Living Without You: 3: Link to Thread 4 (Part 41)

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

"I enjoyed playing with you. We
should do this more often.", he
whispered in her ear.

Yeah, you should!
Nodding head in understanding. . . .

Beautiful update, Smi. . . . . :)

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

wow, loved the update... arnav really reminds me of the spider inviting the fly into his parlour! the whole scene was mind-blowing: my mind was on its own trip 😉 while reading of khushi with her hands all over arnav! I must say I found these lines highly suggestive: she finally managed to get her hand into his pocket. She found a hard object in it. It was wrapped in gift paper. She pulled it out with a cry of victory. He smiled. 😃 that must be the problem of my highly overactive imagination, not necessarily meant as such by you!

"I enjoyed playing with you. We should do this more often.", he whispered in her ear. can't wait for more such innovative games thought up by arnav... he knows his khushi very well: she'll never back off from a challenge!

can't comment enough about your writing style...you really know how to evoke images with your words... it is almost like watching a movie, it is that real!