Arshi FF:I love you,I trust you!(Discontinued!)

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Oh No yaar...Make the MU as short as possible...

And yeah if you want the story to be more dramatic, go for the "Kushi getting shot" storyline...There'll be lotsa drama then...

Personally I would love to read anything you write...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Okay can't decide if she should be shot or not well maybe it will be more interesting if she gets shot okay don't kill me for this suggestion ppl but this way arnav can be sure that he can trust her
Man I wish she wouldn't do things like these on her own but tell nk and mami at least
Cheers for this update and pm looking forward to next one

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1DAlice

@1DAlice

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Awesome start!!!

Love the concept!!

Continue soon!!😊

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LoLo

@LoLo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I'm not happy righ now, but you know I was the same with TMYLM. I trust you, you're not a CV.😉Thanks for the PM.

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awesome part

loved it

very well written

shyam is cunning

hope arnav doesn't believe shyam

continue soon

thanx for the pm😃

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

luved it

wonderful update

at last khushi found her husband but hope arnav trusts khushi.

dont want any mu gain.

looking forward to the next update and how khushi gets arnav out of that trap.

thx a lot for the pm

continue soon

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

👏thanks...great job...lvoed it...👏

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Oroni

@oroniArShi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

dear plz continue..like it...n thxx tht no MU...

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Zindagirocks_21

@Zindagirocks_21

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Oh no MU ... I just hate when that happens arnav please don't doubt on her , she loves you! But damn gotta give it to Khushi she only gonna give 10% of property to Shyam ... I hope even nk doesnt misunderstand her , that she is playing with her :)
Thanks for the pm and please continue soon <3