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shraddska

@shraddska

Voyager

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

I almost laughed in relief at the end...

Wow that was so wonderful...

Their pains and fears so beautifully portrayed...

Hats off to you...

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

oh man I wish the writers could just even glimpse into your writing and give us something even CLOSE to your stories!!!

How I wishhh this would actually happen in the drama!

I absolutely LOVED this OS! it was beautiful... I think I shall go re-read it!

I feel so content now... :)

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Hayye, such a wonderful OS Rae, though I'm sorry for the extremely late comment :/

I was gushing by the end of the chapter, blushing at the Honeymoon part 😆

And every other line, his realization of what he had done previously, the guilt and the the overwhelming love, the change in the very dynamics of their relationship, is written perfectly by you. Though I think I need to stop repeating this every time, as its more of an usual now 😆

Great concept!:)

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Sharmila

@ongongong

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

U knw what i came home just now and reading ur OS.When i read the airport part i was like why can't he take her? And when i read the next few lines,i was literally jumping(i'm reading this on my phone) and my mom & sis were like - what's ur problem,u r just lost with ur phone?Lol,so nice.

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Harshita jain

@HARSHU246

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

awww i literally loved it ... this peice stole my heart
loved it .
well its the first time i have read your OS and i am fallen in love with it... p

please add me to ur pm list .. would love to read your stories
that was so beautifully written
i loved it ...
loads of love to you

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Aw! That's so super sweet! I could totally understand the fear that khushi felt...in fact the fear and need for each other that both Arhi hold for each other was very very palpable. This is how I expect Arhi to be after they reunite and all the misunderstanding is cleared away- without a hysterical anjali forcing Arnav to choose between his sister and the love of his life. Sigh. This OS has just made me very happy :) I was feeling my heart sink for both of them, and then the tension just sparked up when khushi characteristically lashed out without thinking and Arnav characteristically flared up...I could see it happening almost, it was so true to character:) and the ending bit just made me smile widely, which is gonna prompt awkward questions coz im waiting at the boarding gate for my flight. But i dont care :D awesome OS! PS: pls bear with me...I am slowly working my way through ur index :)

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Aweome...loved the care and concern between Arhi

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Avani

@highonshows

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

amazingly written...

Loved the way u did the monologues and thoughts...on both side,...

U included the family too in the whole situation around them...

That was a beautiful well written OS, n i enjoyed to throughout...

Avni

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Raj

@GillRK

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

The last bit made me sooo emotional it was so sweet luv Arnav in this :)

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

by God! seriously the way you write sad stuff is too good! heart becomes heavy and we are ready to break down anyminute. that is so totally good. a very beautiful os, well chosen words. superb! SAD/ PATHOS OS/FF QUEEN TITLE SHOULD BE BESTOWED UPON YOU👏👏👏👏👏👏

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