Rules Of Attraction#2 Chapter29 Pg125 19/08

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Each and every word, each and every emotion and each and every touch so perfectly portrayed by Arnav, he is so broken from inside, to find that the only one person made for him is probably not going to live long..to stay with him...to breathe the same air as he does...I can completely understand how painful that realization is.

With every update, you show me how beautifully you can write, Sonalika! You have essentially brought out the realism of such cases, of such people who have to go through all this in reality. Its just magic that weave into the words that you write. This update overwhelmed me, I felt my heart reaching out to this Arnav and Khushi...

Brilliant, just absolutely Brilliant!!!

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SpiI

@SpiI

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Beautiful!!!! I can feel the emotions!!!

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

that was such a heart touching update!

Love this Arnav! Nothing is more importaant than Khushi for him!

Continue soon :)

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LoLo

@LoLo

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

Very emotional, but very moving and romantic at the same time. Just beautiful.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

so very beautiful...have faith...continue soon...

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Love this Arnav a lot. He is so caring & really loves her & I m sure he will save Khushi. Hope everything goes well 4 them & they can have a perfect life ahead.

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

I am so glad Arnav knows about Khushi's disease, it is difficult to come to terms with it however; she now has the strong shoulders of Arnav for support, to help tide through this difficult phase. Arnav is right all the way wanting to take charge, get the best help for Khushi, coming to think of it, she should have told him about it long before, it would have helped her emotionally at least.

Better late than never.

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.Kryptonite.

@.Kryptonite.

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#448

An eerie quiet, calm descended around them, belying the gravity of so catastrophic, a loss.

^^ Those were wonderful lines mishty! I just love how you deviate from both A and K's POV, and depict us this picture of the scene over there, with your words painting us the scenario!

Khushi looked defeated. Arnav has never seen her like that before and at that moment he knew that he wanted it to be the first and the last time ever.

Ahh, this would have hurt so much!

Seasons were changing, waves were crashing and the stars were falling for them. A flickering flame casted a singular shadow, a forewarning, perhaps.

Again,these words are Magic!!

Arnav confessed in terms of words for the first time right?? The whole Chapter was beyond amazing! Arnav failing,yet coping up again after finally gathering his decisions.. US! that was soo Arnav!! I'm not at al surprised!!

I'm so glad i started reading this story Mishty!

With confessions there is no guarantee of a future, Isn't this the reason why K held back!!

Update super soon please!

Prarthana🤗