FF: Living Without You: 4: Part 59 (Last) Updated

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#741

awe loved it fantastic update

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CrazY-4-BaRuN

@CrazY-4-BaRuN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: smitar

"The deal has been finalised by ASR with little time wasted!", remarked Anjali to Nani, Mamiji, & Anandji, laughing.

"No negotiation!", commented Naniji, stifling her laughter.

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"Arnav Bitwaa, Akash Bitwaa! Where are you goings? What ijj the hurry?"

"Haan, Mami. I think we should all play a round of cards. What do you say?", asked Anjali, an innocent look on her face.

"Yes, Di. Let's call Khushiji and Payal Bhabhi too."

"Let's call the neighbours too.", said Mamaji. "We can make a night of it. What do you say, Arnav Bitwaa?", he teased.

What Arnav Bitwaa had to say could not be said in public. And never to his uncle in private either. So he bit on his tongue, his face revealing his determination to get Khushi to himself.

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"Chotey! Khushiji is ready to play cards with you."

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"One, switch off the phone. Otherwise, Khushiji will kill Amanji some day."

Arnav smiled.

"Two, don't keep her up too late with your games." He could hear Di giggling over the sound of the jeep's engine. "Goodnight!" She cut the phone.

"What the!", Arnav was driven to exclaim.

He turned at the sound of uncontrollable giggling. Khushi was laughing, hidden under her dupatta.

I Love Anjali ! I Love this lady !!!!!!! 😆

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devsum

@devsum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#743

Smita, u r playing with us ,dear. Awesome, sweet...update.😊😊😊😊😊

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#744

thank you Smita, I really needed this update after tonight's episode that seems to foretell problems for khushi in the near future...

the beginning was just fabulous, going from prosaic to passionate! arnav always had a one track mind: They didn't know that Arnav was fighting another battle, with TIME. almost felt like I was present there watching arnav's impatience to get the rituals over with and his eagerness to be with khushi to enjoy his wedding night... after all, patience and self-control do need to be rewarded 😉! spent most of my time while reading the update like this 😃😆🤣!

it was hilarious to read of arnav rushing through all the rituals much to the disgust of nk and the others... the anjali, nani, mamiji combo was just adorable! mamiji is right: akash can learn a thing or two from arnav! the wisecracks by anjali, nani and mami, about arnav setting his mind to doing things and he feeling tired, had me LOL. loved the new euphemism 'playing cards' 😛! trust khushi to put her foot in it 😆

and these were by far the best lines today: What Arnav Bitwaa had to say could not be said in public. And never to his uncle in private either. 🤣 Arnav looked at his watch. How long did it take to decorate two bedrooms? impatient much, arnav bitwa?! I believe khushi would do a lot better without buaji's advice... I can just imagine arnav's face if khushi were to bat her eyelashes at him and simper at the same time: 😲 🤣!

making the real world intrude in the midst of this hilarity was a nice touch: anand just updating and reassuring arnav about anjali's future... the arnav-anand relationship is really strong and the fact that anjali is not far from arnav's thoughts, in the midst of all these celebrations, was heart-warming... what a sibling bond, especially anjali teasing arnav with that phone message! a beautiful sentiment: both felt a hand tightening its hold on their hearts.

lovely to see 'aman' making his presence felt, even if indirectly! arnav's pet phrases ' unbelievable' and 'what the' as well as khushi giggling under the dupatta were a nice way to conclude the update 👏!

LOOOVED IT!

boy, is my comment [commentary 😊?] loong! hope you don't mind!

Edited by Maddy1270 - 13 years ago

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Paramjit

@Paramjit

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#745

Wow Smita that was a super duper update loved it. Loved the women teasing Arnav and his desperation to be alone with Khushi hehe. Its going to be really interesting to see how the two are intimate with each other. Khushi who will be breathing really heavy and shy at the same time. Wonder what Arnav has in store.l

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Dneha

@Dneha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#746

i will comment after i change.. i am just back from a wedding... Arnav and khushi's shaadi...it was wonderful..

haaa the big fat Indian wedding... its a bliss..

no photo of Anandji today???😳.. i love him...

such a light hearted update...impatient Arnav and innocent ( or should I say stupid?? Adrak wali chai!!! really???) Khushi...

love it love it love it...

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cherry227

@cherry227

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Posted: 13 years ago

#747

superb! just loved it... totally :)))

you're a magician 👍🏼 the way you've made every small occasion so special and sweet with your writing is fabulous... every emotion every feeling is on display through your fantastic writing :)))

Mamaji & NK cried foul. Arnav smirked. Anand smiled. Anjali and the other ladies almost died laughing. Akash stared stupefied at Arnav. Payal giggled. Khushi blushed redder than a ripe tomato, her face matching the rich crimson hue of her wedding dress.

"Nannav, you are putting us to shame! Yeh roka he! Roka he!" 🤣

im totally loving this arnav and khushi and everyone actually! their reactions and expressions to arnavs impatience are too good! arnavs determination to get khushi alone is 👏 he doesnt mind losing the ring to her or money to his saalis 😆 truly focussed!!!

please update soon... this ff brings a smile to my face 😊