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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: someone_special

supar intro...wait 4 part1

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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: GhunchaluvsSuKk

Nice update Tama...

jaldi se next part update kar...πŸ˜› main wait nhi kar paa rhi hun...
I loved the treaser also... beautiful... great job dear...
keep rocking...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: adeela786

superrrb start...and loved d teaser sooo much...
interesting intro...
continue soon...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

as me promised here the part1...as longgg dears u wanted...

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Part1:

After 2 years …

Kumkum was 15 now n Sumit was 10 ..

In Kumkum in laws house members were eles Sumit n Kumkum …Sumit's father BrijBhusan…n Sumit's six Bothers Pulkit, Vishal, Abhay, Salil, Manik & Ratan as ther much older than them Sumit was 10 years younger than his last elder brother Ratan..Kumkum also younger than her…

Nothing with others….Kumkum was relaxed now… no one forced her in anything…all went quite perfect… Within few years nothing happened..else Kumkum and Sumit's relation develop a lot… They shared everything to each other…they more like Friends…Kumkum knew his was too young but she loved Sumit a lot as her husband..he was her life..her soul..her god..her savior…Sumit also loved her a lot at the young age ..he knew that Kumkum was his wife..he respect her a lot that's why he tried what may he could give her.. Sumit teaches Kumkum sign her name ..and quite in reading…Kumkum had to do lots of household works as she was the only female member of that family…many time Sumit tried to help her..if anyother of family mem saw that..he got scold from therm..Kumkum also aksed him not to do that…but he not like that her 24*7 hours work..as he knew she also need some rest for her…also at dinner n lunch time he always denied to take his with them always gave some Bahanas and take his meal with Kumkum…at that age he knew that Kumkum will get just minimum food that he don't like..he shared his food with him..and forced her to have that..many time when he return from school he brought gift for her like Gajra ..Jaledis..Sketch pens..whatever that depend on his pocket money.. when Sumit was done great in his village school…n whatever he lean..after going home teach that Kumkum..Kumkum was a great learner..she so quickly pick up the thing what may Sumit teach her…Kumkum loved to do painting…Sumit is the main critics of her Study n paintings….

But that year is last one that school base they have only 4th std on their village…as Kumkum's in laws not that poor to not to bear his study farther ..she thought good for Sumit…she went to talk to her FIL…

K: "Bauji appse unke ware main baat karna tha…"

Kumkum's FIl Brij: "Kiske ware main…"

K: "Ji ..Sumit…"

B: "Bol…"

K: "Unka school khatam ho gaya hai…par who accha hai padai main unhe age padne dijiye na…"

B: "Padai karna main karcha lagta hai…tu degi…???"

K: "Mere paas to kuch jayada nehi hai…par jo bhi hai mere paas dungi..unhe age padene dijiye…who naam karenge…"

B: "Thik hai…use jan kidhar jana hai kya panda hai…"

Kumkum was too happy to notice any other thing…They all agreed to go for Sumit's High school admission to Delhi ….Kumkum gave that news to Sumit..n Sumit also sooo Happy…1st time Sumit Hug Kumkum sooo tight ..n Kissed her on cheek…

S: "Thanks meri Biwi…"

Kumkum just gave him a very warm smiled…soon Sumit's departure date was coming…Kumkum done all packing 4 him..as he had no problem with the necessaries things…But Kumkum was quite upset..as she'll miss him..n only he was soo close to her…without any fear ..she shares each n every details with him…as Sumit also upset..he also attached with kumkum with in these years…she cared about his each n everything… he also didn't want to go away from Kumkum…but He knew that no one would be agree with him ..and also as he was the youngest member of the family he can't force anyone...He also became Sad..when he had to go…but when Sumit about to go Kumkum didn't came for wish him good bye…Sumit said to his father that he want to meet Kumkum for bye…when he came to their room…saw that Kumkum in tears clutched his one cloth to her..Sumit came n Sat next to her…

S: "Tu mereko chodne bhi nehi jayegi..??"

K: "Nehi…"nodded for big NOOO….

S: "Kyu…??"

K: " Main tujhe jata huya nehi dekh sakti…"

S: "Par tune hi to baba se bol ke meri padai puri karni ki baat ki thi na.. .."

K: "Haan…who to tere achhai ke liye na…par tere wagar raha nehi jayega…"

She hugged him n cried..

Sumit Big brother Pulkit came n saw them hugging each other…

P: "Natak khatam kar jaldi chal bus tere liye baytha nehi rahega…"

Kumkum straight herself…

K: "Tu ja…aur sun ache se padai karna…thik hai…."

S: "Tu na appna khayal rakhna…"

K: "Haan tu bhi rakna…sun tere pasand ki sab dal di hai…"

P: "Chal jaldi chal…"

Sumit went but again came n kissed her check…

S: "I'll Miss U lot….."

And again ran to his bro's…Kumkum came to the her room door..not had crouge to go main door…she already miss him..his care …Sumit waved his hand till kumkum not disappeared from his view…Kumkum did the same…tears continuous flowing from her eyes..but she knew she had to do that from his good..for his bright future…

That day KumSum sapareted to each other….

Day after night Sumit's father n his tow big bro came back from Sumit's admission trip…Kumkum make reday dinner n served to them her FIL n Six Brothers of Sumit's..

K: "Baoji ..sab ache se huya na…??"

B: " Haan…"

K: " Unhe Hostel mil gaya hai??"

B: " Haan Bola na ek baar…hum sare thak ke aye hai aur iss sirf sawal pe sawal"

K: "Ji.."

B: "Sun khan eke baad meri koti main ana jara…"

K: "Ji…"

After dinner Kumkum cleared the area n kitchen washed dishes..did her daily Routine and then went to her FIL Birj's room…

K: " Baouji... Appne bulaya tha…"

B: " Itni der kyu kiya …??"

K: "Who rasoi saf kar rahi thi…appko kuch chahiye…"

B: "Haan tune bola tha sumit ki bharti main tu tere paas jo hai sab degi…??"

K: " Haan…abhi ayi…"

She rushed to her room n Came back with a small potli..

B: "Kya hai iss main…?"

K: "Baouji..iss meri sari gahne hai…app iss bech ke unke padai pura kijiye…"

She gave that to him…he open that and laughing like a maniac..she looked at him with her confused face…

B: "Yea do chudiyan..ek chain..do jhumke…iss ho jayega Sumit ke padai pura????kya lagta hai tujhe..haan"

K: "Baouji mere paas sirf yea hi hai…aur to kuch nehi hai mere paas deneke liye…"

B: "Hai…"

She get more n more confused….

K: "Kya…??"

B: "Beta… Vishal, Abhay, Pulkit, Salil, Manik, Ratan zara ana mere kamre main…"

All said together..like they were ready for it…they came into room…that moment Brij grabbed her scarf from her shoulder and snatched it away ...and others two hold her hand and laid her on floor… as she tried to remove the grip from her hand again he slapped her so tight that blood oozed out from the corner of her lips... another two hold her legs as tried to stop her continuous kicks…they were strong enough to handle he … she voiced it small…

K: "Chodo mujhe…."

She prayed to them…but they were no mood to listen her pray… warm tears rolled down from her eyes at the anticipation of their intention... she knew her world was coming to an end...her dreams...her life everything wass going to shatter ...Brij came on top her tore her blouse and ghagra…and cruelly said…

B: " Hai na tere paas yea…hume de de tere sumit ki jaan aur padai dono bach jayegi…"

She never in her worse dream think about it that her one sentence they took it wrong like it… "Mere paas jo bhi hai"..she couldn't bear that… She knew they did anything for that…but again tried to save her dignity…but no use..he tore her ..and his sons also one by one snatched everything from her…just satisfied themselves….they just tore her apart..her body..her dreams..her purity…her soul..everything.. she couldn't take it more…she wanted to cameout from their grip..but couldn't..it may easy to living in that moment that embrace the death… slowing slowing darkness covering her version..and she just closed her eyes welcoming the darkness…

plz forgive me...4 any spelling mistake.. next part'll be next monday not this one...πŸ˜†
plzzz

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Tama



Edited by sukklover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
liked ur teaser ...waiting for he frst part ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

liked ur teaser ...waiting for he frst part ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Hira_cute

very nice teaser tama..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome superb and amazing dear want more

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