OS : The Knife's Edge Part 2 on Pg. 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

That was pure intense seduction, passion and love all rolled into one. I held my breath all the was through!! Just amazing😉

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sarra0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Great conclusion, wat passion and intensity.

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abavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

brilliantly written. I am amazed at how you have played with words to describe the passion! it is very difficult to write in this genre and you have done it with ease

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

awesome beautifully done loved it thanks for the pm

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desisweetheart9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Thanks for the PM. Amazing update. So beautiful. Loved how Khushi said she might bite.

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Amazing Piece Of Writing 😳

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shazeena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

wowww simply superb!!!!!!!! loved it!!!

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Saima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Once again, u have blown us away. I love your description of Arnav, of Khushi and of their lie. Great job! Keep it up!

P.S. You should become a writer. :)