ArHi - Kaisa Ye - Part 10-3Pg 51 - 08-21-12 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its amazing loved it
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Originally posted by: rkapoor1382

Wow its very interesting...
Looking forward to it...
Do continue.



I hope I won't disappoint you...

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It's intresting! Nice Uptade!
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Originally posted by: srahs

its amazing loved it
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Thank you so much... It mean a-lot to me.

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I just wanted to take few minute in thanking those people who have press like button/and some left replies behind too...

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Hello Everyone! Gosh! I didn't know I would get that much response. It means a-lot to me and the encouragement builds up my confidence. Thank you, deeply from my heart. I know many are having problems with the characters and the sketch...

alright. Arnav is 27 (currently, but the story begins in the past and his age at that moment is 23) and Khushi is 17 (currently, but the story itself begins in the past and her age at the that moment is 13) I hope that help and many of you requested that I use different fonts in breaking the past and present...

right!

Legend of the fonts... "Light Pink" means "extra info in brackets or song playing in the background or heading of Scene"

"Medium Purple" means "I am writing in the past"

"Violent Purple" means "It's in the present"

If there is more changes in the color coats than I'll let you know.



Part 2

Raizada Guest House

Arnav return to his guest house in Smilia and take quick shower. While taking a shower he close his eyes (imagine keep on flashing in his mind and if you haven't took wild guess than its Khushi) he can't forget her rosy lip, shiny almond eyes sprinkling of excitement and water teasing her body. He just wanted to lick those water drops of her body and rip her clothes off and take her at that moment. He open his eyes "I need to have her before anyone else. ASR only wants the best and if someone tries touching that he destroy them himself" he smirked.

Gupta Resident

Khushi sitting on the kitchen counter-top munching on apple and talking with her Bhabhi.

Kripa notice the quietness of Khushi and she usually isn't quiet. Always talking or getting herself into trouble. Kripa decide to break the ice of quietness "what happen to my Angel today? Is everything alright? I've notice after your return from school you have been quiet?" Khushi look at her Bhabhi.

Khushi: Nothing, school was fine

Kripa: if school was alright than why are you upset

Khushi: Why shouldn't I be upset? Everyone enjoy lying to me.

Kripa: What do you mean about people lying to you?

Khushi: I mean you and Bhai lied to me.

Kripa: About what?

Khushi: Bro, said that very soon a baby is coming into our house than where is the baby and why isn't it here yet.

Kripa laugh at Khushi's innocent "why are you laughing at me" Khushi asked. Kripa wash her hand and cupped Khushi's face "Angel.. me and your brother haven't lied to you about the baby. Its going to come in few months"

Khushi: What do you mean in few months? Why not know?

Kripa: Because at the moment, the baby is growing inside my tummy and once its full grown than it will come.

Khushi jump off the counter-top "you mean the baby is inside your tummy" Kripa nod her head "can it hear me" Kripa again nod her head "can I talk with it and what is my relation with the baby"

Kripa: You can talk with the baby and your relation with it is up to you. If you want to be called as the baby's Bau or Masi because I never thought a difference between Dakash and you. You have always been my younger sister, my daughter and my best friend.

Khushi lean down beside Kripa's stomach and place her head on it "Hi Baby, if you can hear me than I am your Masi because I've always considered your mother as my sister. You are extremely lucky to have mother and father because some aren't and you should be proud. Promise me that you'll never leave your mother or me. I am waiting for your arrival. So grow quickly and come soon into our home. Love you Baby" Khushi kiss Kripa's stomach and disappear into her room.

Kripa had tears in her eyes. She never realize the empties in Khushi's life regarding her mother and decide to have chat with her husband once he return. She wipe her tears and continue cooking dinner.

Guest House of Raizada

Arnav's servant serve him dinner. Arnav quietly had his dinner before calling home. He hates calling home, but if he doesn't than his family always calling at wrong times and he hates that.

Arnav: Hello, Hari Prakash Is Dad near by?

HP: Arnav Sir, Kavya Sir is out at the moment, but Panchi madam is here. Would you wish to speak with her?

Arnav: Yes

Hari Prakash gave phone to Arnav's mother"Hi Beta, how are you and when do you plan to return?"

Arnav: I am doing fine Mom and will be returning soon. Why do you ask?

Panchi: Beta, if you are done your business meetings than can you please on the behalf of me and your Dad attend dear friend of mine's wedding.

Arnav: Mom, you know I hate these type of celebration. Please don't force me.

Panchi:I know you hate wedding and attending those type of celebration, but their family have been with us in our difficult moments. I hope you understand.

Arnav: I guess they might have helped us in our difficult moments in life, but I can not force myself into attending something that irritates me. I am sorry Mom.

Panchi: Fine! You just sit back and watch them make false accusation on our family's reputation and you know the media are looking for gossips lately.

Arnav's thoughts: I know if I disagree Mom is always going to rub it into my face. Its better if I just attend the silly event and leave quick.

Arnav agreed to his mother and chatted with his sister before hanging up the phone. He stood up and stare out his window.

Gupta Resident

Kripa begin serving dinner to her husband (Rudra) and feed Khushi with her own hands (Khushi always enjoy eating out of her Bhabhi's hand as if a mother is feeding her child. She always try to show her happiness around other, but inside she is very lonely in the search of her mother's warmth) before having her dinner. Rudra notice sudden quietness around the dinner "why isn't anyone saying anything? Is everything alright Kripa and Angel? How was school?"

Kripa: Rudra, everything is alright. Just (she look at Khushi who lower her head) Angel is upset about her struggle in Math.

Rudra: Aah! So my Angel is upset because Math is troubling her.

Khushi just nod her head...

Rudra: No problem, dear. Bhai, himself is going to teach you the basic of Math and together we'll master it. Sounds good!

Khushi again nods her head...

Rudra knew something isn't right and watch her sister leave after finishing her desert and stare at his wife.

Kripa sighs "tomorrow her school is having parent's teacher conference and she's" avoid looking into her husband's eyes "feeling lonely about the empties in her life" the word empties caught Rudra's ear.

Rudra: What are you trying to say? I am not filling the empties in my sister's life. You are saying I am failing in my responsibilities and now you are doubting that if i'll be good father or not.

Rudra left.

Kripa knew she had hurt Rudra deeply, but the mother inside her saw the empties in her Angel's eyes when she spoke to the baby. Kripa wipe her tears and made her way toward her bedroom and saw her husband standing outside the balcony. She place her hand on top of his shoulder "Rudr, I've never stated the fact about your responsibilities toward Angel or me; but today I've notice Angel is suffering from loneliness and I am afraid she might capture herself in depression" Rudra stare at his wife and her words echo in his ears.

Kripa: If you aren't ready to express yourself after our marriage than I'll understand that our trust somewhere is lacking. Take your time and I'll wait for the moment you decide to speak the emotions hidden behind your anger.

Rudra sighs "I saw Mom stabbing Dad with my own eyes" Kripa stop walking and stood frozen by her husband's sudden confession.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you so much... 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww, Khushi Seems SO Innocent 😳
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Loved the update!!😃 Love Khushi and Kripa's relationship!!❤️ Cant wait till the next update!! Thanks for the pm and please do pm me when you update!😃
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Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Awww, Khushi Seems SO Innocent 😳



Innocent as pure Angel from heaven.

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Originally posted by: DaMiniii

Loved the update!!😃 Love Khushi and Kripa's relationship!!❤️ Cant wait till the next update!! Thanks for the pm and please do pm me when you update!😃



I personally adore the relation Kripa and Khushi share. It's pure reflection of their understanding and bond. And please don't request me, but command me into messaging you.

Love Misti

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