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Posted: 13 years ago
Loving this new story line. Please PM me whenever you update.
PS: Careless whispers is very cleverly & carefully written.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

just came across this ff of urs n liked it very much...

m really curious to know what happened in the past that changed both arnav n khushi's life so much...plz pm me when u next update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
You are a brilliant writer, I loved your colours of the wind too, you should write professionally, please add me and pm me when u update, thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice story...keep writing😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow different concept...interesting...am off to your blog to continue reading...love it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi,read chapter 15.

first of all,thanks for this arrangement.i was having difficulty in posting my coments.i too wish i cud do it in the blog.but unfortunately its not working.so this is ok.

well,to be honest,i didnt feel any movement in this chapter.i mean the story didnt move nor did it surprise r pleasure me like all other chaps.

the highlights r wat i liked was payal sticking ot gaurav n how nk n gaurav squirmed n kushi's thots then.lol.also i liked how shyam spluttered hearing kushi's comment.

felt bad r some fear in my mind reading arnav on tht day.

also now its clear tht both of them r burning with guilt of no use.i mean im sure arnav had lost la r was in the verge of la n kushi thinks she was the reason for his exile.
similarly arnav doesnt knw kushi is not nk's wife properlyn nk is gay n so he is guilty abt kushi's guilt n her exile.

now we hv to wait for things to settle,then clearing,past,judgement n finally future.iwaiting for ur updates tht wud ensure me atleast some of the abv

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: daljeet

hi,read chapter 15.

first of all,thanks for this arrangement.i was having difficulty in posting my coments.i too wish i cud do it in the blog.but unfortunately its not working.so this is ok.

well,to be honest,i didnt feel any movement in this chapter.i mean the story didnt move nor did it surprise r pleasure me like all other chaps.

the highlights r wat i liked was payal sticking ot gaurav n how nk n gaurav squirmed n kushi's thots then.lol.also i liked how shyam spluttered hearing kushi's comment.

felt bad r some fear in my mind reading arnav on tht day.

also now its clear tht both of them r burning with guilt of no use.i mean im sure arnav had lost la r was in the verge of la n kushi thinks she was the reason for his exile.
similarly arnav doesnt knw kushi is not nk's wife properlyn nk is gay n so he is guilty abt kushi's guilt n her exile.

now we hv to wait for things to settle,then clearing,past,judgement n finally future.iwaiting for ur updates tht wud ensure me atleast some of the abv


Thanks! Yep. It is a slower story for sure. And let me warn you that it will be the pace. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30


Thanks! Yep. It is a slower story for sure. And let me warn you that it will be the pace. :)

I so like the pace 😉 jokes apart...really like the way the story in developing...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30


Thanks! Yep. It is a slower story for sure. And let me warn you that it will be the pace. :)


Meeraji, my two kadak Mahatma Gandhi wale notes...or galleons. I deal in wizard money time to time. ;) :D

I like the pace and I like the guilt cos at the end of the day cos at the end of the day they both went back on things precious to them, no matter what the situation, back story, side story yada yada.

Thats it. :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy i just now read chapter 15 of careless whispers. must say the chapter looks promising with a very interesting storyline. i tried commenting in the blog but somehow cannot make it so commented here. i will now go and catch up with the rest of the chapters of the ff. then i will comment and give my views. promise.😃

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