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tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

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amazin parts..can ya plz add me to ur pm list

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More-than-himM

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

AWWW I WANT A HUBBY LIKE HIM

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

awesome updates loved it that was so cute and beautifully done every chapter making you want more thanks or the pm

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Divya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

Beautiful. Awww Arnav bought KHushi a saari. wow. lovely.

update soon nxt part. =D

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namedx

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I've just caught up with all three of your updates, and what a PLEASURE it was to read!! Uff, you killed me with your description of Arnav showing affection to her fingers!! Beautifully seductive. And his relationship with Khushi and her family is extremely heartfelt!! Loved his gesture of gifting them clothes. Awww their love is truly blossoming!! Loved it Smitar, kudos for all your hard work and efforts! x

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Dneha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

such a beautiful update... n at d end u say something which keeps us hanging and chewing our nails... now what does he want to tell her??? omg... i ll spend ha;f my tym wondering that...

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 13 years ago

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This is a comprehensive comment on the past 2-3 updates.

I've lost track of what belongs to which part, so apologies in advance.

My favourite bit was when he tucked her into bed and held her hand, watching her sleep.

I personally feel there is nothing more beautiful than a man watching over his woman while she sleeps. It brings out these things that are to me so essential in a man--his protective nature watching over her in case a jungle animal should pounce on his beloved, his stamina to stay up past her and be up before her, his patience to watch his lover sleep and not disturb her even when tempted to wake her with a kiss. (Unless he's a stalker and then that's rather creepy!)

The bit about the sweater--oh, so lovely, so tender. I've only recently come to enjoy Garima on the show and that is since I saw some of those scenes between her and Arnav when he went to stay at Gupta House. She was so motherly--without demanding he call her mother.

Er, madam!--what have I told you about posting food pics. I love those diamond shaped cashew thingees. It's embarrassing how many of those I can eat at one sitting.

Another thing: I love that you have Arnav saying things like "will you go out with me tomorrow..." or "will you show me..." or "will you come out with me..." etc

I love it when a man asks, even if it is expected that it will happen. Something so sexy about that.

My favourite bit: no surprise. Just love the erotic promise in that.

"I know you are tired. Don't worry. I will do all the work...", he whispered, his allure increased a hundredfold by the darkness.