Arshi FF: Tethered Thread 1 (Ch 1-20) Thread 2 link added - Page 96

very interesting update

this part was so cute...finders keepers...hahha that was the best part...all are not behaving their age but are consistently asking each other to do so...i wonder who shall succeed in doing so but if they do would the story be this great???absolutely no😆😆

Sorry for the delayed comment.. just read part 19 and part 20..

Part 19

Amazing.. specially Arnav's and Aman's reaction on seeing Khushi and Mahek respectively.. "strawberries'.. 'peaches'.. they are friends for sure..

Samar is such an amazing catalyst for the story of Arhi.. i like it.. you have placed him enough to not be too annoying but still make himself known enough to annoy Arnav.. with can I steal my date and all.. hahahah

I found it funny too.. when arnav was held by Ardhana and introducing him to someone.. who slipped the first chance she got.. hahah..

Part 20

The most hilarious and cute part was when Khushi was talking to herself in the garden and arnav heard her..

Loved the update.. just found out that there are another two parts.. man i have missed so much.. I will catch up with the other two parts soon.

@maverickmartin: Nyc story!!!!😊

I love the way this story is going.

I thought the conversation between Arnav and Khushi struck just the right note- the uncertainty about what to say in in such a situation , getting it wrong and wanting to correct it, the nervousness of it all. Anticipating, wanting and being fearful, all that was really well done.

I'm glad you brought in Aman as a voice to reason to get Mahek realize that she may not really know ASR though she thinks she does. 😊

@maverickmartin: Nyc story!!!!😊

Awesome n loved the update.loved the ending scene in garden...

came across this FF, loving the story and your writting.

Reading through all the chapters! Absolutely love this ff! Can't wait to read on!