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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
sumit dad and his brothers all are so kamanay kutay plzz bare my 😑 i really hateee sumit dad and his so called brothers they raped sumit ki kumkum and sumit dad and his brothers have dity minded .
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sumit dad and his brothers all are so kamanay kutay plzz bare my 😑 i really hateee sumit dad and his so called brothers they raped sumit ki kumkum and sumit dad and his brothers have dity minded .

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Posted: 13 years ago

1stly me sooo sorry 4 this too much delay in this update...u know how me just busy with my exam n project...but here the part2...but tooo longgg update dears u wanted.πŸ˜ƒ..

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Part2:

After 13 years…

There was hard knock on the door of Sumit's Home at village…a thin, 20 aged woman with muddy and ripped cloth opened the door..A handsome, tall also 20 aged boy or said man stand at the door…when the door opened..the boy hugged her tight and said

B: "I Miss UUU sooo sooo sooo much Kumkum…"

the woman was just surprised to react anything…she stared at him without blink…the man also surprised about her reaction…he separated from her and looked at her…and again said

B: "Kumkum…"

She just looked at him like he was some alien or he had something which didn't had anyone…she tried to finger out who was he…was he come before to spend night with her…other side the boy looked at her… head to toe…her face looked like pale as there was no life..dark circle around her the beautiful eyes..her hair all ware big mass..her lips looked like dried rose petal..and plus some cut marks near her lip and other buries around her whole face…her dress looked like very old..also muddy..the boy again said

B: "Kumkum…mujhe nehi pahchana…??main tera Sumit…."

He noticed her expression which changed with in every second..Shocked to Surprised to Happy to Sad to Pain…he didn't understand what happened…without more delay he again hugged her…like he Hugged her life…this time She also Hugged him…tight more tight..she missed this warmth so much.. this time he could feel her body was tensed and throbbing against him…he felt his shirt became wet with her tears..she clutched him towards her more tight to crush his bones..like if released him he again will be away from her again..he knew all these year always from him not easy for her without any contact..he knew that here he was only her Shelter who was away from her…how much she missed him ..he knew that..she much mature than him also she attach to him..he knew that..

That was not easy for him also..none knew that but which was Kumkum sketch on floor of kitchen with charcoal he took the impression on a paper ..and each and every drawing of Kumkum's he saved them and stored them his secret place..which also had with him in Delhi…His status on Social Networking Sate always married ..he never looked any other girls..as he knew he belong to only Kumkum..his Kumkum….everyone of his school..collage always made fun about that but he never reacted ..he knew that that was no use..but he loved his Kumkum…all girls there ware loud and artificial..not only by dress.. also heart…But his Kumkum always simple…she was beautiful without any make up…by face as her heart also beautiful more than that…all this years he spend his time to look those papers of kumkum's sketches…he had there two very good brothers who loved him a lot…he also..he always talked them about his Kumkum…but one thing he never understand his family never let him talked to His Kumkum…why..he was her husband…then…every time he called them …and asked them about her and also never allow him to come back home...always they gave excuses..he didn't know why…here today when he met her Kumkum her felt like he again alive…he knew he loved her…but didn't know this much…today he realized that…but here she looked like she was in big mass..why she became so thin..pale..and these scares where they came from…his thought about that …and that very moment someone disturbed their paradise …none else his father and bothers…where they came from ..yea from field…

Kumkum hurriedly free herself from Sumit embrace…Brij looked at Kumkum with angry eyes…like she did something very wrong…then at Sumit…and He noticed that..she looked at Sumit …her eyes ware complaining… asked for help…but Sumit tried to understand why those lovable eyes complaining him…WHY….then Sumit notice their dresses not looked much old…but Kumkum's….he didn't understand anything…but many thought clouded his mind…then Sumit came near to his father and touched his feet and one by one every brothers..Brij looked at him with a Confused face..

S: "Baba…Main Sumit…" He knew that none will be able to recognize him as all met him after long 13 years..

Brij face became pale…as he was upset about Sumit's arrival without any notice..

B: "Tu yahan??? Kisiko bina bataye….??"

S: "Haan…who meri noukri lag gaya hai..6 mahine ho gaya hai…par app log to jab bhi main ana chahat atha to mana kar dete the..iss liye bina bataye chale aya…app sab ko dekhne..app sab se milne ka bohot maan tha…iss liye…"

B: "Thik Hai…par batake ana cahiye tha…." He was absolutely not happy with sumit's sudden arrival…

P: "Kyu re bohot bada ho gaya…"

S: "Nehi bade bhaiya aysa nehi hai…bus app sabse milna aya hoon aur mera tankha bhi dene aya hoon…"

Brij just frustrated about that and out his frustration on Kumkum…looked at Kumkum who looked at Sumit…

B: " Oye Tu yaahan kya kar rahi hai…haan..mardon ko baaten sun rahi hai…ja yeahan se…hum bahar se kam karke aye hai..khana dengi yea nehi haan…yea phir tujhe shikhana padga…" Said all full of anger…

Kumkum just so much scared…she almost run away..from there..Sumit looked at his father with so confusion on his expression..how he behaved with Kumkum…Brij looked at Sumit's face…and tried to cover up his act…

B: "Lugai o ko dabake rakhna chahiye…warna sar pe chad ke nach te hai…."

Sumit not approved that…he just looked his father…his eyes only showed so much anger…and Brij noticed that…thought something….after that all went there room to get freshen up..and sumit also went to his..nope their room…his and Kumkum's…the room was same as he went from there..each and every thing was same and neat and clean…he knew her Kumkum…he smiled as the name of her came again his mind…but when his father's behavior came into his mind the smile of his faded ..was they behaved with her this way???..he kept his all thought a side and went for freshen up as he think that he would asked that to Kumkum…

All set for lunch…Kumkum gave all of them plate and served them food on their plate….as when she served that on Ratan's plate..spoon just slide and some food curry fell on his cloth…he just got furry and raised his hand and almost hit her …she just too scared.and her eyes filled up...and that time Sumit just yelled…

S: "Bhaiyaaa…."

R: "Tujhe koi kam nehi ata kya…humesha kuch na kuch karti rahti hai…pura din hum kam kare…khan bhi thik se nehi de pati hai….ja yehan se…ajj tere khair nehi…" just ignore sumit…

Brij noticed the changes in Sumit…he just kept Ratan quite…

B: "Ratan…chup karke baith.."

K: "Woh…woh….mujhe maff kar dijiye…"Her voice chocked in fear..

B: "Tu phir se bol rahi hai…main baat kar raha hoon na…ja yehan se…"

Sumit could take it more…his life's insult this much…he just put plate aside and went from their without having food…came to room..sat there quitly…here Brij.

B: "Khana khane ke baad sab mere kamre main ana…"

After everyone's completed food…Kumkum cleaned all stuff…then arranged the some food which left for her on plate and came to their room…and sat beside Sumit…woh sat on bed kept his head between his hands…

K: "Kha lijiye…"

Sumit raised his face towards her..looked straight to her eyes…which ware filled up with tears…but showed so much respect and love for him…he hugged her…

S: "I'm sorry…."

Kumkum didn't know what to say …without his any fault why he said sorry to her…in this her life none said her …then why he….

K: "App mujh se mafi kyu mang rahe hoon appne kya kiya hai??"

S: "Kiya na itne saalon main ek baar bhi tujhe dekhne nehi aya….un logo ne mana kiya ..par mujhe ana chahiye tha…mujhe janna chahiye tha…tu kyasa hai?? Unlog tere sath kya karta Ihai..main jannata hoon unhe…who log tere sath kyase pesh ata hai who jaana chahiye tha…"

Kumkum made him looked towards her…

K: "Appne koi galti nehi ki…who to mere hath se khana gir gayi…na…galti to meri hai.."

As she didn't want Sumit to know anything…which situation she went through.. she didn't want to put her life Sumit in danger..as she knew if he knew that fact he must went against and her in-laws may kill Sumit…she didn't want that…

K: "Ayse koi khana chod ke ate hai…kha lijiye na…"

She again put the plate in front of Sumit…

S: "Tune khaya??"

Kumkum nodded for no…

K: "Appne khaya nehi to main kyase khau…"

S: "Tu nehi badla…bus wose hi hai…meri Biwi…"

K: "Bus halat..waqt badal gaya…"

S: "Matlab…???"

K: "Kuch nehi kha lijiye…"

S: "Tu mujhe tum se App kyu bula rahi hai..??"

K: "Boli na…app mere pati hai to.."

S: "Sun…"

K: "Baad main pahle khana…"

She put some curry on rice..and held that in front of his mouth..he ate that..but when he took that his mouth his teeth slightly touched Kumkum's finger and she just winch in pain…Sumit took her hand and checked what wrong…and saw her most of the fingers were burn…he looked at her…her eyes were moist due to pain…he raised her hand ..and slowly kissed them to take her pain…she just looked at him without blink her lashes…after he took the plate from her hand make her took some food…n he also ate that…

Other hand Brij and his other Six sons in his room..

R: "Bauji appne mujhe roka kyu??ek kanke niche lagana chahiye tha usske londi ke…"

B: "Chup kar Ratan..mujhe kisi aur baat ki fikar ho rahi hai…"

P: "Kya huya bauji…??"

B: "Tune Sumit ko dekha..uska bartav…"

V: "Haan…uss londi ke liyekhna chod ke chalagaya…lagtahai badla nehi…jab delhi gayatab bhi jaysa tha…ajj bhi hai…"

M: "Sale ne sab ka nak kat diya… biwi ke punch banke gumta hai…"

B: "Tum log kuch dino uss londi ke paas mat jao…mujhe Sumit ki laksan dekhne doon…"

A: "Kya Bapu hum kyase raheenge..??"

S: "Haan bapu…"

B: "Beton…kuch pane ke liye Kuch to khona padta hai na…Diraj rakkho sab thik hi hoga…aur wase bhi yea Sumit yea jayda din nehi ruknewala hai…samjhe…to ab kuch din aram karne do londi ko…phir to pura humara hi hai…."

All together laughed like showing all cruelty….

Here @ KumSum's Room…

S: "Tujhe Laga kyase..?"

K: "Who bus khana banate waqt lag gaya…"

S: "Dhyan kaha rahta hai tera…"

Kumkum's thought going somewhere… during Sumit aksed Kumkum so many questions…but Kumkum didn't answer any of them…then jerk her slowly…Kumkum looked at him sacredly…

S: "Kya huya…kaha kho gaye hoon…?"

Kumkum just hugged him without said anything…Sumit also hugged her as he knew she just insecure…he had to assure her..he always with her…He slowly cared her hair…

S: "Mujhe bohot Miss kiya na…??"

K: "Hmmm"

Kumkum nodded in positively ….

S: "Sun…mujhe tere se kam hai…?"

Kumkum just looked at him…

K: "Kya…??"Said in very low tone…

S: "Ruk abhi aya…"

He just got up from bed..n open his bag…n took out some papers from there…n hand over to Kumkum…

K: "Yea kya hai..??"

S: "Hai kuch..signature kar de…"

Without read that Kumkum did that…Sumit looked her amazed…how she just believed him soo much…

S: "Tune sach main pada nehi…?Tujhe padana to ata hai phie bhi.."

K: "Haan..par mujhe app main pura varosa hai…"

S: "Tu sach nehi badli…thik hai iss ke pura kam hone baad bataungi…"

He put all papers safe place..and took her in his arms…

S: "Shubha se bohot kam kar chuki hai..abhi aram kar…"

He slowly caresses her hair and she slowly closed her eyes..and slept in his caring arms..after lots of year she slept peacefully…without any torture…Sumit placed her on bed carefully without disturb in her sleep…and himself laid beside her…and caresses her hair…she held his hand with hers…both going to sleep…without notice some watching them…and boiling in anger…at midnight Kumkum murmured something in her sleep and twisting on bed…Sumit woke up after hearing that Kumkum said something but didn't understand what she saying…and noticed that she moan felt like she was in pain..but he didn't understand satnd what happened… he again caresses her face and hair ..she again slept…Sumit thought that she may think he again went away from her that's why she mummer…he brought her into his embrace ..and made sure she may feel her that he beside her….he kissed her forehead and slept ….after many year two souls peacefully with each other ..but fate played big game with them…they suffered so much but god wanted to they may suffer much…he just not satisfied with only this…he wanted more…

At morning Sumit's phone buzzing continuously…he answer the call…and went to get ready as fast as possible…he got ready to leave…and watch his sleeping beauty lovingly..he wanted to say her good bye but don't want to disturb her sleep as he knew she can't sleep properly …he write a note for her..and leave from there…after some time Kumkum opened her eyes…but don't found Sumit…But noticed that note…she just grab it from the table and started read that…

My Kumkum…

Shubha shubha mujhe dundha rahi hoon na…yea soch rahi hoon ki who sawpna tha….ki main tumare paas tha…tum mere bahoon main the…nehi Kumkum…who sawpa nehi tha..woh to humara pyar ka pal tha…kya bat um yea soh rahe hoon main tumhe phir se hod ke chala aya …haina…. Nehi…. Kumkum aysa nehi hai….bus subha subha ek jaroori call aya ..aur mujhe ana pada delhi…but tum daro mat…do din baad main uha pouch jaunga…bus delhi pouchu aur kam khatam karu…phir bus bhag ke tumhare paas chala jau…mere intezar karna ..thik hai…aur plzz gussa mat karna ki tumhe bye nehi bolke ayi…bus tumhare nind ko disturb nehi karna chahta tha bus..itni si baat thi….sachhi…chalo main chalta hoon..warna Bus chot jayega…bye

Sumit…

Kumkum just read it…and her lip slowly craved to smile through her tears as she felt how well Sumit knew her everything also after this long separation….her Sumit was not changing a single bit …Sumit just wrote that latter like he talked to her face to face…she smiled in that thought someone in this world cared for her..only her…but her happy time only very short life…Salil just entered her room with a bang on door…and harshly pulled towards Brij's room by clucking her hair…

B: "Bohot maza aya kal tere ko haan…"

Kumkum just horrified…don't know how to react…

B: "Kya huya…usska maan nehi bara paya..subha subha nikal liya…haan.."

All just laugh loud.. kumkum just felt disgusting ….

B: "Chal abhi hume maza dede…"

All grub her like hungry loins…. She just cried loud…again she broke down to fill their hunger…

Other side..Sumit done his work without went Delhi…and he just though to go home and gave another surprise to her..and he brought some flowers for her…and with happy mood went to his home where his love waiting for him..but when reach house the door was closed…he knocked many times but no one answer..but he heard some sounds…and he just broke the door..but couldn't find anything…again he heard that sound and went towards that…and his happiness vanished into thin air…he just numb at that side after witness of that scene ……his world just crushed down…

that's it for now...uff...mere hath main dard ho raha hai...1st time me wrote this much...just ignore spelling n gramatical mistakes ok dears...just feel it...but plzzz

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How can people be soo disgusting ?! Ugh..
Poor Kumkum, Poor Sumit ! Update soon !

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