have a feeling that its going to get messed up? Look fwd to the next updates. With the two of them nothing goes to plan! Thanks for the pm x