Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#1071

Great update the sexual tension is getting real bad cant wait to see how he handles it

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pere

@pere

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#1072

Story is progressing so well! You are writing so well! Love how the flashbacks and present are connected

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#1073

I am loving every line of this update and enjoying the characters so much...Please ignore the bashers and continue this wonderful story without wasting any thoughts on them.

Love Arnav's awakening to Khushi as a desirable woman. Please give us some idea of whether Khushi is noticing that he is acting strange. In chapter eleven, she was still thinking that she will eliminate the part of her that loves him and trying to learn to live with her unrequited love and accept that he does not see her in that light.

He has led quite a life in the last eleven years. The mother daughter duo were very interesting and risque ( in a good reading way ).

The sexual tension description were...well you know...I had a silly grin on my face the whole time😳

More...More...Please.

Edited by Anamika100 - 13 years ago

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hodan1987

@hodan1987

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1074

I am loving this story so far…great job.

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1075

awesome awesome awesome chapter beautifully written loved it

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1076

awesome update

too hot!!!!!! even if it was only Arnav thinking about what he wants to do with Khushi.

I wish they would just get together.

Arnav she is not a child, she is an adult, a woman, please get off this stupid belief that she is your ward.

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sheks007

@sheks007

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#1077

god read everything in one go...its ...what...fanatabulosly awesome and addicting rather more addicting than pistachios...i mean did you try eating only one pistachio...plz update soon...

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1078

Seriously guys you both are rocking with this FF. I admire the way u both have written each & every word with lot of powerful dialogues even it was only from Arnav's POV.

Arnav's desire towards Khushi was very well written but if only he can realize what is his feelings are towards her. I hope the moment he understood his feelings it will not b too late for him to claim his Khushi.

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1079

Oh Arnav, I am gong to hit you!
Like, she said she loves you! What more do you want?
Poor girl wants some affection back, and when you've finally developed feelings for her, you don't act on them, like she wants.

*shakes head* Men

Great update you guys!

Yuks