FF: Living Without You: 4: Part 59 (Last) Updated

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nims6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

haldi was real fun...nk and his antic...i love him...and arnav 's naughty thoughts..anjali anand bike ride everything was perfect...how could you manage everything...i loved it..

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cheval

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

very very nice plz pm me for new update thank you

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-daffodils-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

AWWW...even arnav hadnt did any thing on khushi...just his naughty thots gave us a tickling effect...n the dailogue by Anjali that... Next time, I will wear a suit...

and Anands sudden smile...all are giving us many silent msgs...ie Anjali want his presence...n when her hands which is rested on his shoulders... shifted its position to his waist...we can find the comfort she is enjoying with him...how can u convey such large meaning thru such short words...?????????...really... wonderful...

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dhahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

very nice update...

poor arnav.. how long can he wait?

he s gonna pay bak nicely to khushi...

LOL...

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Becs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#525

oh so emotional and very beautiful.

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Manitaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#526

wow! what a beautiful update.. from naughty to hot and emotional all in one update..

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shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

another fabulous chapter...needless to say that i loved it...kudos to you for churning out such amazing pieces on a regular basis...😊

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#528

Smita, a very emotional and poignant update... loved how you juxtaposed joy and sorrow so well, with neither scene seeming out of place or contrived!

all the ladies going gaga over the raizada boys was realistic, especially the matchmaking! for a change nk managed to be the centre of attraction, with even laxmi chasing him 😃

arnav standing mesmerised at khushi's beauty and then imagining plastering her with the haldi was just breathtakingly sensual! for a moment there, I thought he was imagining her sans her lehenga-choli 😉! glad to know this wasn't so! but am sure the cold water emptied by the ladies over him must have done the job of a cold shower 😳!

anand is almost a saint but that is who anjali needs now to get her confidence back! the hospital scene was heart-rending... that mother could at least die in peace! nice of anjali to start making decisions for herself!

on a different note: my mom almost did a jig when I mentioned to her that you had killed shyam off in your story... she hopes the same would happen in the show, too, soon 🤣! she hates his guts and can't stand the sight of him!