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Posted: 13 years ago

at last u made it...u made arnav enter her...and that u made him realize that it was her first time...man he is being so cruel to her...poor soul khushi...will she be able to be happy after she knows the truth..and will he be the same cruel towards her...damn ASR...

But that will be awesome if he changes and repents for what he did...but usee these two characters r close to our heart thats y its hard to acccept the reality...😉 Hope it will get better soon... Chheerz gfor ur work...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: srahs

amazing update.
at last in chapter 8 he did it to her.
but still he.forced himself on her
poo khushi really felt bad for her.
arnav was too cruel and harsh to her
now he need to save khushi from shyamwa.
snakwa is alert now he can misuse her.
poor khushi will nt be able to face her mother
i reall felt bad for her.
when truth will come out arnav will repent and regret it alot but then he has to woo her and it will be hard for him to get her back.
bp its really tough for u to maintain difference btwn kidnap nd Rakhshash.
do keep this in mind.
well i felt good and this was different frm Rakhshas arnav too that arnav felt concern for her after seeing her crying like this, then her blood, and then how she fainted but its strange duh ASR nd concern. hahaha

well i knw its not right to compare two of ur works but i don't want readers to complain both are same so its very hatd for u to maintain difference

it is quite different u'll see it soon... enjoy reading dear... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
And yeah...I read ur Rakshas also...at the end it was happy..but in that he has forced her to stay with him by house arresting her,...but in this WILL we see it in a different way...?
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of, I am loving this story.
I love it just the way you write it.
It's your story, write it the way you want.
And yes reality IS way worse than this fiction.
Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Yay Arnav is finaly feeling concern for Khushi and is fighting it as always.
I am loving this gradual progression in the story.
Continue soon.
Thanks.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Such cruelty.. When he learns the truth he'll really beat himself up over all this.. Poor Khushi..
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!! he did it!! Khushi's going to be shattered.. And Arnav's going to repent big time.. I just hope he takes care of her atleast..
Regarding the note: its okay dear.. I understand.. Its what the story demands.. We have to do it..
Please continue.. Waiting for the next one.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg omg will she able to recover...oh god i know u r right in real lifr reality is way harsher...but still poor soul not evn 18 ... main thing she didnt want it ... oh she wont b able to forget it... arnav is doing all this in anger and wld repent later.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesome .
Love hw arnav fighting his emotions. He is concerned !
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Posted: 13 years ago
what ever arnav did ,it is not acceptable as it traumatizes the victim in such a way that their confidence level, their mental condition every thing shatters, but surly i want to get your notice for the writing style or how you narrated the incidence,
beautiful and fabulous, it doesn't look like a rape.
loved the way you narrated your story.
thanks for the update.
waiting eagerly for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor kushi...sad for her...
Hope.arnav gradually treat her rite...

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