D3 in shivani's style is back! - Page 11

Amazing Update.

plz note : this part 2 of epi 7

Next day at atrium…(swayum,vishakha,amar&bharat are frenz..neha also knows them)

K: hii guyzz

Sw: so finally u r sure ke tumhe team banni hai!!

V: ya man think…

K: maine sooch liya..

Swayum thinks tumne soocha hai ya..rey ne tumhare dimag me ye baat dali hai..

N: toh chale RDX sir ke paas registration ke liye?!?

Sw: aab karna hi hai toh daarri kyu??

Team weakling(team w) walks towards RDX's cabin..while team dazzilling(team D )is already there

RDX: ookkkaaayyy so aur koi team nahi bani??

Sh: sir, humare alva yeh coll mein koi team nahi ban sakti

Sw: soorryy Sharon iss bar tum galt ho… tumhari aur mere team ke alva aur koi team nahi hai..

teamD shocked leaving rey..he sighed in relif & was similing at kria…kria also smiled back…vicky hits rey from back..as he saw rey was smiling

RDX: so finally I got two teams…your team's name is..??

Sw: team...

Sh: huh…team!!

K: team weakling

At nite, vicky's house..Thing thong…thing thong…Vicky opens the door for rey…

V: aa gaya tu??!!

R: haan toh tere ko chod ke aur kidhar jata?

They go in,in the hall..

R: hiie aunty!!

V's mum : hiiieee…kaisa hai?

R:dekho aunty ..(Opens his arms) jaisa tha waise hi hun..

V: nahi maa badl gaya hai…jab se who..rey stops him from speaking by covering his mouth

V's mum: rey…who ka matlab koi ladki toh nahi???

R:nahi aunty aiisa kuch nahi hai agar hoga toh sab se pelhe aapko hi bolunga..they started towards vicky's room ..

V's mum : kahan khaye ga na??

R: haan aunty!!

V: swayum kyu nahi aaya??????

R: who nil ,bharat aur amar ko leke aa raha hai..

V: thik hai…waise aaj maine who..ladki..

R: ladki???????

Nil:ladki?...swayum,bharat,nil&amar enters

Sw : rey tu aur ladki..(similing)

Booyzz..leaving Vicky:ooo…hhmmm ladki ke bare main tu thik nahi samja batna????????

R: aarre Vicky ne kaha ladki..

V: haan..woh swayum..tere teammein ladki haina..

Bh : vishakha???woh toh meri..hai..shows him a punch..

Amar: holding bharat : nahi..woh kria ki baat kar raha hai?!?!?

R: kria…vicky tuje kria pasand hai..

V: arre baba nahi..woh neha..bharat & rey sigh in relive..

Boyz: NEHA???

V: Haan jab se usse dekha hai tab se swimming pool main ghir raha hun…!!

At kria's house

K: maa mere dad kaun hai..??

K's mum: kitni baar puccho gi?

K: aaj baata do…

K's mum is now frustrated..: haan suna hai na toh suno tumhare dad…

Suspense…to know more wait till tom!!

Precap: kria knows about her dad

Suggestions ,complains& feedback is welcomed..hope this length is enough….

Res

unres

both d parts were awesome

Luvd it:):)

Waiting for d next part:):)

congrats for becoming groupbie...

Loved reyam convo..

nice updates...

Awesome...
wow boys already friends hai nice
eagerly waiting for the next part

Luvd both ur updates Shivu ( if I may call u so) boyz ka bonding superb hai aur ReYam ka rishta special - well luking forward to Kria knowing abt her dad & how itz gonna make a difference in her life 😊

each and every dialogue was perfect
reyam convo was amazing
ricky rocks as always
loved both the part
it was amazing