you are mine only mine my BAATCUTTER!#thread 2#

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#541

super romantic,awesome,mind blowing...nd so on...
pls update soon...
pm me whn u update

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

super awesome..

read it all in a go..update soon n pm me too

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#543

grt story...love it totally Pls update it soon nd pm me too!!
amazing storyline!! very unique!

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--Nishi--

@--Nishi--

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#544

Hey i know its been a long time since i updated.Amrutha this update is for u:)

Early Morning

Sun rays hits kria's face so she stirs in her sleep and a pout was fixed on her face
By her moving continuously rey woke up and was enjoying the beauty infront of him in his arms.She was hidding herself in his arms to avoid the sun rays.He smiled and pulled her more towards him and kissed her forehead,By the touch of his lips a small smile crept on her face
and slowly she opened her eyes

Kria:Good morning rey

"Good morning sweetheart" Rey said moving close to her lips.

She pushed him a bit saying "Rey subah subah?"

"Oye hello thumhe adath dalna padega in chezzon ka especially ye morning kiss ka kyunki shaadi ke baad har subah tumhe muje ek morning kiss dhena hoga.waie bhi mere pass bahut sare list hai kisses ka ..batao ab?ah actually.." He was going on speaking

"Rey!! Chup ho jao!" she said placing her finger on his lips.

The shared an intense eye lock.

"Arey aise kaise chup ho jaun mei?Mei tho kis.." He was acting like a kid.

"Uske bare mei hum baadh mei baath karenge ..Abhi hume jana hai..sab humara wait kar rahe honge." She said getting up from the cot,When he pulled her back with such a force that she banged into him and now he was holding her tightly by her waist.

"Rey chodo koi ajayega" she said trying to free herself.

"Koyi nahi ayega" he said pulling her more into him.

He moved inched forward and maintained his intense gaze on her lips..She expected a kiss and closed her eyes in acceptance..When he moved back and said "Waise am gussa with u!" To which she snapped opened her eyes in Confuse+Surprise

"Yes am not gonna talk to u" He said getting up from the cot and stood facing opposite to her and crossed his arms across his chest and a pout on his face.

"par kyun?" She asked getting up from the cot.

"Kyun?Muje puch rahe ho??Kal raath jo thumne kiya tha woh dance sab ke samne.Aur ye dress dheko!Kaise kapde pehankar nach rahi ho?thum aise kapde sirf mere samne pehan sakthi ho" He said still standing in the same position and complaining like a small kid.

She understood his anger..She went close to him hugged him from back,placed her head on his shoulder and said "Sorry.."

But this time he is angry.

He dint reply anything.

"Sorry na" she said tightening her grip more..

"aise nahin manogi thum" By saying this she came forward facing him

But he was shooking his head in the opposite side.

"Agar mei eyse karun toh manoge kya?" she said hugging him

"nahin" came his firm reply

She pulled back.."Aise karun tho?" She said pecking his cheek.

"Bilkil bhi nahin!" He said sternly

"Agar ...aise ....karungi..." She said moving front and he moving backwards.in this process he hits the wall and she blocked him by placing her hands around his neck moving slow close such that their bodies are in contact..She moved close as if kissing him,He closed his eyes ...she moved close to his ear and whispered "Tho?" and smirked seeing his face..As soon as he heard that he snapped opened his eyes and looked at the kria ghai who had applied her K effect on him .

He smirked back,Now she is confused seeing his smirk.

Before she can think she was on the cot inbetween the cot and him.

"Rey yeh kya kar..." He kissed her fiercely..First she couldnt take the pleasure but later when the kiss turned soft she too joined..He nibbled her lower lip ..After few minutes he broke the kiss and whispered "Agar aisa karun tho manjaunga" He said smirking at her..

"Pakka?" She asked him.

First he couldnt belive that she is saying ,but he too joined and replied "Yeah may be"

Soon he was down and she on top of him.

Before he could speak anything she pressed her lips hard on him and made her way into his mouth nibbling,licking and giving short kisses.

He was moaning her name.

After a long time she backed and saw his flushed face.

"Tho maafi milgayi na?" she said smirking..

"Agar haar baar aise maafi mangungi tho for sure mei dhin mei dhas bar gussa ho jaunga"
He said to which both burst into laughter.

Soon there was a knock the door disturbing their romantic moments.

They stood up and kria was checking herself as if she is rite..when rey saw his state and said "Kya haal kar dhiya kriya thumne mera?kaisa reeyansh ko kaisa bana dhiya.Universe ji agar sirf ek kiss ke liye hi mei aisa ho gaya tho first night ke baad toh kya hoga?" He said

To which she was just blushing.

"Rey chup karo aur jao dhek kar aao kaun aya" she said slightly beating him.

"Ouch!mar kyun rahi ho ja raha hun na.Pata nahin shaadi ke baad kya karogi?" He said rubbing the place where she beat.

"Apko sirf shaadi ki padi hai" She replied

He instantly pulled her with his hand holding her waist tightly.

"Agar haan kahogi tho abhi shaadi karne keliye thayar hun" he whispered

"Rey!" she said blushing.

"Oye hoye meri baatcutter" he said and went to open the door.

As soon as he opened he found the whole gang standing there.

Rey:Guys thum sab yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Vicky:Kya kahu mera bhai!ye swayam haina ye kria ke liye itna protective ho gaya ki usne hume yaha kech kar le aya humne bola ki rey hai na kria ke saath phir bhi woh nahin mana.

Swayam took hold of kria's wrist and handed her to the girls and told them to wait near the car.

Rey was confused seeing this side of swayam.

Swayam:Rey thumne...ah...kuch...kuch nahin hua na raath mei?

He asked stammering.

Vicky,nilesh,amar and bharat raised their hands upwards (As they do in d3 while teasing rey or swayam)

Rey:Guys shut up ! aur swayam nothing happend dude ...and why are...

He was cut by swwayam

Swayam:Ok..Guys chalo chalo chalthe hai!

He said rushing to the car..Rey smelled something strange with swayam.

when he was thinking and walking towards the car ,boys surrounded rey and started asking him questions.

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Vicky:Rey sach bolo na..

Rey :Kaunsa sach?

Nilesh:Arey kal rath kya hua?

Amar:thu

Bharat:Aur kria

Nilesh:Eek saath

Vicky:Eek hi kamre mei.

Boys:HMMM!!!!

Rey:Guys shut up!aur chalo chalthe hai.

Here girls were also teasing kria she was blushing and was just saying only one thing "Kuch nahin guys"

All reached the car rey tried to talk to swayam about his behaviour swayam sensed it and was ignoring rey and his questions.

When all tried to send kriyaansh in one car then swayam said that kria will come in his car and rey will come in the next car.

All were confused seeing his behaviour.

All reached home and were standing outside the house as a group

"Guys hume wapas works pe jana hai" Nicky said sad..

Soon kria's face turned sad about thinking them moving apart.even rey was sad.

Note:everyone stays in mumbai except kriyaansh.kria lives in dehradhun and rey in delhi

"Aur muje dehradhun jana padega" She said to herself which was herd to everyone.

Swayam:thumhe kahin jane ki zaroorath nahi hai.thum aur maa yahi rahogi

Kria:Yay!!!

She squealed in joy

"Aur muje delhi jana hai" Rey sounded low.

all started consoling him..

Rey:guys guys its ok am fine..waise i thought os opening my dance institute in mumbai so i think uske liye muje onw to two months lagega.par i will manage .

Swayam:rey thumhara flight ka time kya hai?

Rey:Night 11 dude..

Swayam:Oh ok...ok guys sab log andhar chalthe hai..chalo!

Swayam is behaving really different

While going in rey pulled swayam aside to the the garden

Rey:Whats the matter?

Swayam:What?

Rey:What was that?

Swayam:What was what?

Rey:Helo mere samna acting karna bandh karo i know you very well..kya hua hai?

Swayam:kiske bare mei baath kar rahe ho?

Rey:Kria...As if u doint know?Come on say it!

Swayam:Aah...woh? actually..

Rey:Actually?

Swayam:yaar patha nahin mei apni behan ke liye protective ho raha hun,muje patha nahin mei aisa kyun behave kar raha hoon par aise ho jatha hai..i dint mean to doubt you ,muje patha hai ki thu kithna acha hai par...u understand rite?

Rey:Hey swayam chill..Eek bhai hoke aise behave karna its common and ok..But dont worry i will take care or ur sister ,i will treat her like angel aur i love her more than my life

Swayam:Sorry yar kuch ghante pehle...

Rey:Its ok buddy

Swayam:really sorry yar muje aise nahin karna chahiye tha

Rey:Dude!!!its ok!!!!...hmmm ok mr.protective bhai can i meet ur sister personally before going?

Swayam:Ofcourse you can!

The smiled and went into the house..

All were sitting in the hall and rey was busy packing his stuff.

In hall all were talking random things about their works life etc etc

But kria was waiting for rey to arrive ..Swayam saw kria's tension

Swayam:Rey upar packing kar raha hai jao ja kar milo..

Kria smiled and went upstairs..

When she reached she found him packing seriously

"Mei help kardhun?" Taking the shirt from his hand.

She started his packing..When she was moving al around the room he was just watching her

As soon as she finished the packing she said "Ho gaya" with a smile.

He hugged her so tightly ,she was shocked by his sudden move but later hugged him back

Kria:Rey?

Rey:Kria i love you..I cant leave you..

She can understand what he was going through.

they broke thair hug but he was holding her by her waist.

"Tho maath jao na" she said with an innocent face.

"Jana padega sweetheart.muje bhi thume chodkar jana acha nahin lag raha hai but i..i promise that i will be back in a month or two" cupping her face.

"Hmmm" she sounded low.

"I Love you" he said pecking her cheek,

"I Love you too" She replied taking his lips into her.

It was a passionate kiss..

After a long passionate kiss they broke apart and smiled.

"Oh god waha jaunga tho taani phirse ayegi" he said annoyed.

"Taani?Woh ladki uski tho mei,,," She was cut by him

"Woah cool down jhansi ki raani" Rey said smiling.

"Rey uss taani se dhoor raho" she said adjusting his collar and a pout on her face.

"Ok madam" he said smiling.

"Agar woh meri kareeb ayi tho?" he asked innocent

"Toh mei waha aungi aur uss ladki ko dheklungi.mere Rey ko pareshaan kartha hai" she was speaking in jhansi ki raani mode.

"Woah mera rey ithna possesive.?" he asked smiling.he was enjoying this

"Haan mei hun possesive!" She said sternly..

"Ok ok" he chuckled

"Chalo na neche chalthe hai "she said pulling him

"Yaha rehkar baath karenge na baatcutter" He said pulling her towards him

Kria:Kya baat karni hai apko?

Rey:Kuch romantic baathe jaise..ya phir baathe kaam aur romance jyadha..

he said inching towards her lips

Kria:aap na kabhi nahin badhloge.

She said pushing him and going down..

he smiled and followed her

hope you people like it

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Thought of updating next part in new thread😃

Edited by kriyaansh_07 - 12 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#545

Yuppiee. . . .
Me first,
me first,
me first. . . .
The update was awsome. . . . . .
Kriyaansh ki romantic start of the morning was too guddd. . . . .
Abb yeh achanak se swayum ko kya ho gaya??
Itna change ussme kaise?? . . . .
Ohh sabb vapas jaa rahe h,
and humere kriyaansh abb alag-alag rahenge. . .
Not fair. . . . . .
Nxt part pls jaldi update krna. . . .
And do pm me wen u update. . . . . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#546

awsome update...
Kriyansh's romanace was 2 gud...
Areey re sab apne ghar ja rahe h aur kriyansh alag ho rahe h...
Do update soon

Edited by kitttu1309. - 12 years ago

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Amrutha

@only_kriyansh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Res
unres
Awww mereliye nishi thank u so much re...love u
ok coming to the updte...
Superb,mast,mindblowin 👏
Kriyaansh ka romance hayeee
rey hv a list of kisses 😆 😆
Kria kissin him 😳
Swayam behaved this way ki i thaught vo villian ban jayega 😲
bt nothing like that phewww!!!
Swayam bhai kya ban gaye...protective hogaya 😉
kria said mat jaho na awww too cute...jana padega swtheart...tooo tooo cute...
Baath kam n romance zyada...hmmm 😳
Totally loved it...
So want nxt updte in nw thread...k nxt part type karke save kariyo... 😉
kyunki tumhe jaldi updte karna padega 😆 😊

Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago